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BTLD

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thanks for appreciating .. this is my first time creating adult VN i'm always a fan of adult vn that's why i tried making one though my writing skills are not that good and i'm still learning thanks for your suggestion and feedback :))
Their the MCs half sisters same dad different mothers.
so...planned incest?since I'm guessing nothing happens atm (haven't played it yet)
 

Forgotted

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Great job.
For a suggestion, I would find somebody willing to help correct all of the spelling/grammar mistakes. This will help a lot in the future.
Until then, it's just not very playable simply due to the English. Though you did a better job than I ever could at translating to a second language.
 

BTLD

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Yeah there isn't much with them right now. It's just the two maids that get sex scenes and it's only in the MC's dreams.
mkay
Will probably give it a go tommorow...although I think I would rather have no sex scenes than dream of them if I'm honest
 

akikospam74

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Is that bad? It's just that all the most popular games here are exactly like this.
Depends.. I don't mind if MC fucks every character in the game as long as it's realistic and makes sense in the context of the story

For example, I hate games where the women instantly wanna fuck MC and he basically has to do nothing to accomplish that.. But obviously that's subjective, I'm sure some people like that kind of stuff
 
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YogSothoth1982

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Yeah there isn't much with them right now. It's just the two maids that get sex scenes and it's only in the MC's dreams.
So nothing of interest for now (about sex). I'm not complaining about expecting actual sex scenes if the story is good, for me, the sex dream scenes are absolutely irrelevant (not only this, all dream scenes in all games, in fact, I'd rather they can be skipped to avoid having to hit the skip button).

Posibly I will try the game to see how is the story at now.
 

Rinbael

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So nothing of interest for now (about sex). I'm not complaining about expecting actual sex scenes if the story is good, for me, the sex dream scenes are absolutely irrelevant (not only this, all dream scenes in all games, in fact, I'd rather they can be skipped to avoid having to hit the skip button).

Posibly I will try the game to see how is the story at now.
The dream scene isn't entirely pointless there is some relevance to the plot in it but so far there isn't much story in the game yet.
 
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paust.alex

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So nothing of interest for now (about sex). I'm not complaining about expecting actual sex scenes if the story is good, for me, the sex dream scenes are absolutely irrelevant (not only this, all dream scenes in all games, in fact, I'd rather they can be skipped to avoid having to hit the skip button).

Posibly I will try the game to see how is the story at now.
The problem is that if there is no sex at all, people will complain that there is no sex in porn game. If the MC will have a wife or girlfriend with whom he have sex, people will complain about forced relationships.So, what is left to do besides dreams and fantasies?
 
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zlka112

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I liked it. but too short! Animations are good, the characters are sexy, please a long update as soon as possible
I'll have a few SUGGESTIONS.!
1.incest, pregnancy, variety of character and good story
 

YogSothoth1982

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The problem is that if there is no sex at all, people will complain that there is no sex in porn game. If the MC will have a wife or girlfriend with whom he have sex, people will complain about forced relationships.So, what is left to do besides dreams and fantasies?
For me it is not a problem that scenes of sexual dreams exist. I can use the skip button, and this is all I really need. Is it better if I can avoid seeing them? possibly, but not really necessary.
 

DA22

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The problem is that if there is no sex at all, people will complain that there is no sex in porn game. If the MC will have a wife or girlfriend with whom he have sex, people will complain about forced relationships.So, what is left to do besides dreams and fantasies?
Let the women decide they want to fuck MC for their own reasons? I sometime wonder if nobody on this site went out for a night of fun and ended up in bed with a woman he never met before that same night, without having to pay an amount that she agreed upon beforehand. It does happen you know IRL :p

You only need to give the women some agency plus character and have them do things for their reason instead of only reacting to actions of MC. Now why would a maid that has been trained to serve her master also sexually dive in bed with her new master for her own reasons and would she wait months for that if it is something she likes? Setup is all and yeah if you make every woman a reborn virgin without own motivations it is always hard to find good reasons beyond a mc corrupting them, which takes time if have no pill or secret powers. :p
 

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The problem is that if there is no sex at all, people will complain that there is no sex in porn game. If the MC will have a wife or girlfriend with whom he have sex, people will complain about forced relationships.So, what is left to do besides dreams and fantasies?
i'll take a good logical story with some sex added in over a fuck em all basic story, if i wanted to watch people just fuck for no reason i would watch porn or ask my gf
 

Drakel_Kami1989

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I enjoy this game so far and here is my take. I think the story moves on too fast and does not give the player the chance to feel anything. The beginning half should've at least had a better set up. I didn't care for the break up due to the relationship was not established enough. I did not care about his pay reduction we don't his relation with the boss based on his work ethic it just happens. In addition, later on, it seems like the MC is acting like he got fired which in my opinion would be the better choice of why he is asking his friend for the job. I did not care about the landlord about to evict the MC due to we don't see why the landlord is acting this way and if the MC does deserve what is happening to him. I get it to suppose to show a string of bad luck all at once but it needs to be more developed or you will lose people right away. Also, there is no real decision making at all to feel like the player has control, it feels like a kinetic novel as of right now. The animations, models, environment, and lighting are great but once you revised this story a bit as the updates come in this game will get better.
 
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Soul_less327

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The problem is that if there is no sex at all, people will complain that there is no sex in porn game. If the MC will have a wife or girlfriend with whom he have sex, people will complain about forced relationships.So, what is left to do besides dreams and fantasies?
My problem with dream sex scenes is that they are usually completely pointless to the actual game. They are put in place, as you said, solely to keep the player happy. As far as the story goes, they only really have an effect on the person having the dream. So yes, they may make for nice eye candy but unless they are exposing the MC to feelings about a person that he or she didn't know they had, they aren't moving the plot along because the subject of the dream isn't impacted.

Now, if there is a dream sex scene and we find out that it was say, one of the sisters having the dream, then that would move the plot along because she would be having those feelings that she didn't even know she had.

Just my thoughts.
 
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Is that bad? It's just that all the most popular games here are exactly like this.
Woahhhh, hold on there cowboy! I would be a little more cautios seperating "domination" (using Bailz's own words "when most of them lack any emotion or logic to the story") and story driven games. Eventually, yes, you do transition from fucking a girl to fucking a milf to fucking another girl, but the point is some games use extended and slowly justified plot with likeable characters outside of their physical appeal. Domination games are the opposite to that, it's like watching braindead porn just to empty the balls, instead of keeping your eyes peeled on the story teasing and impactful side character actions.
 
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