I enjoy this game so far and here is my take. I think the story moves on too fast and does not give the player the chance to feel anything. The beginning half should've at least had a better set up. I didn't care for the break up due to the relationship was not established enough. I did not care about his pay reduction we don't his relation with the boss based on his work ethic it just happens. In addition, later on, it seems like the MC is acting like he got fired which in my opinion would be the better choice of why he is asking his friend for the job. I did not care about the landlord about to evict the MC due to we don't see why the landlord is acting this way and if the MC does deserve what is happening to him. I get it to suppose to show a string of bad luck all at once but it needs to be more developed or you will lose people right away. Also, there is no real decision making at all to feel like the player has control, it feels like a kinetic novel as of right now. The animations, models, environment, and lighting are great but once you revised this story a bit as the updates come in this game will get better.