VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Inheritance [v0.1] [Mr. Hex]

[Ennoch]

Okay, had the time to get through this. Just one question.

Why does anyone thought thats a dreamscene? It sure wasn't. I hope it remains that way. No need for dreamscenes

English not bad at all. I mean lots of grammar errors, pretty consistent too. Perfectly understandable english, wouldn't even call it engrish. Mostly 'tense' and personal noun issues. Whoever wrote/proofread it has a good grasp on english just not quite there yet. Its fine.

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  I went with the default name 'James'. He still refers to him as MC. Thats the only scene this happens.

 

[Trasher2018]

It is fine - I guess.

The renders look solid.

The engrish and that all names are lowercase, is borderline distracting. Especially when they talk about the (deceased) father and use the present.

It is a bit rushed imho - why dont we questioning the maid uniforms? Or at least give the player the option. That does not need more renders and just adds some more story and "content" to the game - these are the easiest choices. The player has the feeling that he interacted with the game, and they dont require much effort to implement.

The first choice e.g. is not even a MC choice - because it is a choice we do for the MILF (Margaret). With "kiss" she kisses our forehead and with "hug" she hugs us. That is ... unusual at best - but maybe the multiple protagonists tag is just missing?

And the "dream" with that vampire/succubus/deamon lady Glasya is a real horror, because the room names indicate that this game will get the diabolic curse of free roam ... THAT IS A HORROR GAME ALL OF THE SUDDEN!


Some bugs...

we get called MC instead of the name.


Who is alice? I think this should be chloe?



Its a mediocre start and very short, and nothing special. All the common tropes are there. The Milf, some fuck meat (maids), a demon/vampire/succubus/devil/magical girl, the bratty sis, the cute sis (with the added sleep/molesting fetish bonus ) and the horse dick on the MC.

With more work and better writing, there is potential for a run by the numbers game ... but with free roam I am out. There only a handful (at best) games out there that work for me with limited free roam. Pure free roam games in general are just some trigger hunts and annoying as fuck.

So good luck for the dev and maybe you will rethink and stick to a pure choice driven VN instead of free roam trigger hunt

 

[Rinbael]

Why does anyone thought thats a dreamscene? It sure wasn't. I hope it remains that way. No need for dreamscenes

I might have misread the story because the engrish is kind of hard to understand but I was under the impression that the succubus chick has the power to manipulate people's dreams like the entity in Dreams of Desire plus the renders are named in the game files as nightdream 1,2 etc.

 

[Ennoch]

I might have misread the story because the engrish is kind of hard to understand but I was under the impression that the succubus chick has the power to manipulate people's dreams like the entity in Dreams of Desire plus the renders are named in the game files as nightdream 1,2 etc.

No, that was pretty much mindcontrol. That was Glasya. Yeah, i understand why its called nightdreams in the files. The mc came to the rational conclusion it was just an odd dream. Since he woke in bed. Nobody wakes up in that kind of situation and say hey i was mindcontrolled. Thats the beauty of it. Either way this is going to be 'supernatural' tag soon enough.

 

[House Of Black]

Token black chicks are a turn off for me, considering that they’re always easy lays. Is it avoidable or no?

 

[Ennoch]

Is it avoidable or no?

Sorry, what? What is avoidable or not? Sex with black girls? Thats not avoidable, already happened.

 

[Wills747]

Hi all, my compressed unofficial android port of My Inheritance 0.1
Usual gestures etc.

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[YogSothoth1982]

No, that was pretty much mindcontrol. That was Glasya. Yeah, i understand why its called nightdreams in the files. The mc came to the rational conclusion it was just an odd dream. Since he woke in bed. Nobody wakes up in that kind of situation and say hey i was mindcontrolled. Thats the beauty of it. Either way this is going to be 'supernatural' tag soon enough.

Usually I don't enjoy mind control (even less if the MC is the victim), personally I prefer if that was a dream than the MC under mind control.

Thanks to the developer for the game, but I'm not going to try it because I think I won't enjoy it.

 

[Ennoch]

Usually I don't enjoy mind control (even less if the MC is the victim), personally I prefer if that was a dream than the MC under mind control.

Thanks to the developer for the game, but I'm not going to try it because I think I won't enjoy it.

I call it a mild one really. Plus the game is basically just in the intro phase, pretty much a kinetic novel in its current state. We'll see how it goes in the later update. Check it out, its a quick one, if that would be a dealbreaker for you. If you did... well.. there is a chance it was just a dream, i just don't think so at all. But thats just me. The woman who did will be our protector. I think she just wanted to appease in her own way.

 

[FAP369ZONE]

No! Don't listen to this guy!! Big tits all the way!! He just tries to bring the evil inside!!

(Just kidding. I hope you get your petite one. No reason why not add at least one of the other kind )

Hey don't forget about us normal tits and ass loving people... we need some love too

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I call it a mild one really. Plus the game is basically just in the intro phase, pretty much a kinetic novel in its current state. We'll see how it goes in the later update. Check it out, its a quick one, if that would be a dealbreaker for you. If you did... well.. there is a chance it was just a dream, i just don't think so at all. But thats just me. The woman who did will be our protector. I think she just wanted to appease in her own way.

Thanks for your answer. I'd rather wait to see how the game progresses before trying it out. In any case, be it dream or mind control scenes, I will skip them (if possible) or use the skip button to avoid seeing it, in the case I try the game in the future.

 

[Bailz]

I never understood people who expect A-level writing from their pornography. Get some perspective.

the problem is this isn't just porn this is a visual NOVEL which should involve a logical story and choices to be made otherwise its just a sex slideshow kinetic novel no1 is expecting a-level writing just a story that makes sense and not just some words to connect one sex scene to another which most fuck em all games seem to forget

 

[OsamaBinQueefin]

The English is really bad but the story is really good

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Its looks awesome! I'm looking forward to new updates.

 

[Deleted member 624752]

Renders look good but yeah, the script needs work.
Need to have someone who has English as a primary language look it over and do some edits for coherency.

 

[RogMR]

There are thousands of games here on the f95. Some with great animations. Some with a great story. And few with both.

Here, the story may not be original, but the animations are good. Dreams are an excellent way to show the strongest point of this game.

And who doesn't like to see dreams in the game, can activate the skip unseen text and hold the ctrl when the dream starts. I think that dream (or a hooker) is the best way to show the level of animations in the first version of the game. Most players would rather have a dream in the version than no sexual content.

 

[Tragic Princess]

Not a bad game, it's just the grammar wasn't all that great. But everything else checks out, good luck Mr. Hex.

 

[3D Reaver]

Domination games are the opposite to that, it's like watching braindead porn just to empty the balls, instead of keeping your eyes peeled on the story teasing and impactful side character actions.

i don't think you understand what domination means. it has nothing to do with how fast or meaningful the sex scenes are. Also just because one character is dominating another doesn't have to mean that that character is a piece of shit monster. It is like that a lot of the times because of the lack of restraint on the dev's side but it doesn't have to be.

 

[Boobman4424]

should be a option for not compressed.

 

[Clitbait]

Hi all, my compressed unofficial android port of My Inheritance 0.1
Usual gestures etc.
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Thanks for porting the game bro,but can you make text box transparent with opacity option,the box blocked the main parts of the girl on the game.