str8up

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I would recommend a revision in the character definition. If players choose to go the incest route, changing from "brother" to "bro" and "sister" to "sis" once in a while would go a long way. As it is now, seeing "brother" and "sister" in the dialog regularly makes it a little cringy to read.

Ex: "Hey, sister. How's it going?" sounds cringy. However, something like, "Hey, sis. How's it going?" looks so much better.

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Aside from the aforementioned "bro vs brother" dialog, there's also quite a few glaring grammatical errors as well.

Ex:
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That's just one example.
better then landlady and room mate..come on man LOL
 
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better then landlady and room mate..come on man LOL
Yeah, I know. I've been known to be a bit picky. Just ask the dev I work with. I do it with good intentions though. I hate to see a game/AVN go to waste and not become something more with so many mistakes in the dialog. As it is now, I'm going through the script as we speak and correcting the mistakes I'm finding..

Mistakes like that, for me at least, break the immersion instantly and take me a minute to get back into the groove of the game/AVN.
 
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Yeah, I know. I've been known to be a bit picky. Just ask the dev I work with. I do it with good intentions though. I hate to see a game/AVN go to waste and not become something more with so many mistakes in the dialog. As it is now, I'm going through the script as we speak and correcting the mistakes I'm finding.. ;)
pain in the ass i bet huh LOL
 

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pain in the ass i bet huh LOL
Oh you've no idea.. :ROFLMAO:

(reads along in the dialog, comes across mistake..) Fuck! (save game, correct the mistake, save the file, reload the game to see the correction so I can get back on track again). Lather, rinse, repeat. hahahaha!!
 
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Oh you've no idea.. :ROFLMAO:

(reads along in the dialog, comes across mistake..) Fuck! (save game, correct the mistake, save the file, reload the game to see the correction so I can get back on track again). Lather, rinse, repeat. hahahaha!!
ive seen plenty of games with really really bad spelling mistakes mostly BAD enguish LOL
tell ya one thing tho...everytime at sex scenes when ya see girls be like soooo good
just once id love to see them say sucky sucky fucky fucky me love you long time!
 

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ive seen plenty of games with really really bad spelling mistakes mostly BAD enguish LOL
tell ya one thing tho...everytime at sex scenes when ya see girls be like soooo good
just once id love to see them say sucky sucky fucky fucky me love you long time!
HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Here's a doozy..
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If NTR there will be out soon ( i wish didn't get NTR) hopefuly is avoidable.
 

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Jesus fucking Christ.

Knowing the personality of his uncle, it would have been nice to have a way where you get back at him by making his life shit and taking his wife from him instead of blackmailing your own mother. Not necessarily something wholesome, but something more vanilla. But well, it seems that the MC is just as douche as the uncle.

It is a pity. Thank you very much for giving me the game information. I definitely already know what kind of game it is and will surely be. I don't think it will suddenly change to something more romantic. Thanks again, it is appreciated.
It's already started with the blackmail and it looks like his "lesbian" (term used very loosely, she'll be getting dick soon, it's also my one pet hate in games but that's a rant for another day) is next.

I agree though, it doesn't look like anything resembling romance will happen here. MC is a bit douchy and only interested in fucking not really interested in them beyond that.

Even his girlfriend was only used for a quick fuck. No talk, just "follow me, now bend over" that was about the sum of their interaction.
 

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this one has a setup that's a little different from the other IC games, the father its alive for once (although given his role in the story that's not a good thing) it also seems to lean mostly on corruption and blackmail and unlike most other games it doesn't wait 100 updates to get to the action, Instead the story seems to be about what happens after the action so that's a plus on the other hand the dialogue its mostly bland and the characters don't seem to have more traits than liking sex the Mc in particular its an asshole but I guess an asshole its better than the loser protagonist that seems to be common this days.
 

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Just wanted to tell some people on here..... When i saw the first review i almost didn't try this game. After reading some comments in the discussion here i figured i'd try it. I'm glad i did!!!! Very decent game.
It's sucks how one shitty review has brought this game almost to it's knees right of the hop. So, i retaliated and left a good review because IT"S A GOOD GAME!!!
Some people who write shitty reviews should give their heads a shake.
I'd like to remind everyone why we are here.....
To play ADULT GAMES!!!!!
I found the story just fine, in fact, i though it was well thought out for it to start the way it did. To be able to incorporate sex in the first release this way was pretty interesting, to say the least. Enjoy everyone!!!!
You can name everyone in the game as well as call them what ya want!!! (except your girlfriend is just your girlfriend LOL)
You have a point, some people these days have grown so used to the stairway to heaven progression that everyone its using now days that having a sex scene in the first version its something unimaginable for them, if it doesn't take 10 versions and months of waiting then its not "realistic" or "earned".
 

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You have a point, some people these days have grown so used to the stairway to heaven progression that everyone its using now days that having a sex scene in the first version its something unimaginable for them, if it doesn't take 10 versions and months of waiting then its not "realistic" or "earned".
Wich is bullshit because two strangers can fuck after a couple of drinks. The slow build blue balls thing looks like something from the Victorian Age not from the XXI century :LOL:
 

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Boy o Boy how i wanna take that motherfucking uncle's wife and leave him a stick so he can shove it up his ass to fill in the lonely void.
I hope there is an option for the in the future updates.
 
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ok so the MC is in fact a douche but the overall flow of the game makes it almost funny. if you've read the other comments about MC blackmailing the mother for sex you dont have to feel toooooo bad for her because for the most part she ends up enjoying it. the main negative is that further sex will essentially happen with the excuse she's being blackmailed into it but by the end of this update she barely reluctant to the idea. only thing stopping her is the fact its her son, and a bit of some body issues thinking she's to old. all in all this game truly follows porn logic. so yeah even with the blackmail and how the sex scenes play out its not so bad its brutally unplayable. but more so truly PORN its almost funny.

if i had to comapre this game to another i'd say "My Employee's Family" MC not the exact same way just enough to be comparable. at least on this first release. if MC stays douchey and doesnt end up getting being more caring to the girls then who knows.

but yeah honestly give it a shot and judge for yourself.
 
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