VN Ren'Py Abandoned My L Life [v0.02] [SSHGAMES]

[Red88]

Good game, good renderings, beautiful and hot girls, besides the best thing about not having NTR, I think the idea of putting the uncle's bastard is to give reasons to hate him and prevent his ambitions, I hope we can stop all his attempts in relation to the girls and have the opportunity to take revenge on this bastard and put an end to his plans and fuck his wife right in front of him!

 

[LWtbo]

Some pure vanilla guys here are worrying about mom fucked in the first version. But, for our vanilla fans, there tons of blueballing mom/son games who will shit you to the end even for a handjob. So, please go and enjoy those. Mom getting fucked with son on first update is very very very rare and exceptional. Hardcore Mom/Son fans and People like me are waiting for these kind of games from many days. I'm glad for the dev. I hope you do more things with Mom with adding more hardcore kinks in next updates. Thankyou.

No offence but thats not strictly true for all Vanilla fan's I'm afraid you see Avaron put it better she has more of an Idea what a lot are on about.
Personally as long as Blackmail and Coruption arn't the only routes with Mom and other's I can overlook most things except Sex via Violence especialy extreme violence.
But I Believe Its not that the mom was actually fucked so early on in the game that bothered some people but the way in which she was fucked some people just prefer a more romantic aproach to baging the mother's brain's out.
Personaly I believe if the story is good enough and the Dev is creative enough even romance doesn't need to be slow burn .

That's my personal opinion anyway.

Just Sayin.

 

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Nice start, just 0.1 and we already bang mom

 

[harsha_26]

No offence but thats not strictly true for all Vanilla fan's I'm afraid you see Avaron put it better she has more of an Idea what a lot are on about.
Personally as long as Blackmail and Coruption arn't the only routes with Mom and other's I can overlook most things except Sex via Violence especialy extreme violence.
But I Believe Its not that the mom was actually fucked so early on in the game that bothered some people but the way in which she was fucked some people just prefer a more romantic aproach to baging the mother's brain's out.
Personaly I believe if the story is good enough and the Dev is creative enough even romance doesn't need to be slow burn .

That's my personal opinion anyway.

Just Sayin.

I know some people are worried about "rape". My comment was not about them. I'm okay with that so called "rape" content. But, I can understand that people dont like that tag.

But, there are some people commented that sex with mom this fast in the first update makes no sense. My comment was directed towards them. They have almost 90% of the mom/son games when compare to corruption mom/son fans like me where games are so much rare to find.

You said "Its not that the mom was actually fucked so early on in the game that bothered some people but the way in which she was fucked some people just prefer a more romantic aproach to baging the mother's brain's out".

I can understand we can remove "rape" scene, but but..
Can you please tell me How can a dev can plan fast paced romance and sex in the first update between mom and son without using atleast "corruption" as a tool? I'm not sarcastic, it's a real question.

 

[AdamJohn36]

Yes.

Thank you kindly for answering. Definitely keeping this in my watchlist.

 

[Sycho]

How to revision character definition without getting banned from patreon?

The simplest solution would be to have an incest patch with the characters defined instead of a "choose your own relationship" setup as it is now. In that RPY you can include the family's relationship with each other.

You could include things like:

char 1 = Mom
char 1a = Mother
char 2 = Dad
char 2a = Father
char 3 = Brother
char 3a = Bro
char 4 = Sister
char 4a = Sis
char 5 = Uncle
char 6 = Aunt
char 6a = Auntie
char 7 = Niece
char 8 = Nephew
etc...

It wouldn't be that difficult to do but it would take some testing with and without the patch to make sure things work as intended. That's usually how most patches in Ren'Py look when I need to correct a typo anyway. Most are pretty simplistic. Less work...

In some cases, I've seen some dialog written to the patch instead of having just the character definition. But that would require a bit of extra work.

 

[loikl]

Undoubtedly this game is different, in most of the games the MC is a perverted character, but shy and virgin who has to interact for (real) hours to get a scene with the girls, but here the protagonist is a domineering cretin who knows what he wants and is going to take it regardless of the means... or he could also be an idiot who does not know what he wants but does not mind blackmailing his family and all the girls around him to have them.
Whatever the case, at least it is not a crybaby beta as in many other games.
As for the ntr, there is none, but it seems that there something is trying to develop, I hope it does not take place or that it does not focus on that.
Good luck to the dev. It will be interesting to see how it develops since the MC is not shy and already obtained what is normally obtained until after several days...
And finally, it is clear that THIS IS NOT A ROMANCE GAME, if you are looking for this, go from it now.

 

[Avaron1974]

And finally, it is clear that THIS IS NOT A ROMANCE GAME, if you are looking for this, go from it now.

The dev disagrees with you.

Corruption and blackmail will turn into romance in the end.

 

[LWtbo]

Can you please tell me How can a dev can plan fast paced romance and sex in the first update between mom and son without using atleast "corruption" as a tool? I'm not sarcastic, it's a real question.

Again no Offence.
That's not really the issue a lot of games have Corruption it also features in many game Vanilla players play.
My point is some will struggle with the fact she is drugged.
But other's will get over that fact because from the sound of it Uncle is the one that drugged her not the MC.
And yet others wouldn't even care who drugged her.

It's not so much how he starts to fuck his mom its that he ignores her asking him to stop and keep going.
To some people if a woman says stop it means stop and if she say no mean no.
Doesn't matter if she deep down doesn't mean it she said it and that's what counts for some people here is no gray area even in games it either is or it isn't.
That was my point Vanilla players like most other type's of players are all different.

I would consider myself a Vanilla player in a lot of games I play give me the option to drug a girl and then practically rape her or wait a few days in the game and romance her into bed then I will always take the second option.
Doesn't mean I think the option shouldn't be there just that personally I would prefer an alternative option.

Bare in mind this is just off the top of my head and it is part corruption but not blackmail:

Spoiler: Alternative method

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I will leave the rest to your imagination and just say that kinda how you mix Corruption and romance together to get the same result at the end you have an affair that they both want in equal measure.

And I wasn't saying you was wrong I just that pointing out you said Vanilla players and like with any group we may be called the same but we don't all like the same things.

Just Sayin.

 

[loikl]

The dev disagrees with you.

mmm I admit my mistake, I did not see that comment, what I was referring to is that at the beginning unlike other games where the MC starts with romance and continues corruption here it seems to be the other way around ... ok it doesn't bother me it could be interesting.

 

[harsha_26]

Undoubtedly this game is different, in most of the games the MC is a perverted character, but shy and virgin who has to interact for (real) hours to get a scene with the girls, but here the protagonist is a domineering cretin who knows what he wants and is going to take it regardless of the means... or he could also be an idiot who does not know what he wants but does not mind blackmailing his family and all the girls around him to have them.
Whatever the case, at least it is not a crybaby beta as in many other games.
As for the ntr, there is none, but it seems that there something is trying to develop, I hope it does not take place or that it does not focus on that.
Good luck to the dev. It will be interesting to see how it develops since the MC is not shy and already obtained what is normally obtained until after several days...
And finally, it is clear that THIS IS NOT A ROMANCE GAME, if you are looking for this, go from it now.

This game contains romance too according to the dev. Even in corruption, drugs, mind control games, romance can be possible if love interests are ready for it and love MC for what he is. So, It's just like a kinky ever-ready girlfriend in real life when it comes to bed but so romantic in non-lewd conversations. Yes, those girls are exist in real life and also exist in adult games too. But yeah rare.

 

[harsha_26]

Again no Offence.
That's not really the issue a lot of games have Corruption it also features in many game Vanilla players play.
My point is some will struggle with the fact she is drugged.
But other's will get over that fact because from the sound of it Uncle is the one that drugged her not the MC.
And yet others wouldn't even care who drugged her.

It's not so much how he starts to fuck his mom its that he ignores her asking him to stop and keep going.
To some people if a woman says stop it means stop and if she say no mean no.
Doesn't matter if she deep down doesn't mean it she said it and that's what counts for some people here is no gray area even in games it either is or it isn't.
That was my point Vanilla players like most other type's of players are all different.

I would consider myself a Vanilla player in a lot of games I play give me the option to drug a girl and then practically rape her or wait a few days in the game and romance her into bed then I will always take the second option.
Doesn't mean I think the option shouldn't be there just that personally I would prefer an alternative option.

Bare in mind this is just off the top of my head and it is part corruption but not blackmail:

Spoiler: Alternative method

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I will leave the rest to your imagination and just say that kinda how you mix Corruption and romance together to get the same result at the end you have an affair that they both want in equal measure.

And I wasn't saying you was wrong I just that pointing out you said Vanilla players and like with any group we may be called the same but we don't all like the same things.

Just Sayin.

Yeah, I know Vanilla fans can be different to each other in crossing and setting limits. But, I said that note in a general mode by taking majority into one box. Sorry for that. Yes, some vanilla fans are okay with both corruption and romance like you and Avaron. But, some vanilla fans are strictly vanilla, i mean they absolutely hate the corruption and only wants slow burn romance. My comment was only intended towards them. You seems like a fan of romance with the allowance of corruption too. So, yeah, in that way, we both are in same level brother. I love fuck fest with mom like a kinky hardcore slut but I also prefer Mom "loves" that kinky hardcore sex with giving her consent.

Note: Your alternative method is good. You have talent. I just hoped for more hardcore kinky sex with the romance lol. It just, i got so much bored by many recent games which are all about "Mom to be only fucked at the end of game".

 

[Norman Knight]

You'll get the chance.

That's good to know it would be so ironic, I know my earlier comment was a lot more critical, but I did enjoy what the game was trying to do, in an era of endless blueballs and infinity development cycles its refreshing to see a game that goes straight to the point and in fact uses it as a part of the story, Too many games use sex as the ultimate goal instead of another step in the progress of the story and here I think it was used in a way that fits the plot, my real complain its that the characters are not that fleshed out so their personalities remain fairly basic but I guess there is time to develop them more.

By the way, you should apply for a developer badge.

 

[LWtbo]

i got so much bored by many recent games which are all about "Mom to be only fucked at the end of game".

Yes I agre and I know what you mean I'm ok with straight out sex and even slow burn but some Dev's turn slow burn into glacially slow burn at thats just not cricket.
BTW don't tell anyone but if you think about it.
Any sex involving the MC and his mother, sister, aunty, grandma, step or other wise or just plain cheating behind MC's the GF's back or even with her permission is still some form of corruption so that's pretty much 90% or more of all Porn/Adult game's
But lets keep that between me and you so don't tell anyone.

Just Sayin.

 

[harsha_26]

Yes I agre and I know what you mean I'm ok with straight out sex and even slow burn but some Dev's turn slow burn into glacially slow burn at thats just not cricket.
BTW don't tell anyone but if you think about it.
Any sex involving the MC and his mother, sister, aunty, grandma, step or other wise or just plain cheating behind MC's the GF's back or even with her permission is still some form of corruption so that's pretty much 90% or more of all Porn/Adult game's
But lets keep that between me and you so don't tell anyone.

Just Sayin.

Yeah, it is some kind of corruption, But those "blue ball" fans are not ready to admit that it is corruption lol. I'm talking about those people, for example, who hated Linda in Milfy City just because she initiated incest with son before the son itself unlike other popular incest games. Because for them, "Mom is some kind of pure lady. And Only Son should corrupt her" lol. People are not ready to accept horny women into romance mode, especially if those women are incest. Even in real life, If a woman is bold and break the so called stereotypes, we all know how majority of male dominated society sees that woman.

 

[BroodZeo]

yo dev you have a cool and unique looking game Blackmail/Corruption turned to Romance I'll love to see how that works. And also thanks for not involving those slow burns in your game straight out 1st update MC fucks Mom dude loving it❤ All I wish to say is best of luck for this project I definitely have my eyes on this one the plot of Making a Fool of Uncle who wants to fuck every women in his vicinity, instead the MC doing he Fucking even stealing his Wife sounds pretty awesome imo hehe I'm loving it hope we get the Women's first before The Uncle tries to lay his flithy hands on haha and also keep the MC being the Dominant one going I always prefer Maledom and you doing it so you already got a Regular one here in Me lol and I hope you plan to introduce more Female characters and their Husbands, BF's so on so we steal their Women's hehe. Kudos Dev Good work my best wishes are with you.

 

[GrizzlyUK]

Parts of it feel a bit rapey.

For starters the mothers drugged and he takes full advantage of that then doesn't stop when she asks him to. The next day he pushes her into it then basically tells her you will keep fucking me or i'll tell dad which is forcing her against to have sex whether she wants to or not.

Some people are a lot more sensitive to certain subjects so some will see it as such, the majority won't though.

It probably doesn't need the tag but there are some, like those looking more for romance and vanilla content, that see carrying on when she tries to stop and blackmail as rapey.

To be fair, neither the son nor mother know that she's been drugged. The uncle is the one who drugged her but then made his move too soon and lost his chance. She then goes into the bedroom to see her husband but mistakes her son for her husband. That's pretty much the point when the drug really kicks in and she starts to get very horny. Sure, the son takes advantage of that and then, when she realises her mistake and tries to stop what's happening he refuses and forces her to allow him to finish. Yes, the mother is drugged but that was done by the Uncle, she never realises why she got so horny and the son certainly isn't aware of her having been drugged, he just sees it as taking advantage of her confusion. Some may consider that to be a minor point, but I think that needs to be mentioned. Initially they both get a little carried away in the moment, neither knowing the truth of just why it's happening. It's only later, when she realises what's happening, or rather with whom, and she wants to stop but he won't, then it shifts into a somewhat darker tone to what's happening.

The next morning however is pretty much all on the son forcing his mother, although she's not completely against it. Maybe the drug she was given hasn't completely worn off yet?

Anywho, I'll now move on to my initial thoughts on the game. Overall I'd say this is a fairly solid first release. Renders are quite good (I did spot a couple of positioning errors), the female characters look very nice, the story is a little different which I see as a plus, but there are a few spelling mistakes (such as "Motherent" and "inSisterted") along with a good few grammar mistakes (guessing the dev isn't a native English speaker). Yes, I can understand why some are saying it's a bit rushed but seriously I don't see that as a bad thing. For those who want a slow-burn then there are plenty of games already available, not every game has to do everything exactly the same way! So I'd call this an above-average first release that does show potential, I just hope the dev is able to continue so that we get to see the rest of the story the dev has planned.

 

[jdiaz215]

Nice start, good luck.

 

[Ryantrix]

Awesome, plot is also good, thanks. Keep it up.

 

[lordfridge9]

Sister: I like girls
Version 0.2: Well that was a fucking lie