VN Others Abandoned My Lovely Sara [v0.6] [Caizer Games]

[lordofevilcr]

Just quickly played through the game.

Models/renders are really nice to look at. However, it's hard to get immersed with the strange English and quite simplistic story. Can't say I'm a fan of this TyrannoBuilder thing either. So much more awkward than Ren'py.

 

[xןʞ]

Because the girls act and look like 13-year-olds. I don't see any other reason people play that game.

People seem to forget that fake CP roleplay is the second hottest thing to incest roleplay in porn right now.

DMD combines both! Solid gold, jerry!

 

[ComicBookGuy]

People seem to forget that fake CP roleplay is the second hottest thing to incest roleplay in porn right now.

DMD combines both! Solid gold, jerry!

You already know it's not right when you have to specify that 's fake but you don't specify that incest is also fake.

I personally can't get into CP, it just feels wrong.

 

[anschwww]

Elena is the sister of Amanda, your ex-wife

 

[DavidTurner]

yeah thanks, there was such terribly translated writing I couldn't focus on what was going on or who was who... I just started crazy clicking until I got bored and deleted it

 

[User_10739]

As much as I would love to reminisce about the golden age of floppy disc games, I'll keep this on point...

This looks ok, but it's not hard to make the comparison to DMD as the plot is far too similar to ignore. If this does go on it will need better translation as whatever free online translator was used, it didn't cut it...

I know how everybody loves to compare everything to BB or DMD but this seriously looks like Mr.D left his game narrative unattended while he went to get a coffee refill and somebody took photos of as many pages as they could till he got back then made up the rest... That's how you ended up with an Aunt named Elena living in your town while your big boobed, blonde 18 yo daughter lives with her best friend Jennifer in another city. (No I'm not kidding, those are their names...)
I was half expecting an asshole photographer to show up then go talk to his nice brother

 

[xןʞ]

Don't spoil update 0.2 man!

 

[Paprika]

I don't care if it's some kind DMD copycat as long as it doesn't blue ball me.

 

[Blockout]

People seem to forget that fake CP roleplay is the second hottest thing to incest roleplay in porn right now.

And that is godawful.

 

[thelonelyjoker]

Nice render, kinda short and where is fullscreen option?

 

[thanatos69]

I'm surprised no one has tried to copycat DOD yet.

 

[sexybastardo]

TyranoBuilder :cryingface::cryingface:

What's wrong with Tyranobuilder?

 

[winter0s]

Why the fuck are all daughters looking up at 10 ft tall dads in these games?!

 

[xb]

Nice renders. Only a couple of real choices so far but no real movement.

 

[AkitoH]

PROS:
- Renders look cool.
- Daughter is already one of my favorites to look at and doesn't look like every other generic daughter on this site.

CONS:
- Tyranobuilder. So awkward and choppy.

- Too little content to go on right now. This is starting to become something that annoys me in these v.01 "games". I wish developers would put more time into the initial version to actually give people a reason to follow this game instead of giving these "proof of concept" versions that have a tendency to get lazy. It doesn't have to be a gig of content right off the bat, but give something worth of substance that tells me and your patrons that "this is a passion".

-English translations are awkward to the point where I just skim through the dialogue. Choppy translations and Tyranobuilder aren't good selling points for this game.

As of now, it's meh.

 

[macadam]

oh look !
isnt that the same hostess steward dress that i find in the last "good" game shared here ? ( i bet it is )

sound like someone was a bit "out of ideas" for making a game XD

 

[JohnEffinDoe]

Damn the daughter is really pretty!

 

[Andurin]

Daugther is cute. Above average renders.

Its very inspired by DMD - The script presentation feels so alike the first day in DMD. Almost copied, with alteration to the text.

about 5 min to read all the text and no action. I think i check back on it in +0.5

 

[Julegraut]

Great renders, but I honestly can't play any game with awful machine translation English. If that ever gets fixed down the road this could be worth checkin in on.

 

[Caizer]

Hello all!
I'm a little disappointed with the comments about my game. But probably this should have happened, it's still my first experience in creating games. I want to say about the fact that you think that I will abandon the development. I will do it no matter how much support I have at the moment. It just takes longer. I have a job at the moment and I can not spend all the time developing, unfortunately.
About the copy of the DMD. I did not copy DMD and I did not see any options for dialogues and clothes. I just found content that I like and came up with a story from my head. Of course, DMD influenced the development, but only the very idea, more I did not take anything from it.
About TyranoBuilder. I can do all the same things that I could do in Ren'Py, so for the players there is no difference what engine I create it. This is important only for me, so I do not understand why talk about it.
And about translate... yeah, im realy sorry about this. I try translate from myself and use translator for this, but Im not good for it.
I'm very need some one from Russia, who can help me translate this and next versions of the game. I was looking for an interpreter for the game for a long time, but I could not find anyone. If you know interpreter who can help, say me plz.
If there are any questions, write me an email please. I will follow the comments here from time to time, but by email I would respond faster. Email: CaizerGames@gmail.com
And BIG thanks to those who liked my game! I know this just 0.1 but I try for all of you! ^^