3D-Daz My-maybe-VN-game, discussions / votings for characters

[Creeping Death]

Everything about these clothes is wonderful, great job! I just wish I had the same clothes and they fit like that! And the jewelry is very good too and nicely matches her overall look. She’s just too adorable and I want to cuddle with her but also I’m sure she won’t just be cuddling... These games don’t often have women corrupting or dominating other women, and I don’t know what your plans are for this main character, but she looks like she would make a very good obedient girl for a strong and strict woman. How much of a mommy’s girl is she in your mind?

Thanks for your feedback!
Indeed she looks more like an obedient girl and I have definitive plans for her being submissive in at least one path (one of the neighbor milfs is very jealous and thinks this little cutie wants to seduce her hubby ... ). If she becomes the dominant part in one or another way I haven't thought about it or already have something set up. Maybe not in girl/girl scenario, but as nasty little bitch to her boyfriend/older lover, don't know. Many many things are still too vague in my plannings.

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So, for celebrating my finalization of this model, two last renders. Checked item one of ten on my list (eleven if you count a dog ^^). A nice face close up and some lingerie (maybe someday she will earn some pocket money in this outfit?!). The high res renders in 3840x3840 and 1920x3840 pngs are on my patroen site. Next is going on with sis and bro!

(ah bloody hell, the tank top is not fitting perfectly, tried something before *doh* workaround, look at her face and cleavage ^^)

 

[balvenie1401]

Thanks for your feedback!
Indeed she looks more like an obedient girl and I have definitive plans for her being submissive in at least one path (one of the neighbor milfs is very jealous and thinks this little cutie wants to seduce her hubby ... ). If she becomes the dominant part in one or another way I haven't thought about it or already have something set up. Maybe not in girl/girl scenario, but as nasty little bitch to her boyfriend/older lover, don't know. Many many things are still too vague in my plannings.

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So, for celebrating my finalization of this model, two last renders. Checked item one of ten on my list (eleven if you count a dog ^^). A nice face close up and some lingerie (maybe someday she will earn some pocket money in this outfit?!). The high res renders in 3840x3840 and 1920x3840 pngs are on my patroen site. Next is going on with sis and bro!

(ah bloody hell, the tank top is not fitting perfectly, tried something before *doh* workaround, look at her face and cleavage ^^)

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damn! that´s some excellent work right there, she looks lovely, cute as a bytton and perfect for the most depraved of corruption routes

I havn´t seen any info about the focus, concept, genre of the game.. Not more then the comment about corruption in the OP.
I´m sorry if i missed it but if I havnät missed it, will you be sharing infpabout that here as well..? I personaly hope the main focus is NOT lesbian, would be a sad waste of such a nice model :/ but if that´s the case it would be good to know..

 

[Creeping Death]

damn! that´s some excellent work right there, she looks lovely, cute as a bytton and perfect for the most depraved of corruption routes

I havn´t seen any info about the focus, concept, genre of the game.. Not more then the comment about corruption in the OP.
I´m sorry if i missed it but if I havnät missed it, will you be sharing infpabout that here as well..? I personaly hope the main focus is NOT lesbian, would be a sad waste of such a nice model :/ but if that´s the case it would be good to know..

Well, at the moment there are many many ideas in my head, and some of them in my Onenote. Not only for the sexual actions, but also for game mechanics (including an idea to play not only her but also her twin brother (because I noticed I need eventually some controllable cock)). There are ideas of different paths, funny hidden side paths (the mentioned alien abuse ^^), repeatable discovery events (like PS bathroom for example) but a bit more (I alwaya liked the RPGM feeling of going everywhere and talking to NPCs to find something (naughty) happen).

So, as I am a noob in Daz, Ren'py, Photoshop with no experience I cannot make respectable statements. I think I am already in a way too over ambitious. So what are the first steps I want to do. Creating the first ten models for the first public release of the game, learning ren'py, customizing the UI and some photoshop. And most important, fleshing out the characters (personality) etc. which will help me to develop a story (yes a complete story is missing too). Ah, I have totally no skill in the art of writing too ^^ .

Main motivation are some very dirty sex scenes I wanted to see but not give in commission work. So at the moment patreons do spend money for following a total noob trying to create an adult VN. But I keep them informed what's going on, at least for now also on F95. Later on someone will definitely post my patreon postings here ^^.

Ah, I disgressed, the focus is not lesbian. Plans on fetishes are big and I must see how to do it. As a teaser this is what I have in mind: Vanilla sex, lesbian, bdsm (light), gloryhole, pregnancy, bukkake, photoshoots, camshows, escort, prostitution, ntr, love/boyfriend, old&young, blackmail. For the canceled dark mode I had planned incest, k9, drugging, bdsm (hard), blackmail (hard), rape (all scenarios optional and I give the player the opportunity to get her out of every hard scene).

tl;dr Too early for certain plans, need to see what works out. First step is ren'py UI customization and coding with character creation (model + personality) and then create what I have in mind for the starting scenario in their new neighborhood with introduction of the chars plus teasing some of the first implemented paths.

 

[balvenie1401]

sad to hear aboutthe cancelled dark mode,some of that planned content sounded interesting, blackmail, bdsm and rape ^^ the other three I don´t really care for, ok for incest if we can get her with her father, the rest I won´t miss.. but it sounds overambitious already so it´s probably a good idea to limited it somewhat. Will be following your progress with interest

 

[cosim4]

Thanks for your feedback! I like the converse too. The pants I cannot alter in length, only sliders to adjust the fit. I have a set of jeans which look quite good, you mean somethning like a 7/8?

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She looks exactly like the girl at my university. Her hair,jeans,blue eyes, are all the same and the only thing different is she only wears t-shirts.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

I really like the tank tops shown so far, I like that style for her, seems appropriate with her look I feel like. The dark theme works really well. I wouldn’t call it goth or anything, but it’s certainly an eye-catching style and she’s certainly a cutie, so I can’t wait to see her in other outfits!

 

[Deleted member 1019532]

No nose rings, unless she's a heifer being taken to market.

 

[Creeping Death]

No nose rings, unless she's a heifer being taken to market.

Well, I like it very much, it's one of two places I find a piercing sexy (belly button is the other on). We will see if in progression of the game she will remove it

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Quick update on her sister Kylie:

Just some quick test renders and hair cut tests with Kylie. Her face needs some more work, she looks to serious, uninteressted, not very inviting to get some boys! Her hair cut is also not final, and her body too, except her boobies. I want hers smaller than her sisters', no bra, instead she got more butt and a trained belly. The clothing in one picture can be the normal ones, I already like it very much.

Tell me what you think!

Unaltered pngs are on my patreon site, also I will post tonight or tomorrow a quick render of Julie and Kylie together. Nothing special, I am just curious how they look together!

 

[balvenie1401]

Weill, sis looks nice, the first two render look very good. She almost looks asian though, is that by design or mistake?

Also, nose rings, I love them!!!

 

[Creeping Death]

Weill, sis looks nice, the first two render look very good. She almost looks asian though, is that by design or mistake?

Also, nose rings, I love them!!!

Hmm, no it wasn't intended. But true, it I have to take a look for her eye lids. Since she's Julie's sister, and there is no asian influence I don't want that look.

 

[balvenie1401]

Hmm, no it wasn't intended. But true, it I have to take a look for her eye lids. Since she's Julie's sister, and there is no asian influence I don't want that look.

Might just be me.. hope I didn't offend you though, no such intention, but it was honestly the first thought that jumped to mind when I looked at the close ups :/ but if I'm the only one seeing it it's not realky an issue..

 

[Princess Groundhog]

For hair I think the second or the third options are really good, the second is my favorite, I feel like.

 

[Creeping Death]

Might just be me.. hope I didn't offend you though, no such intention, but it was honestly the first thought that jumped to mind when I looked at the close ups :/ but if I'm the only one seeing it it's not realky an issue..

No no, everything is fine, I post 'em because of the feedback! And indeed, her eye lids give her a slight asian touch.

For hair I think the second or the third options are really good, the second is my favorite, I feel like.

Hm, the second one is the one with pony tail? That's my least favourite, makes her look a bit old, imo. The third (shaved on the side) is experimental, saw it and thought maybe, some short hair cut? Nothing set in stone.

 

[Creeping Death]

Meanwhile I did some more iterations of Kylie but I am still not happy with her face. This picture is the promised quickie, please note, the Kylie model is some iterations behind the current. As I already wrote, it was only rendered because of curiousity.



But these are her current legs and bottom. Her bottom needs one or two minor tweaks too.



Addendum: Couldn't sleep, unhappy with her face. So, I think this is going in the right direction!

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Not sure about the hair there, I do like the ponytail, it shows off her face the best, but the shaved sides look is cool too. Now this has me thinking about all sorts of sisterly things they could do...

 

[balvenie1401]

Meanwhile I did some more iterations of Kylie but I am still not happy with her face. This picture is the promised quickie, please note, the Kylie model is some iterations behind the current. As I already wrote, it was only rendered because of curiousity.

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But these are her current legs and bottom. Her bottom needs one or two minor tweaks too.

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Addendum: Couldn't sleep, unhappy with her face. So, I think this is going in the right direction!

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Definitly the right direction, much better

 

[Creeping Death]

Not sure about the hair there, I do like the ponytail, it shows off her face the best, but the shaved sides look is cool too. Now this has me thinking about all sorts of sisterly things they could do...

Yeah, they will definitly do things sisters do, playing cards, go shopping, eating ice cream, playing doctor ...

I think I will make a big poll with my 2 patrons and the opinions here about the hair cut maybe. As soon as I am completely happy with her (seeing some things to tweak already after some hours of sleep). Bit for now work comes first and Project Sage got a new update, so ...

My favourite btw is the last one, with the new face iteration. Makes her look younger then the other ones.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

But isn’t she the older sister? You know, teaching the younger one how the world works So it would make sense for her to look older.

 

[Creeping Death]

But isn’t she the older sister? You know, teaching the younger one how the world works So it would make sense for her to look older.

Oh, I thought her 12 minutes younger twin brother would take care of this?! Currently I just collect ideas, not planning the characters in detail.

She must look older than Julie, but not too much (age difference is approx. two years for my plannings).

 

[grobulos]

it defently need something or somebody special, it looks for me 08/15. i may get wrong but if you have a demo tell us. i would like to support you if you can adore my "mind". i have space again in my dev list as patreon