VN Ren'Py Completed My New Family [Christmas Special] [Killer7]

[Gandalf78]

Nice Game so far. I hope to see more soon

 

[Mormont]

What's the deal with Fiona is she going to try and dominate the MC? I'd rather hope we dominate her the next time we meet but it seems our MC is a bit on the shy side yet for that, wasn't much Beca in this update just getting to know the slutty Aunt better

 

[Killer7]

Killahseven I don't know if someone allready reported this (search didn't delivered any results and I don't want to read all posts), but there is no label "day5nolucy". So picking "Don't go" throws a exception after your little warning message about the Lucy content.

Fixed! Sorry about that!

What's the deal with Fiona is she going to try and dominate the MC? I'd rather hope we dominate her the next time we meet but it seems our MC is a bit on the shy side yet for that, wasn't much Beca in this update just getting to know the slutty Aunt better

Yeah I agree, Becca didn't get that much content this patch, I will give her more stuff on 0.3!

Is there any way to remove all the mum's and replace it with mom? British Asians are cute and all but I'm American and on this side of the pond we say mom.

Oh well, I'm from the other side of the pond and very close to the UK .

One more thing. On the end of the day you meet Fiona, MC recapitulates on events, no matter if they happen or not.

That is fixed in 0.2.1, it's in one of my other posts. Was a error on my part!

Heeeyyy the aunt is a slut ! What a surprise ! It's not like the aunt in every game on this forum is a slut...
I guess I will call it the " Aunt's Law ".
I'm starting to wonder if the devs don't have an illness that will kill them if they don't make the aunt a slut.
And that boss, Fiona... I guess there is no Alpha MC in this game, only a beta follower. Tch !
I won't repeat what I already said about the story before, but nothing changes. Still so illogical.
And maybe it would be good to explain why Lucy never went to a surgeon to take off her tail and ears. Her high school time was hell and nobody never think of that solution ?

Killahseven , you have to think more about your story. It's not a " sanbox game " where multiple stories cames up and if one of them is shit, you can cover that with another... No. This is a VN, it's just one big story involving many characters, just one story.

Thanks for your feedback! Regarding the aunt, I didn't really think about "the aunt being the slut" I just knew that I wanted a slut character in the game and it ended up being the aunt.

Regarding MC being a beta follower, it's just the beginning of the game where he gets to know each character a bit more. And for the moment I only have the love route planned out so I don't really have a way of not going a more or less friendly route personally.

It's very interesting and redheads are always a plus in my books. I do fear however that this game will end up being quite quick if current character speed is going by unless you are going to add more niche fetishes or characters? (just speculation of course but I would like to see this have a solid development life)

Oh don't worry, I won't let things escalate too fast. I want to tell a story after all!

 

[Qleaf]

Is there any way to remove all the mum's and replace it with mom? British Asians are cute and all but I'm American and on this side of the pond we say mom.

Here you go
The in-game walkthrough is added as well, enjoy!

 

[Arassei]

What's the deal with Fiona is she going to try and dominate the MC? I'd rather hope we dominate her the next time we meet

I wanted to say that too ! Good job, Mormont, good job.

I don't really have a way of not going a more or less friendly route personally.

What is that, friendly route ?
I just wanted to say " not letting Fiona making you a toy ". Use the MC's brain. Use his anger, use his sadness ! MAKE HER YOUR SLAVE ! (but no blackmail and no rape).
The story with the slut from the start... I saw that so many times. It always end like this : " What, mom ?! you were a slut from the start ", " Yeah, I am sorry, my daughter, you have all the right to be mad at me ... ", " Oh don't worry mom, I am not mad at you... let's have a threesome with MC ! "
I mean, I would be curious to see " real " consequences about that sort of thing.

 

[Killer7]

I wanted to say that too ! Good job, Mormont, good job.



What is that, friendly route ?
I just wanted to say " not letting Fiona making you a toy ". Use the MC's brain. Use his anger, use his sadness ! MAKE HER YOUR SLAVE ! (but no blackmail and no rape).
The story with the slut from the start... I saw that so many times. It always end like this : " What, mom ?! you were a slut from the start ", " Yeah, I am sorry, my daughter, you have all the right to be mad at me ... ", " Oh don't worry mom, I am not mad at you... let's have a threesome with MC ! "
I mean, I would be curious to see " real " consequences about that sort of thing.

Regarding Fiona, all I can say is that at some point in time, the tables will turn for MC and Fiona. So she won't stay the dominant person all the time.

And I think one slutty character is always good in these kind of games. It is a nice added touch compared to the more shy characters ( like Sandra, Lucy, Becca and Maddie are ).

 

[Arassei]

Regarding Fiona, all I can say is that at some point in time, the tables will turn for MC and Fiona. So she won't stay the dominant person all the time.

And I think one slutty character is always good in these kind of games. It is a nice added touch compared to the more shy characters ( like Sandra, Lucy, Becca and Maddie are ).

Fair point, but a slut character always means she had a ton of guys, she did everything anytime, and you are the MC, who had done nothing yet. As the MC, you can't " leave a mark " on her. For exemple, the case of Becca is good : she had 2 men, and these two are scumbags. So, when she will be with MC, that will be like a festival.

Tables will turn for MC and Fiona ? Color me intrigued.

 

[botc76]

I like the story very much but why does Lucy have cat ears and tail? You could have chosen to make her a transgirl which is a real life possibility and still would create another aspect to the story.

Or, you know, the dev could just create the character he wants to? Not everybody likes trans characters and it would be hard to make that optional, if it's one of the main characters.
As it is, Lucy is basically a normal human with a few weird add-ons.

Edited to add: That isn't meant to say that TG characters aren't normal humans, I just mean that she's not really furry as it is, more like a koneko cosplay.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Or, you know, the dev could just create the character he wants to? Not everybody likes trans characters and it would be hard to make that optional, if it's one of the main characters.
As it is, Lucy is basically a normal human with a few weird add-ons.

Ikr, or just make her a trap instead.

Here you go
The in-game walkthrough is added as well, enjoy!

Much obliged.

 

[Killer7]

I'm gonna be honest here, I really just had in mind to create girl that has cat ears and tails without something special behind her. She is just that: A girl with cat ears and a cat tail.

I know I could have made her something more special than that but yeah, that was not my plan :/.

 

[Hones]

I'm gonna be honest here, I really just had in mind to create girl that has cat ears and tails without something special behind her. She is just that: A girl with cat ears and a cat tail.

I know I could have made her something more special than that but yeah, that was not my plan :/.

Nothing wrong with that

 

[Abîme]

Nice game and such cutes girls.

 

[botc76]

This game stays high on my list of new games. The two sisters are very cute, the mom looks a bit plain (obviously not her body, but her style, her face), but has a sweet character as well.

The slutty aunt and her earnest daughter can work out great as well. Fiona is a real turn-off so far.
If I hadn't read here that the MC will later turn the tables I would have just told her to fuck right off.

I have one minor issue (and I know many people will think exactly the opposite), it seems really weird that all three women in the family would be attracted to the MC so fast.

One of them, that seems possible, fe. that Sandra and the MC feel an instant attraction to each other, which is simply stronger than the societal laws regarding incest, because they can't really see each other as brother and sister.
Similar scenarios are possible for the other two girls as well, but when it is the case with ALL THREE of them, it's a bit too much for me to accept.


I don't mean to slow the progress as such, but maybe to stretch it over a bit more time.
Like you talk with Lucy several times on her beach hide-out, and slowly she falls for this first guy who was nice to her and showed an interest.

BTW, I don't mean to tell you how to write your game, if this is exactly how you want it, that's cool. I'm just offering my two cents in regards to how easy or hard it is to achieve suspension of disbelief as it is now.

 

[Killer7]

This game stays high on my list of new games. The two sisters are very cure, the mom looks a bit plain (obviously not her body, but her style, her facte), but has a sweet character as well.

The slutty aunt and her earnest daughter can work out great as well. Fiona is a real turn-off so far.
If I hadn't read here that the MC will later turn the tables I would have just told her to fuck right off.

I have one minor issue (and I know many people will think exactly the opposite), it seems really weird that all three women in the family would be attracted to the MC so fast.

One of them, that seems possible, fe. that Sandra and the MC feel an instant attraction to each other, which is simply stronger than the societal laws regarding incest, because they can't really see each other as brother and sister.
Similar scenarios are possible for the other two girls as well, but when it is the case with ALL THREE of them, it's a bit too much for me to accept.


I don't mean to slow the progress as such, but maybe to stretch it over a bit more time.
Like you talk with Lucy several times on her beach hide-out, and slowly she falls for this first guy who was nice to her and showed an interest.

BTW, I don't mean to tell you how to write your game, if this is exactly how you want it, that's cool. I'm just offering my two cents in regards to how easy or hard it is to achieve suspension of disbelief as it is now.

Thank you for your feedback my dude!

Regarding the girls falling in love with MC, that is only the case for Sandra so far. Lucy is still pretty insecure but is slowly warming up and Becca is also having heavy conflicted thoughts regarding MC. And Maddie simply doesn't know if she likes him as a cousin or as a lover. So for all of the girls except Sandra it will take some time before things get intimate. Except Fiona and Mary of course, where stuff already happened.

 

[vasnix]

in the scene where you put lotion on the aunt it looks like her tit is falling off.

 

[Hones]

in the scene where you put lotion on the aunt it looks like her tit is falling off.

Heh I never even noticed that before I guess my eyes were always drawn to her... tattoo...
ehem... yes tattoo not her ass... perverts

Spoiler: Boob detached

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[Killer7]

Oh yeah, I should try to fix that clipping. I will see what I can do with 0.3!

 

[Vrijgeest]

Is there any way to remove all the mum's and replace it with mom? British Asians are cute and all but I'm American and on this side of the pond we say mom.

Really. So we will have an American and British version? How about my country where mums are called ma or a German version with Mutti? Dont you see how ridiculous it would be? How about other American English words?

 

[mike2730]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4051, in script
f "Do you have any plans regarding work at the moment?"
Exception: Sayer 'f' is not defined.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4051, in script
f "Do you have any plans regarding work at the moment?"
File "C:\Users\Plomo\Desktop\MyNewFamilyPatreon-0.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 676, in execute
who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast)
File "C:\Users\Plomo\Desktop\MyNewFamilyPatreon-0.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 574, in eval_who
raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who.encode("utf-8"))
Exception: Sayer 'f' is not defined.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.2.320
My new family 0.2
Sun Sep 29 14:14:23 2019


Help plz ^^

 

[BabooJ1]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4051, in script
f "Do you have any plans regarding work at the moment?"
Exception: Sayer 'f' is not defined.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4051, in script
f "Do you have any plans regarding work at the moment?"
File "C:\Users\Plomo\Desktop\MyNewFamilyPatreon-0.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 676, in execute
who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast)
File "C:\Users\Plomo\Desktop\MyNewFamilyPatreon-0.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 574, in eval_who
raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who.encode("utf-8"))
Exception: Sayer 'f' is not defined.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.2.320
My new family 0.2
Sun Sep 29 14:14:23 2019


Help plz ^^

Which version did you download? From Patreon or the F95 version?