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I have now played to chapter 5 and there have been many moments that i found myself thinking how good the writing were 
. Lot of jokes that made Lucy look adorable and sandras super times made me laugh a lot.
I disliked fiona and tanjas character thought but i get the feeling that there might be reason for it so time being i decided to see if they could be nice too.
Becca and mary what i can say 2 beautiful milfs that make lewd jokes and are sweet. Personally i like the type myself in rl. It was bit hard for me to read their past experiences with mans and that pulled genuinely my own heart strings.
Lucy and alice are cute and adorable and pulled my heart strings really hard. it was hard to read sometimes their plot but those cute smile moments were so cute...writer really hitted home there.
Madelaine...oh boy she is stunning. That bit dominant side of her is kind of hot and she has this sweet side of her as well... i instantly liked her char when first she was introduced.
This is really well written it is bit strange to read household, roommate etc but i really enjoy this visual novel. There is lot of funny jokes, adorable and cute moments, right amount lewd and each charachter has their own personality. I dislike fiona and tanja as i said and it is sometimes hard for me to read but in general this is very well done. Thank you for amazing visual novel i cant wait to see what there is store for us
. Lot of jokes that made Lucy look adorable and sandras super times made me laugh a lot. I disliked fiona and tanjas character thought but i get the feeling that there might be reason for it so time being i decided to see if they could be nice too.
Becca and mary what i can say 2 beautiful milfs that make lewd jokes and are sweet. Personally i like the type myself in rl. It was bit hard for me to read their past experiences with mans and that pulled genuinely my own heart strings.
Lucy and alice are cute and adorable and pulled my heart strings really hard. it was hard to read sometimes their plot but those cute smile moments were so cute...writer really hitted home there.
Madelaine...oh boy she is stunning. That bit dominant side of her is kind of hot and she has this sweet side of her as well... i instantly liked her char when first she was introduced.
This is really well written
it is bit strange to read household, roommate etc but i really enjoy this visual novel. There is lot of funny jokes, adorable and cute moments, right amount lewd and each charachter has their own personality. I dislike fiona and tanja as i said and it is sometimes hard for me to read but in general this is very well done. Thank you for amazing visual novel i cant wait to see what there is store for us 
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Install the patch from the OP to get rid of the landlady, roommate thing. It's only there so Patreon doesn't cry.
Also... the story tells you why Fiona acts the way she does and well... Tanja... Tanja is not that bad either, if you give her a chance.
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Lol Tanja just doesn't feel like a real person to me. I mean after that first date where she basically rants about emotionally torturing people. I mean bullies might feel that way deep down. But they don't rant to their opposite number about it on their first date like they're proud of what a piece of shit they are.
I kinda wish she was just .. dropped. And the time spent on her spent on better characters. I understand what the dev was going for but the writing for her is just so ham fisted it ruins any sense you are interacting with something real.
Don't get me wrong I liked a lot of the characters. But I feel like the writer is falling into the trap of avoiding taking things toward a conclusion. And just keeps adding more girls. After a while it starts to feel like whiplash your dragged from one budding romance to another.
Ofcourse this might be intentional as that first crossing of the line so to speak is easy and heady writing. But I wish the writer would focus more on the family harem aspects instead of just keeping ON adding to the already bloated cast XD
I kinda wish she was just .. dropped. And the time spent on her spent on better characters. I understand what the dev was going for but the writing for her is just so ham fisted it ruins any sense you are interacting with something real.
Don't get me wrong I liked a lot of the characters. But I feel like the writer is falling into the trap of avoiding taking things toward a conclusion. And just keeps adding more girls. After a while it starts to feel like whiplash your dragged from one budding romance to another.
Ofcourse this might be intentional as that first crossing of the line so to speak is easy and heady writing. But I wish the writer would focus more on the family harem aspects instead of just keeping ON adding to the already bloated cast XD
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Tanja is a bit controversial and a part of her story was dropped. There was a pet path for her, that was dropped in favour of her "redemption arc".
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Yeah like I said I get what the writer was going for, I just think it was handled very poorly. It felt like she was a caricature in order to fill the role that was needed in the plot. And that's fine until you try to make her romancable rather than a character you forget about once she runs out of that restaurant.
Don't get me wrong I really like the game. The graphics are actually a lot better than they look in the screenshots. The animations are great. And the writing although a tad ham fisted at times is very enjoyable. There are times when I wish the MC would say something he doesn't though. Like ..
Don't get me wrong I really like the game. The graphics are actually a lot better than they look in the screenshots. The animations are great. And the writing although a tad ham fisted at times is very enjoyable. There are times when I wish the MC would say something he doesn't though. Like ..
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I mean you can do that if you want, might lead to bugs though not sure.
What MNF needs when it's finished, which is soon-ish is Killer looking at every line of code again to iron out some of the problems that happen if you reject some girls. Some of the renders also need an overhaul.
There was talk about solo-paths of the girls but I'm not sure if that's still being considered given how huge the game already is and how much work that would be.
What I hope is that we get a 1.0 Completed at some point where the two big chapters v0.14 and the rest are merged into one game.
Wouldn't work on android (file size) but on PC that would be nice. I think some of those bugfixes and grammar/writing mistakes could be implemented then.
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Yeah it's just that she takes time away from other dev things. I like harem games but there's such a thing as too big and I think it hit it a while ago XD Multiple is cool and all but at a certain point you really do start to feel like a jerk who's devaluing the people that love you. I kinda feel that way about suns's sister and the purple haired one .. I mean fuck I don't even remember their names off the top of my head.
I guess it depends on ur fantasy. I guess I'm more into a pride of lioness's than palace's full of sluts XD
I guess it depends on ur fantasy. I guess I'm more into a pride of lioness's than palace's full of sluts XD
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Soo and Dianna? They both have very few scenes anyway.
But you are right of course. Harem games with too many girls suffer in that way.
That's why I only really care for the core family + Fiona and some of the side characters like Sun.
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Yeah I think I see the disconnect now. The game goes for emotional impact and does it well. So the harem feels way too big. It feels dishonest.
If this were a more nukige focused title I wouldn't care. But the size of the harem actively makes me feel bad. Because the writer made me care about these characters as more than just tits and ass. So after a while I end up feeling kinda ambivalent. I do agree that the two i mentioned don't take much time. But they threaten to in future they are here and romancable so the dev will no doubt feel compelled to add to their content.
IMHO you could remove diana, soo, yvonne, alice and YES even SUN .. *ducks to avoid the boo's and rotten vegetables.*
Look Sun is .. really cute .. I really like her. But she wasn't very necessary to the whole plot. Though I think if Fiona had been handled better she could have been more central.
Alice is also cute .. but .. again character bloat.
I think if you want emotional connection in a harem six is about the limit. Eight at the absolute most. This game has 12 and I see the room for more on the upper balcony in the fekkin title screen ..
If this were a more nukige focused title I wouldn't care. But the size of the harem actively makes me feel bad. Because the writer made me care about these characters as more than just tits and ass. So after a while I end up feeling kinda ambivalent. I do agree that the two i mentioned don't take much time. But they threaten to in future they are here and romancable so the dev will no doubt feel compelled to add to their content.
IMHO you could remove diana, soo, yvonne, alice and YES even SUN .. *ducks to avoid the boo's and rotten vegetables.*
Look Sun is .. really cute .. I really like her. But she wasn't very necessary to the whole plot. Though I think if Fiona had been handled better she could have been more central.
Alice is also cute .. but .. again character bloat.
I think if you want emotional connection in a harem six is about the limit. Eight at the absolute most. This game has 12 and I see the room for more on the upper balcony in the fekkin title screen ..
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the redhead gingers and mom are all i need
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i just need fluffy only the ladies can disappear [please don't]
at least all the characters know about each other or mostly, i play another game that every girl [save for three] know nothing of the others or anything. tho i think that game SA is meant to be played all paths are self enclosed or something
at least all the characters know about each other or mostly, i play another game that every girl [save for three] know nothing of the others or anything. tho i think that game SA is meant to be played all paths are self enclosed or something
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Honestly a lot depends on context. This game goes for feels and that makes it feel bad. But then you look at a game like WMA where your main girl actively gets off on you fucking around. It's not just a matter of permissions she is completely into it lol. She is even super enthusiastic about you signing up to a service where you impregnate random women. Even if you stay loyal to her she ends up pushing you onto woman after woman. If THAT is the situation .. hey it's not so bad. The girls knew what they were getting into and everyone acknowledges the OG gf as the queen bee. I think Sandra is a little more like that but I would have leaned into it more.
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That's Sandras kink too but not that extreme. She likes to share you. In this game though it's only with family and family friends. Also I might add she is never pushing the MC to do anything.
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I realize that I just think they should have leaned into it more. Somehow a big harem seems less abnoxious when the girls actually get off to the idea and aren't just putting up with it because there's only so much perfectoprotagonista to go around. That's why I object much less to Yvonne than to the others even though I think she was kind of unnecessary. Girl knew what she as getting into.
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Oh but they do. There are more than enough 3/4 somes in the game. The girls aren't jealous. They love the MC and the MC loves them. And they don't put up with it they embrace it. That's what makes it good. It's not a forced harem where they begrudgingly accept that the MC is in a relationship with other women.
Remember, this is a wholesome game about healing and love. Low drama and very story focused slice of life.
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I wouldn't call it Sandra's kink because I don't think for her it's a sexual thing why she likes to share the MC it's more that she wants to spread the happiness the MC brought to her and the family.
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Exactly, she feels like it's selfish to keep the MC's love all to herself.
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Yeah Jamie (Main girl from WMA) was a bit like that too but it was also easy to tell that she got off on the whole thing. Sandra is accepting but Jamie was like hey you fucked her right? Tell me all the gory details! Then go impregnate some milfs! It was totally her kink XD