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I had the crash when asking for a date... i download the correction, but should i start from beginning ??? cause my save is bugged now...
If you can't get back before that scene using the back arrow at the top of the sidebar and opening it with the bugfix html, you unfortuantely will have to start from the beginning. I'm really sorry...
 

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I am already playing with the latest version, I tried to sleep, but it doesn't work anyway.
I downloaded your save and loaded it using the available bugfix and everything works. After sleeping or advancing into the next day, "No Way Back" starts and you can complete it by interacting with Michelle in the living room on Thursday or Friday after 16:00 and using the option "Keep rummaging in the dirty laundry." and then "Start sniffing them." or "Start sniffing them again.". Last two options depends on if you have sniffed them before. I hope this helps.
 

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I managed to get the first date from the crossing line quest, but now nothing is happening even if im outside of the house at 20:00. Any tips?
 

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Thank you so much for your feedback. Really.

About the younger step-sister being Asian... Do you have any suggestion of a pornstar who could be in that role, then? I would be happy to hear your suggestions.
Afraid I'm not going to be much help there, especially since I have no idea what scenes you'll be needing/wanting to fulfill the story line you already have.
Going by your header pic I would have suggested a brunette but, since the mom is blonde in most scenes and even a redhead in her studio it won't really make any difference.
Who is the mom BTW? I know I've seen her but can't place her. The scenes you've chosen with her, though...
in the immortal words of Sir Robin of Williams:

Hot! Real hot! Damned hot!

... snip ...

Lastly, I'm also very thankful for your feedback about actions that increase character stats. I wasn't sure if I set those actions to be done only once per day, the game would become very grindy. I will set it like that in the next update then.
After playing to the end of the quests I take back my original statement about the point system. Leave it as you have it.
As it is, it still takes over 3 months of game time to get to the end of her quests. To reduce it to a single click per period could take at least twice that, especially when you starting adding other girls into the mix.

I did run into a few more bugs to swat, though nothing game breaking at this point.
During a few of the sex scenes the choice menus have scrambled code. A couple that come to mind are Thursday and Friday afternoons and when you're banging her in the kitchen. There are some others, but I don't recall where.

When you're at the New House, hitting the back button in some (half?) of the rooms will return you to the original house.

The back button for the main phone menu didn't work a lot of the time. I had to use your Stuck button in the side bar to exit the screen.

None of the time advance buttons in the side bar are working.

The amount of play time and content for your first release deserves another quote.
This time from King Osric:

What daring! What outrageousness! What insolence! What arrogance!... I salute you.
 
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KayDraemon

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Ah yes, another HTML game that gets 3 updates and then is lost in time forever. I'll see how this one makes it xD
 

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This story premise is not getting old at all. We need more games about le young man and his landlady. 95% of the website just isn't enough.
 

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Afraid I'm not going to be much help there, especially since I have no idea what scenes you'll be needing/wanting to fulfill the story line you already have.
Going by your header pic I would have suggested a brunette but, since the mom is blonde in most scenes and even a redhead in her studio it won't really make any difference.
Who is the mom BTW? I know I've seen her but can't place her. The scenes you've chosen with her, though...
in the immortal words of Sir Robin of Williams:

Hot! Real hot! Damned hot!


After playing to the end of the quests I take back my original statement about the point system. Leave it as you have it.
As it is, it still takes over 3 months of game time to get to the end of her quests. To reduce it to a single click per period could take at least twice that, especially when you starting adding other girls into the mix.

I did run into a few more bugs to swat, though nothing game breaking at this point.
During a few of the sex scenes the choice menus have scrambled code. A couple that come to mind are Thursday and Friday afternoons and when you're banging her in the kitchen. There are some others, but I don't recall where.

When you're at the New House, hitting the back button in some (half?) of the rooms will return you to the original house.

The back button for the main phone menu didn't work a lot of the time. I had to use your Stuck button in the side bar to exit the screen.

None of the time advance buttons in the side bar are working.

The amount of play time and content for your first release deserves another quote.
This time from King Osric:

What daring! What outrageousness! What insolence! What arrogance!... I salute you.
Thank you very much for your another feedback.

I will try fixing every problem that you mentioned. About the buttons to advance the time, you have to click them and then do something in the game to actually advance the time. I created them for me, to check if things work (which they don't apparently). But I didn't delete them, because I thought it would make things easier.

And India Summer is behind Michelle's character.
 

DeUglyOne

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Thank you very much for your another feedback.

I will try fixing every problem that you mentioned. About the buttons to advance the time, you have to click them and then do something in the game to actually advance the time. I created them for me, to check if things work (which they don't apparently). But I didn't delete them, because I thought it would make things easier.

And India Summer is behind Michelle's character.
I'll have to look up more India. Thank you.

Maybe make the skip buttons in the sidebar permanent and immediate? They could come in handy with values of 30 minutes, 1 hour and 2 hours. I've seen some games that include a day skip but with class time and work it shouldn't be necessary once the other girls are populated.

One other bug or omission I remembered after a few hours sleep: I don't remember the name of the quest. It was one of the last ones where you needed to have $1200. Nothing in the dialogues mentions a payoff and the money never disappears.
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One other suggestion I might make would be to put a girl's avatar on the maps to show where they are. Maybe include a marker of some kind, like a red ring around them or an exclamation point, to show a quest event. Once you start populating it could be easy to miss one.
 

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I'll have to look up more India. Thank you.

Maybe make the skip buttons in the sidebar permanent and immediate? They could come in handy with values of 30 minutes, 1 hour and 2 hours. I've seen some games that include a day skip but with class time and work it shouldn't be necessary once the other girls are populated.

One other bug or omission I remembered after a few hours sleep: I don't remember the name of the quest. It was one of the last ones where you needed to have $1200. Nothing in the dialogues mentions a payoff and the money never disappears.
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One other suggestion I might make would be to put a girl's avatar on the maps to show where they are. Maybe include a marker of some kind, like a red ring around them or an exclamation point, to show a quest event. Once you start populating it could be easy to miss one.
Thank you once again for your great feedback!

Skip buttons should be always visible and usable, and now they are also immediate (but that will be implemented in the next version, because I'm already working on it and can't upload just the html).

Also thanks to your suggestion, I added a new option when talking to Dad: If a player has 1200$, he can get angry at him and say exactly what you've written. Thank you for that! (I will write your name in the new 'Thank you' page, probably implemented in the next version)

About the indication of characters that are currently in rooms, I wanted to implement that, but I didn't know how to. Now I have a rough idea how that could be done and will probably program it in the upcoming updates.
 

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Thank you once again for your great feedback!

Skip buttons should be always visible and usable, and now they are also immediate (but that will be implemented in the next version, because I'm already working on it and can't upload just the html).

Also thanks to your suggestion, I added a new option when talking to Dad: If a player has 1200$, he can get angry at him and say exactly what you've written. Thank you for that! (I will write your name in the new 'Thank you' page, probably implemented in the next version)

About the indication of characters that are currently in rooms, I wanted to implement that, but I didn't know how to. Now I have a rough idea how that could be done and will probably program it in the upcoming updates.
I think that would have more impact as the last event in the quest, after he waits for her in the evening and makes her his. You have to have the $1200 to get to that point anyway.
 

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Hello.

For a first release, this game is interesting.

The worldbuilding is already abundant.
The characters are a few but different and well developped.
The story is short but progressive.
The art is well choosen.

You want the MC to make his name known but how? Intelligence, body, creativity, relationships, money, sexual conquests, all of them, more?
The maps are well done but the style of the letters is old school (I feel like I'm playing Y's the Vanished Omen). What is the 3 in the men toilets? You should change Duncan's House with home as long as he stays there.
You should make the school unavailable like the shops when it's closed and it shouldn't be opened on saturday and sunday. There should be the school schedule somewhere after it's introduced (phone, library...).
Some stats aren't displayed (like strength or grades). Will the stats be useful outside quests (work, other events like candle light diner or picnic or other ideas you'd think)?
After you build the atelier, you won't be able to have access to any content happening in the living room if you work after school.
The starting quest is confusing (having 2000$ and a job) while you can do other quests.
Some events are happening but how? Stepmom visit in your room in the evening, joining you in the swimming pool. You should make the father be in another room for all the content happening in the parent's room. Nobody is suspecting or hearing anything at school? Will it be possible to watch TV with her? Cooking with her outside the quest?
After the introduction, the sister vanished?

You should maintain some consistency. Even if you don't find the right scene with the model you choose, you should stay close because changing hair or body type (yeah suddenly he has tattoos) feels weird, though the gifs you've choosen are very good. In the dialogs too, she's ok with showing her butt at school but not with a slap on the butt in the kitchen?

The back arrow is often useless. Thus you loose time.
The time jump on the left work only after choosing an action. It should work directly (well, you've already answered while I was writing^^).
You shouldn't have to click 2 times to leave the house or the school.
The inventory in the phone feels strange.

I'm blocked with the "Crossing line" quest, unable to date her anymore.

For the sex part, is it one partner, a harem, some gangbang? Do you plan to include bi, gay or lesbian content? Some special kinks? Some sex toys?

I'm not sure if that suggestion with the dad is correct if the MC never had any problem with him (maybe it's in later quests). It's too harsh where I'm at in the game. And from my point of view, it should be her quitting the dad saying his son is more satisfying.

I found an error during the sniffing panties event (cf files).

I think that's enough. I may have forgotten some things though.

Good continuation.
 
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