now i downloaded this file and it worked, i hadn't seen this.
But after the event these errors come out.
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But after the event these errors come out.
You should be able to propose a massage session on weekends, in parent's room, at 9:00. Michelle has to be on corruption lvl 1. After proposing the massage, go to the living room to start the scene.
I managed to get the first date from the crossing line quest, but now nothing is happening even if im outside of the house at 20:00. Any tips?
Ah yes, another HTML game that gets 3 updates and then is lost in time forever. I'll see how this one makes it xD
This story premise is not getting old at all. We need more games about le young man and his landlady. 95% of the website just isn't enough.
Thank you very much for your another feedback.
I will try fixing every problem that you mentioned. About the buttons to advance the time, you have to click them and then do something in the game to actually advance the time. I created them for me, to check if things work (which they don't apparently). But I didn't delete them, because I thought it would make things easier.
And India Summer is behind Michelle's character.
Thank you once again for your great feedback!
Skip buttons should be always visible and usable, and now they are also immediate (but that will be implemented in the next version, because I'm already working on it and can't upload just the html).
Also thanks to your suggestion, I added a new option when talking to Dad: If a player has 1200$, he can get angry at him and say exactly what you've written. Thank you for that! (I will write your name in the new 'Thank you' page, probably implemented in the next version)
About the indication of characters that are currently in rooms, I wanted to implement that, but I didn't know how to. Now I have a rough idea how that could be done and will probably program it in the upcoming updates.
Tried latest bugfix? If yes, please send me your save file and I will try fixing it.
Hello.
For a first release, this game is interesting.
The worldbuilding is already abundant.
The characters are a few but different and well developped.
The story is short but progressive.
The art is well choosen.
You want the MC to make his name known but how? Intelligence, body, creativity, relationships, money, sexual conquests, all of them, more?
The maps are well done but the style of the letters is old school (I feel like I'm playing Y's the Vanished Omen). What is the 3 in the men toilets? You should change Duncan's House with home as long as he stays there.
You should make the school unavailable like the shops when it's closed and it shouldn't be opened on saturday and sunday. There should be the school schedule somewhere after it's introduced (phone, library...).
Some stats aren't displayed (like strength or grades). Will the stats be useful outside quests (work, other events like candle light diner or picnic or other ideas you'd think)?
After you build the atelier, you won't be able to have access to any content happening in the living room if you work after school.
The starting quest is confusing (having 2000$ and a job) while you can do other quests.
Some events are happening but how? Stepmom visit in your room in the evening, joining you in the swimming pool. You should make the father be in another room for all the content happening in the parent's room. Nobody is suspecting or hearing anything at school? Will it be possible to watch TV with her? Cooking with her outside the quest?
After the introduction, the sister vanished?
You should maintain some consistency. Even if you don't find the right scene with the model you choose, you should stay close because changing hair or body type (yeah suddenly he has tattoos) feels weird, though the gifs you've choosen are very good. In the dialogs too, she's ok with showing her butt at school but not with a slap on the butt in the kitchen?
The back arrow is often useless. Thus you loose time.
The time jump on the left work only after choosing an action. It should work directly (well, you've already answered while I was writing^^).
You shouldn't have to click 2 times to leave the house or the school.
The inventory in the phone feels strange.
I'm blocked with the "Crossing line" quest, unable to date her anymore.
For the sex part, is it one partner, a harem, some gangbang? Do you plan to include bi, gay or lesbian content? Some special kinks? Some sex toys?
I'm not sure if that suggestion with the dad is correct if the MC never had any problem with him (maybe it's in later quests). It's too harsh where I'm at in the game. And from my point of view, it should be her quitting the dad saying his son is more satisfying.
I found an error during the sniffing panties event (cf files).
I think that's enough. I may have forgotten some things though.
Good continuation.
For a first release, this game is interesting.
The worldbuilding is already abundant.
The characters are a few but different and well developped.
The story is short but progressive.
The art is well choosen.
You want the MC to make his name known but how? Intelligence, body, creativity, relationships, money, sexual conquests, all of them, more?
The maps are well done but the style of the letters is old school (I feel like I'm playing Y's the Vanished Omen). What is the 3 in the men toilets? You should change Duncan's House with home as long as he stays there.
You should make the school unavailable like the shops when it's closed and it shouldn't be opened on saturday and sunday. There should be the school schedule somewhere after it's introduced (phone, library...).
Some stats aren't displayed (like strength or grades). Will the stats be useful outside quests (work, other events like candle light diner or picnic or other ideas you'd think)?
After you build the atelier, you won't be able to have access to any content happening in the living room if you work after school.
The starting quest is confusing (having 2000$ and a job) while you can do other quests.
Some events are happening but how? Stepmom visit in your room in the evening, joining you in the swimming pool. You should make the father be in another room for all the content happening in the parent's room. Nobody is suspecting or hearing anything at school? Will it be possible to watch TV with her? Cooking with her outside the quest?
After the introduction, the sister vanished?
You should maintain some consistency. Even if you don't find the right scene with the model you choose, you should stay close because changing hair or body type (yeah suddenly he has tattoos) feels weird, though the gifs you've choosen are very good. In the dialogs too, she's ok with showing her butt at school but not with a slap on the butt in the kitchen?
The back arrow is often useless. Thus you loose time.
The time jump on the left work only after choosing an action. It should work directly (well, you've already answered while I was writing^^).
You shouldn't have to click 2 times to leave the house or the school.
The inventory in the phone feels strange.
I'm blocked with the "Crossing line" quest, unable to date her anymore.
For the sex part, is it one partner, a harem, some gangbang? Do you plan to include bi, gay or lesbian content? Some special kinks? Some sex toys?
I'm not sure if that suggestion with the dad is correct if the MC never had any problem with him (maybe it's in later quests). It's too harsh where I'm at in the game. And from my point of view, it should be her quitting the dad saying his son is more satisfying.
I found an error during the sniffing panties event (cf files).
I think that's enough. I may have forgotten some things though.
Good continuation.
First of all, thank you very much for your feedback!
MC will make his name known through special quests given out by the school's principal (getting known in school), going through many jobs and advancing onto more prestigious ones (these two ways will be 100% implemented, but there will be more ways for sure after those two will be implemented).
I know my travel maps look weird, I'm currently learning pixel-art and hopefully reworking them.
The number 3 in the men's bathroom at school is a toilet booth with a hole to the women's bathroom. You probably know where this is going. There are currently no scenes for that in 0.1, but will be in the next version probably.
You're right about school. School won't be available on weekends and you won't be able to go there when it's not open. Sadly I can't implement it as bugfix anymore, since I started working on the next version.
School schedule and 'schedule' of every character will be accessible on phone also in the next version of the game.
Strength and other stats (like charisma, social, perception, lying and more) will be displayed when there are scenes affected by them.
That's not the starting quest. That's just a hint for anyone who has no active quests after completing Michelle's story.
Those are scenes that happen randomly after reaching a certain corruption level with her.
That's true but there is no indication that he's actually there.
If I find a scene with India Summer (Michelle's character) while watching TV, you can be sure I will implement it.
That's actually very possible. I'm thinking that after reaching 50 cooking, you will have to practice cooking with her to increase your skill.
Well, right now, yes. But I'm working on adding her as soon as possible. Next update (probably next week) will be introducing Kiley (older step-sister), then the update after that should introduce Summer (younger step-sister). But seeing that the game still has a lot of bugs (even though I fixed like 7 of them yesterday already), the update will probably be delayed.
Thanks for mentioning that! I will look into it and fix it.
Yeah, I understand that totally. But it is basically choosing between two options: 1. Having a good amount of scenes or 2. Having a small amount of scenes but with a great similarity. I chose the first one.
I know, but that's the engine's feature and I kept it in, so that you can go back and choose a different dialog option. Please don't use it for anything else!
I know it is one click more that it should be, but there will be some scenes/events happening outside of the house, so I will leave it like that for now. But it's true about leaving the school. I'm fixing it now!
That's a hard question. The game's focus is about the relationship between MC and one character. But if I stumble upon a great scene that can be also implemented into the story, I will add it. So, to answer your question, I'm not planning to add gay, bisexual or lesbian content, but it is possible that there will be some (there will also be a warning for anyone who doesn't like that type of content).
It's a dialog option, so you don't have to pick it if you don't feel like that's a good reaction.
Regarding your errors, you can't probably date her, because you already asked her out. Be outside of Duncan's house at 20:00. If it still doesn't work, just send me your save file and I will try fixing it! Also thanks for including a screenshot with the error during the sniffing panties event, I will look into that!
And again, thank you for your amazing feedback!
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Thanks, unlucky people are getting stuck here just before the action starts. That info could be in the game. Also there is a problem with continuity - Corruption on Michelle Duncan 3 Crossing Line:
"Michelle: You are gonna fuck me today.
Oh my god, it is finally happening. My step-mother will let me fuck her finally. All the hard work paid off. I looked down to my rising bulge."
What? We were already fucking in the new house... from new_house1-15.mp4 to new_house1-24.mp4
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Yeah, her 'schedule' will be implemeted in the next version, next week.
You're right. That New House scene is the only way to have sex with her before reaching corruption lvl 4. I will make sure that the internal monolog you quoted won't happen if you have invited her to stay at the New House. Thank you!
Hello.
Thanks a lot for the explainations.
And the next week, I could buy the new house. The call (saturday evening) was surrealist : the MC is the only person with a bright future within the students and with a job...
The first time I got there (yeah, it was a sunday), stepmother was already there. It was a surprise since I've gone there the first thing after getting up. But I suppose it was a just coincidence.
She's supposed to stay the day but she was nowhere to be found during some time range (after lunch and late afternoon).
When you sleep or swim in the new house, you're teleported at your old house.
Why can you shower here and not in the old one (for being joined by stepmother? In that case, it could happen there too).
I found another error when you have sex with stepmother in the new house before going to bed (cf files).
Your answers made me more interested in your game.
Thanks a lot for the explainations.
Thanks. It'll become useful.
I know that now but, when I first saw it, I thought : "To corrupt Michelle I need a job and 2000$". It took me some time to click on the link for precisions and really start the game.
Ok. I was expecting there was a time period but it's just random.
Cool. I was expecting the increase could also be done in a restaurant/cafe for another possible job because reading or searching on internet to increase the stats to 100 seems too easy for me.
Then your forgot a room for the older step-sister. Or does she already have her own home?
It wasn't a reproach since what you've choosen is really good. But I've seen so many negative comments about real porn games that I thought it was better to warn you.
I'm glad you're open with everything. Having variety in a porn game is better.
It only worked once (the saturday I was playing on). I walked around town and played in the fountain.
And the next week, I could buy the new house. The call (saturday evening) was surrealist : the MC is the only person with a bright future within the students and with a job...
The first time I got there (yeah, it was a sunday), stepmother was already there. It was a surprise since I've gone there the first thing after getting up. But I suppose it was a just coincidence.
She's supposed to stay the day but she was nowhere to be found during some time range (after lunch and late afternoon).
When you sleep or swim in the new house, you're teleported at your old house.
Why can you shower here and not in the old one (for being joined by stepmother? In that case, it could happen there too).
I found another error when you have sex with stepmother in the new house before going to bed (cf files).
Your answers made me more interested in your game.