Hello.
For a first release, this game is interesting.
The worldbuilding is already abundant.
The characters are a few but different and well developped.
The story is short but progressive.
The art is well choosen.
You want the MC to make his name known but how? Intelligence, body, creativity, relationships, money, sexual conquests, all of them, more?
The maps are well done but the style of the letters is old school (I feel like I'm playing Y's the Vanished Omen). What is the 3 in the men toilets? You should change Duncan's House with home as long as he stays there.
You should make the school unavailable like the shops when it's closed and it shouldn't be opened on saturday and sunday. There should be the school schedule somewhere after it's introduced (phone, library...).
Some stats aren't displayed (like strength or grades). Will the stats be useful outside quests (work, other events like candle light diner or picnic or other ideas you'd think)?
After you build the atelier, you won't be able to have access to any content happening in the living room if you work after school.
The starting quest is confusing (having 2000$ and a job) while you can do other quests.
Some events are happening but how? Stepmom visit in your room in the evening, joining you in the swimming pool. You should make the father be in another room for all the content happening in the parent's room. Nobody is suspecting or hearing anything at school? Will it be possible to watch TV with her? Cooking with her outside the quest?
After the introduction, the sister vanished?
You should maintain some consistency. Even if you don't find the right scene with the model you choose, you should stay close because changing hair or body type (yeah suddenly he has tattoos) feels weird, though the gifs you've choosen are very good. In the dialogs too, she's ok with showing her butt at school but not with a slap on the butt in the kitchen?
The back arrow is often useless. Thus you loose time.
The time jump on the left work only after choosing an action. It should work directly (well, you've already answered while I was writing^^).
You shouldn't have to click 2 times to leave the house or the school.
The inventory in the phone feels strange.
I'm blocked with the "Crossing line" quest, unable to date her anymore.
For the sex part, is it one partner, a harem, some gangbang? Do you plan to include bi, gay or lesbian content? Some special kinks? Some sex toys?
I'm not sure if that suggestion with the dad is correct if the MC never had any problem with him (maybe it's in later quests). It's too harsh where I'm at in the game. And from my point of view, it should be her quitting the dad saying his son is more satisfying.
I found an error during the sniffing panties event (cf files).
I think that's enough. I may have forgotten some things though.
Good continuation.
First of all, thank you very much for your feedback!
MC will make his name known through special quests given out by the school's principal (getting known in school), going through many jobs and advancing onto more prestigious ones (these two ways will be 100% implemented, but there will be more ways for sure after those two will be implemented).
I know my travel maps look weird, I'm currently learning pixel-art and hopefully reworking them.
The number 3 in the men's bathroom at school is a toilet booth with a hole to the women's bathroom. You probably know where this is going. There are currently no scenes for that in 0.1, but will be in the next version probably.
You're right about school. School won't be available on weekends and you won't be able to go there when it's not open. Sadly I can't implement it as bugfix anymore, since I started working on the next version.
School schedule and 'schedule' of every character will be accessible on phone also in the next version of the game.
Strength and other stats (like charisma, social, perception, lying and more) will be displayed when there are scenes affected by them.
The starting quest is confusing (having 2000$ and a job) while you can do other quests.
That's not the starting quest. That's just a hint for anyone who has no active quests after completing Michelle's story.
Some events are happening but how? Stepmom visit in your room in the evening, joining you in the swimming pool.
Those are scenes that happen randomly after reaching a certain corruption level with her.
You should make the father be in another room for all the content happening in the parent's room.
That's true but there is no indication that he's actually there.
Will it be possible to watch TV with her?
If I find a scene with India Summer (Michelle's character) while watching TV, you can be sure I will implement it.
Cooking with her outside the quest?
That's actually very possible. I'm thinking that after reaching 50 cooking, you will have to practice cooking with her to increase your skill.
After the introduction, the sister vanished?
Well, right now, yes. But I'm working on adding her as soon as possible. Next update (probably next week) will be introducing Kiley (older step-sister), then the update after that should introduce Summer (younger step-sister). But seeing that the game still has a lot of bugs (even though I fixed like 7 of them yesterday already), the update will probably be delayed.
In the dialogs too, she's ok with showing her butt at school but not with a slap on the butt in the kitchen?
Thanks for mentioning that! I will look into it and fix it.
You should maintain some consistency. Even if you don't find the right scene with the model you choose, you should stay close because changing hair or body type (yeah suddenly he has tattoos) feels weird, though the gifs you've choosen are very good.
Yeah, I understand that totally. But it is basically choosing between two options: 1. Having a good amount of scenes or 2. Having a small amount of scenes but with a great similarity. I chose the first one.
The back arrow is often useless. Thus you loose time.
I know, but that's the engine's feature and I kept it in, so that you can go back and choose a different dialog option. Please don't use it for anything else!
You shouldn't have to click 2 times to leave the house or the school.
I know it is one click more that it should be, but there will be some scenes/events happening outside of the house, so I will leave it like that for now. But it's true about leaving the school. I'm fixing it now!
For the sex part, is it one partner, a harem, some gangbang? Do you plan to include bi, gay or lesbian content? Some special kinks? Some sex toys?
That's a hard question. The game's focus is about the relationship between MC and one character. But if I stumble upon a great scene that can be also implemented into the story, I will add it. So, to answer your question, I'm not planning to add gay, bisexual or lesbian content, but it is possible that there will be some (there will also be a warning for anyone who doesn't like that type of content).
I'm not sure if that suggestion with the dad is correct if the MC never had any problem with him (maybe it's in later quests). It's too harsh where I'm at in the game. And from my point of view, it should be her quitting the dad saying his son is more satisfying.
It's a dialog option, so you don't have to pick it if you don't feel like that's a good reaction.
Regarding your errors, you can't probably date her, because you already asked her out. Be outside of Duncan's house at 20:00. If it still doesn't work, just send me your save file and I will try fixing it! Also thanks for including a screenshot with the error during the sniffing panties event, I will look into that!
And again, thank you for your amazing feedback!
