- Jul 13, 2018
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Damn, she's cute and what an ass she has on her! 
Time to reconnect with my sister, in more ways than one!
Time to reconnect with my sister, in more ways than one!
Here's to dreaming! For we are mounting a raid to the Sun!
You're not wrong my friend, but it's honestly difficult to define such a thing gramatically. Both ways are correct from what I understand
It's always good to return to one's familyDamn, she's cute and what an ass she has on her!
Time to reconnect with my sister, in more ways than one!
You've always been my hero Batman
- Jun 9, 2017
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- Aug 22, 2018
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Not a lot here, but a decent first release. I hope we see a solid, well-developed story here in the future.
Just finished playing through and when I tried to save I got an exception error. Is anyone else having this problem? I tried restarting the game and played a little and tried to save and still got the same error.
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 372, in __call__
renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
Exception: Not saved - no valid save locations.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in script
$ ui.interact()
File "renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in <module>
$ ui.interact()
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3007, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3816, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1027, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 48, in event
return self.new_widget.event(ev, x, y, st) # E1101
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1027, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1027, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 720, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1027, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 245, in event
rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1027, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 245, in event
rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1027, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 245, in event
rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 969, in event
return handle_click(self.clicked)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 904, in handle_click
rv = run(action)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 323, in run
return action(*args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 372, in __call__
renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
File "renpy/loadsave.py", line 431, in save
location.save(slotname, sr)
File "renpy/savelocation.py", line 421, in save
raise Exception("Not saved - no valid save locations.")
Exception: Not saved - no valid save locations.
Windows-10-10.0.18362
Ren'Py 7.4.2.1292
My sister and I 0.1
Sun Mar 7 22:15:16 2021- Aug 22, 2018
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Weird, but no. I can save and load just fine without errors. Where did you save, exactly?
Oh, that's quite weird. We'll look into it as soon as possible, thanks for reporting it!
Thank you very much for your review! I hope that you'll enjoy the next release!
- Aug 22, 2018
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- Feb 13, 2020
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Cute character, and a 1 on 1 slow burn game is nice if full of sugary romantic moments and little tidbits of titillation. Will be keeping an eye on this one.
That being said I saw a whole bunch of moments where the characters say "bro, or sis" regardless of what is entered in the beginning. While I know this game is obviously meant to be a sister relationship game using personalized entries to squeak by TOS I hope the Dev leans more into the customizable relationship aspect. I like sister incest but I am a bigger fan of cousin incest and having options is nice.
That being said I saw a whole bunch of moments where the characters say "bro, or sis" regardless of what is entered in the beginning. While I know this game is obviously meant to be a sister relationship game using personalized entries to squeak by TOS I hope the Dev leans more into the customizable relationship aspect. I like sister incest but I am a bigger fan of cousin incest and having options is nice.
Thank you for your review, you shall receive the amount of sugar you ask for my friend!
Pacing is definitely the top concern as I believe the flow of the story is what will decide wether this game fails or succeeds
Regarding what you said about customization, that's something I didn't realise but will look into for the next update as you're quite right that it's probably possible to accomodate other types of "relationships"
- Aug 1, 2017
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I'm not going to leave a review just yet, but right now I'd give it a 3/5. The sister is one of the best models i've seen around here, and so far that's all that matters visual-wise, keep it up (maybe try to add some more expressions). My gripe is with her character and how bland the story's looking like. Usually, i'm fine with generic writing, but only if the game focuses on having a bunch of scenes, where having dumb characters facillitates jumping from a scene to the other with little development.
But it seems that the dev is aiming for a more vanilla, slow burn romance, which is also fine, but use your cards to your advantage. She seems like she's just a clingy girlfriend that came out of nowhere, I think that an incest story should play with how you two begin like any other siblings would, but slowly realize their feelings to one another and keep blowing that flame brighter without burning the candle away. That adds a ton to both the Sister and the "I", alongside making for a more interesting romance story. Of course, it might just not be my cup of tea, if the dev really wants to go with the generic imouto story, but I'll throw my opinion here if it's for any good.
Here's hoping for the best on the project, regardless!
But it seems that the dev is aiming for a more vanilla, slow burn romance, which is also fine, but use your cards to your advantage. She seems like she's just a clingy girlfriend that came out of nowhere, I think that an incest story should play with how you two begin like any other siblings would, but slowly realize their feelings to one another and keep blowing that flame brighter without burning the candle away. That adds a ton to both the Sister and the "I", alongside making for a more interesting romance story. Of course, it might just not be my cup of tea, if the dev really wants to go with the generic imouto story, but I'll throw my opinion here if it's for any good.
Here's hoping for the best on the project, regardless!
- Feb 5, 2020
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I read everything I needed to know and decided to give it a chance. I enjoy wholesome vanilla romance. And this seems to play on that well. I think I read somewhere that the english is a bit muddy, and I agree. But it's not awful by any means.
I think my only real gripe is (and it's more of a personal pet peeve) that the MC is a bit of a pushover. The sister just kind of gets her way with no real resistance even though the MC's wishes are understandable and valid. That sort of thing just annoys me personally.
The writing is good, the siblings actually act like siblings (minus the sexual tension huehuehue). I see some potential.
I think my only real gripe is (and it's more of a personal pet peeve) that the MC is a bit of a pushover. The sister just kind of gets her way with no real resistance even though the MC's wishes are understandable and valid. That sort of thing just annoys me personally.
The writing is good, the siblings actually act like siblings (minus the sexual tension huehuehue). I see some potential.
Just where it defaults to. I just right-click to open the menu and click on the first empty save slot like I always do for other games.
- Feb 12, 2019
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Hmm, will the main character have the option of impregnating his sister in the future?
- Nov 18, 2016
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"little sister"... *looks at the tits*.... yeah... little :|
- Jul 30, 2017
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Holy crap she is stunning. i don't normally download a first release, but I think I will.
By the looks of it there is no sexual content yet and this is GOOD. Definitely should be some kind of build up.
By the looks of it there is no sexual content yet and this is GOOD. Definitely should be some kind of build up.
