You're free to have your opinion
@BadSisterFucker, no harm whatsoever in expressing that at all. I encourage
all most forms of criticism. I'm also free to write the story that I want to write. There are soooooo many games where the brother and sister end up in a relationship together and I wanted to write something different. When I started, there wasn't any story like the one I'm writing - every game out at the time seemed so formulaic. And to my knowledge, there still aren't any with this premise - where the sister corrupts the brother and the siblings don't end up together. Maybe that's because I'm an idiot for thinking that's a good idea, but I wanted to make something different from whats out there, that is somewhat plausible, yet exaggerated. Sorry if that's not what you're looking for, but that's what I want to make.
Yeah... I'm not as clever as that. It's more that I don't know what to use for dialogue other than "Oh yeah. Just like that! That feels so good!" during sex and I can't think of that many ways to describe "I slide my rock hard dick into her soaking wet pussy" without using a thesaurus. Plus I figured most people aren't focused on reading at that point anyway.