VN Ren'Py Completed My Sister, My Roommate [v1.69] [Sumodeine]

[fauxplayer]

How about "My Sister is My Roommate that I've kinda sexually attracted to and having weird feelings for, and she's going to help me get out of my shell and learn how to talk to girls, we may or may not have sex along the way, but if we do it's strictly for sex because I don't plan on her being the end mission of my life"?

As much as I laughed at this response to the peanut gallery, to be perfectly honest, this stream-of-consciousness blurb you've got here makes me think I'm gonna love the premise of this game!

All these people clutching their pearls in horror that a young man's sister might not be the target of her brother's sexual conquest while she just might enjoy sexual activities with men who are not her brother... GASP!!!!

Jesus Tapdancing Christ you snowflakes need to get a grip.

 

[HalGLC]

While I'm perfectly okay with a game where we don't fuck the sister, you got to realize by just putting 'sister' in the title people are going to assume she's a (if not the) target. Right or wrong, fair or not, that's the way things work. Plus the incest tag in itself leads people to assume that's going to happen.

None of that's strictly on you as the developer, and as I've said before I myself have bigger priorities than the sister (specifically that milf). I may not be a fan of watching the sister get fucked (in that I myself generally doesn't like to see anyone other than the MC have sex, while fully aware of the logical flaws I'm not big on voyeurism in games) I knew what was going to happen going in because despite what other complainers said, you've added the correct tags so I knew it. It's not a big deal, it's not a dealbreaker, and I've enjoyed what's been presented so far.

 

[Sumodeine]

While I'm perfectly okay with a game where we don't fuck the sister, you got to realize by just putting 'sister' in the title people are going to assume she's a (if not the) target. Right or wrong, fair or not, that's the way things work. Plus the incest tag in itself leads people to assume that's going to happen.

None of that's strictly on you as the developer, and as I've said before I myself have bigger priorities than the sister (specifically that milf). I may not be a fan of watching the sister get fucked (in that I myself generally doesn't like to see anyone other than the MC have sex, while fully aware of the logical flaws I'm not big on voyeurism in games) I knew what was going to happen going in because despite what other complainers said, you've added the correct tags so I knew it. It's not a big deal, it's not a dealbreaker, and I've enjoyed what's been presented so far.

Perfectly reasonable. For what it's worth, I didn't put any tags anywhere. I posted the demo on reddit and it found its way here. Never included any tags at all. I don't know how that works. Maybe the person that starts the thread adds tags?

Also, I never said that you won't have sex with her either... I just said she's not the end mission...

Seriously though - thank you for playing and being reasonable. Don't worry - we haven't seen the last of Mrs. Sollain either ;-)

 

[yihman1]

I checked out this game, and here are my thoughts:

The good:

An interesting concept. Lots of choices. The sister is kinda cute. Can't complain about the artwork, that's fine. Most of the dialogue is written properly in English even if it's morons saying stupid shit.

The bad:

Lots of choices only 1 of significance that is not an instant bad end.

A complete lack of control in every situation you are put in. You start off as a virgin guy. A drunken older married lady stumbles in that is friends with your mom, and is like "Lets fuck" more or less. You can't be like "No, you are too drunk, plus your married." as you may expect a shy virgin ot say... You MUST fuck this woman that you have put 0 effort in to courting. It's the equivalent of being tube fed when you feed her your meat tube.

You can not cunt block for your sister, and defend her purity either. There is no way to keep strange dicks out of her.

The "college party" has like 3 other people... Basically you talk with a some random girl while your sister sucks the dick of a stranger she just met. Not a real party now is it? If I were going to write that scene myself I would rewrite it so that this is your sisters boyfriend they been together a while so she doesn't come off as a total slut right off the bat.

The fast pacing of jumping in to strong sexual content almost immediately is a bit of a turn off. Shower peaking, seeing up skirt, maybe a kiss is fine this soon, but sucking dicks, and being fucked this fast is a no no.

Good/Bad Verdict:

Because of your inability to slow things down, and have a more pure route for both yourself and/or your sister the game is not so great. The good art, and proper use of words is just like putting a silk hat on a pig.

 

[Rosa Melano]

sister is no a slut is a complete whore and mc goes without options to stop her that would be the obvious choice of every brother no matter is he is interested sexually or not in her not a option to stop the woman that rape he, this game is just BS a turd in the sea

 

[Skylaroo]

A complete lack of control in every situation you are put in. You start off as a virgin guy. A drunken older married lady stumbles in that is friends with your mom, and is like "Lets fuck" more or less. You can't be like "No, you are too drunk, plus your married." as you may expect a shy virgin ot say... You MUST fuck this woman that you have put 0 effort in to courting. It's the equivalent of being tube fed when you feed her your meat tube.

This I agree with. Not just for the whole virgin thing, but I think sex as the main character should have an option to refuse. If the player decided to never have sex, so be it, but it's the main character and the player is supposed to be playing as the main character. To be forced to have sex without any option to refuse immediately removes the sense of being the main character.

You can not cunt block for your sister, and defend her purity either. There is no way to keep strange dicks out of her.

On this one, I completely disagree. You control the main character. You don't get to decide what happens to the other characters. The other characters should have their own characteristics because their lives don't revolve around the main character.

The "college party" has like 3 other people... Basically you talk with a some random girl while your sister sucks the dick of a stranger she just met. Not a real party now is it?

This is nitpicky because the party is just the setting where the event happens. The party is not the event.

If I were going to write that scene myself I would rewrite it so that this is your sisters boyfriend they been together a while so she doesn't come off as a total slut right off the bat.

But that's what the sister is. She is a slut.

My impression of you is that you wanted the sister exclusively for the main character. Unfortunately, that's not what the story is.

 

[yihman1]

On this one, I completely disagree. You control the main character. You don't get to decide what happens to the other characters. The other characters should have their own characteristics because their lives don't revolve around the main character.

Not saying that main character should be some sort of "puppet master", however it is entirely possible to sway one way or another if one person fucks another. For instance when the guy invited them to the "party"... All the MC needs to do is stay in the same room as his sister at all times. Maybe engage in a conversation with this guy to see what kind of guy he is, or his sister as they are still getting sitauated. Any good brother would do that for his sister to make sure she don't get date raped by some college guy she just met. It's not rocket science. They are twins remember, and twins share a special bond closer than regular siblings.

But that's what the sister is. She is a slut.

My impression of you is that you wanted the sister exclusively for the main character. Unfortunately, that's not what the story is.

No, it's fine if she gets some other dicks at some point in the story. I have no problem with that at all. In fact I think that is a fantastic idea... However there is a way to do it gracefully, and a way to do it disgracefully. The fact that she comes in so corrupted... The entire scene of the college in such a game is to add corruption. That girl that you meet prior to the party would have made a significantly better sister character personality wise. The sister going wild so fast is very bad for the story arc. After she has sucked a guy off, and fucked him in front of her brother so soon without significant build up, or exposition it's just bad.

For a story to be good there must be a proper build up. There is only one way to possibly salvage the story at this point honestly... That is for immediately at the start of the next update the brother wakes up, and the entire scene where the sister sucked, and fucked the stranger is just a dream thus lowering her corruption levels back to a tolerable level, and allowing for a proper build up.

If a proper build up is not allowed for, and it isn't transformed into "that was just a dream", then where does it go next? Gangbang? prostitution? bestiality? Once you step it up so high so early you must out do it by a lot later on when you make an attempt for a new climactic scene. The brother may as well become a pimp, and start selling his sisters pussy if her extremely slutty behavior is not revoked via a dream. Because if it's not stepped up to extremes then it will just be flat and boring.

 

[Penfold Mole]

@yihman1 just please read what the dev said about the game:

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The brother won't get to have an exclusive sexual relationship with his sister, just like IRL. And he most likely won't be able to change her behavior, either. This is not a "I love my sister and she loves (or will eventually love) me and we'll live together ever after" game. It's a "My sister is a huge slut and she'll be my wingman to get some girls and maybe she'll jump my bones for a few times, too," game.

If that isn't what you like, the game just isn't for you. The fact that you personally don't like it, does not make it bad.

The dev has said his word, don't try to pressure him to change his game the way you would like it. Have some respect and move along.

 

[yihman1]

@yihman1 just please read what the dev said about the game:

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The brother won't get to have an exlusive sexual relationship with his sister, just like IRL. And he most likely won't be able to change her behavior, either. This is not a "I love my sister and she loves (or will eventually love) me and we'll live together ever after" game. It's a "My sister is a huge slut and she'll be my wingman to get some girls and maybe she'll jump my bones for a few times, too," game.

If that isn't what you like, the game just isn't for you. The fact that you personally don't like it, does not make it bad.

The dev has said his word, don't try to pressure him to change his game the way you would like it. Have some respect and move along.

I'm not saying that the sister can not be a slut. Her being a slut is a fantastic story idea. I like that idea, and there could be a great story behind it.

It's the starting out she is already a complete, and total slut that is the issue. The sister has a line in the story that's "If there is one thing I know about it's how guys fuck up when they try to seduce me". Then she is like "I just want a guy that treats me right, a guy that knows I'm having a bad day and brings me flowers, and knows how to joke, and comfort me, and is good at giving massages."

Her dialogue here would indicate she she is not a complete and total slut...

There are different levels of slut... I'm not saying she should be the church going virgin that never seen a dick outside of a health book. However it would be way more appetizing if she were not blazing full slut mode from the start. Sucking, and fucking that guy she knew for an hour.

Here is how it went:
Hey, lets party your friends can come to.
Okay, down on knees sucking dick...
Lets go back to my place and fuck in front of my brother...

THAT IS TOO FAST!

Here is how it could have went...
Hey your cute, can I get your number?
Sure here you go.
They go for 1 or 2 coffees during the next week, and he sends her some texts, maybe a dick pic.
The following weekend he calls and says "Hey want to come to this party?"
Then it goes from there...
She is still fucking a guy she very recently met, but at least they had a coffee, and a dick pic as a build up.

The fact she known the guy under an hour before he is getting a BJ is too high a level of slut starting point. She said she wants a guy that treats her right! And Chad Thundercock fucking her in an hour destroys the words she spoke making her a lying cunt... I'm sort of cheering for her to get AIDS.

 

[User_32285]

Fun game, I just hope the sister will grow as an assertive sexual young women and not some drugged out cockwhore who will steal her parents jewelry for her pimp, boss or whatever.

 

[Papa Ernie]

@TCMS Please add male protagonist, masturbation, vaginal sex, and MILF tags. Thanks!

 

[TCMS]

@TCMS Please add male protagonist, masturbation, vaginal sex, and MILF tags. Thanks!

Done

 

[Penfold Mole]

I'm not saying that the sister can not be a slut. Her being a slut is a fantastic story idea. I like that idea, and there could be a great story behind it.

It's the starting out she is already a complete, and total slut that is the issue. The sister has a line in the story that's "If there is one thing I know about it's how guys fuck up when they try to seduce me". Then she is like "I just want a guy that treats me right, a guy that knows I'm having a bad day and brings me flowers, and knows how to joke, and comfort me, and is good at giving massages."

Being a total slut who fucks anything with a cock doesn't mean that she can't have a dream about a prince on a white horse who would win her heart by bringing her flowers, who would comfort her, give her massages and be funny. It also doesn't exactly mean that when she finds that kind of a prince for herself, she won't keep fucking others or have multiple princes at the same time. :biggrin:

Her dialogue here would indicate she she is not a complete and total slut...

So, in your world, sluts stop being human beings, girls with their own dreams and ideal of a man? Come on, sluts are normal girls too, some are very nice, actually.

There are different levels of slut... I'm not saying she should be the church going virgin that never seen a dick outside of a health book. However it would be way more appetizing if she were not blazing full slut mode from the start. Sucking, and fucking that guy she knew for an hour.

That's your personal preference, not something universal.

Here is how it went:
Hey, lets party your friends can come to.
Okay, down on knees sucking dick...
Lets go back to my place and fuck in front of my brother...

THAT IS TOO FAST!

Fast for you, maybe, not for her.
You are again talking about your personal preferences. You don't get to choose your siblings, you know. Not IRL and not in this game.
As I understand, she has been a total slut for quite some time, it's not like she started there at this party. She probably had someone watching her having sex before, it's just the first time when she does it with her brother watching her. We don't know that. It obviously isn't too fast for her, at least not when she's drunk.

Here is how it could have went...
Hey your cute, can I get your number?
Sure here you go.
They go for 1 or 2 coffees during the next week, and he sends her some texts, maybe a dick pic.
The following weekend he calls and says "Hey want to come to this party?"
Then it goes from there...
She is still fucking a guy she very recently met, but at least they had a coffee, and a dick pic as a build up.

Well, you're not the dev, so you don't get to decide how slutty the sister is exactly. That is again your personal preference. Doesn't mean that there is anyhing wrong with the scenario. You just don't like it much.

The fact she known the guy under an hour before he is getting a BJ is too high a level of slut starting point. She said she wants a guy that treats her right! And Chad Thundercock fucking her in an hour destroys the words she spoke making her a lying cunt... I'm sort of cheering for her to get AIDS.

No-no-no, this does not make her a liar. Those things aren't exclusive. What kind of a world are you living in? A girl can totally be a slut and still have her dreams of a white wedding, just like you can be a fucking perv on a pirate porn forum site and still have romantic dreams about virgin sisters . A slut is as much of a person as you are, maybe even nicer. And she can have nice dreams, but still fuck anything that moves. Not because she wants to find that perfect guy and goes through a bunch of guys because of that, but because it's fun and she likes it. Come on, hop down of that cloud you're living on, into the real world. Sluts are normal people, just slutty.

 

[Penfold Mole]

Fun game, I just hope the sister will grow as an assertive sexual young women and not some drugged out cockwhore who will steal her parents jewelry for her pimp, boss or whatever.

Well, she's not a whore, she's a slut. I doubt that she'll become a whore who steals her parents jewelry. :biggrin: But we can only cross our fingers and hope for the best.

 

[BigBabs69]

Jeez another argument. ill refrain from partaking in this one,just ganna go wait for next update

 

[j3wed]

Is this the 10th version or did this piece of garbage start with the ver. 0.10? could mods fix those issues and name them correctly 0.1 please. Just like the other assfaggots who name their first version 1.0, it's devious and misleading.

 

[riddikk91]

FFS... it's a porn game... lots of people fuck... my dick doesn't care WHY!!!!

 

[riddikk91]

FFS... 'sluts' or 'whores' - really? My dick doesn't care who they are as long as they are hot!! After all, it's only a porn game/fantasy to me...

Is this the 10th version or did this piece of garbage start with the ver. 0.10? could mods fix those issues and name them correctly 0.1 please. Just like the other assfaggots who name their first version 1.0, it's devious and misleading.

Seeing that the first demo version was v0.05, it makes sense that the next version was going to be v0.10... if you want it to be v0.1 (without the zero) then whatever - it doesn't matter mathematically!! LOL!

 

[Sumodeine]

Jeez another argument. ill refrain from partaking in this one,just ganna go wait for next update

I had no idea making a simple game about a nerdy dude having a slutty sister could be so controversial...

Next update is about two weeks away. Maybe I'll number it v.48 just to give everyone something else to argue about...

 

[User_32285]

FFS... 'sluts' or 'whores' - really? My dick doesn't care who they are as long as they are hot!! After all, it's only a porn game/fantasy to me...

Since my dick REALY doesn't care about your dick, all is fine in in my sexual fantasy