VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Sweet Neighbors [v0.12] [Pandelo]

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ThunderRob

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botc76 said:
And of course native-American English is all there is, fuck those lousy Brits and those Australian Bruces.... ;)

also, I didn't even know Native Americans had their own language. I figured their own languages would be their primary interest.
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i was going to comment on "native american english" as it was too good to pass up ..but i'll let you handle it...in other news..if She's going to say Hi Hi at least put her in cat ears and tail and give her big eyes? because..reasons...
 
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mrbtwice

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keep running into errors, if i change some answers they go away, but then im stuck with answers i didnt want to choose. please help
Code: 
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 64, in execute
  File "game/script.rpy", line 64, in execute
  File "game/script.rpy", line 73, in execute
  File "game/script.rpy", line 73, in keywords
NameError: name 'dlpos' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script.rpyc", line 242, in script call
  File "chapter001.rpyc", line 1006, in script call
  File "chapter002.rpyc", line 1381, in script call
  File "chapter003.rpyc", line 1548, in script call
  File "chapter004.rpyc", line 1767, in script call
  File "chapter005.rpyc", line 1870, in script call
  File "chapter006.rpyc", line 1927, in script call
  File "chapter007.rpyc", line 2371, in script call
  File "chapter008.rpyc", line 2739, in script call
  File "chapter009.rpyc", line 1079, in script
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 652, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact, *args, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1199, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1016, in __call__
    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, **display_args)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\character.py", line 817, in do_display
    **display_args)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\character.py", line 566, in display_say
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\ui.py", line 287, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2649, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3033, in interact_core
    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 511, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 511, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 511, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 424, in visit_all
    callback(self)
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3033, in <lambda>
    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 434, in per_interact
    self.update()
  File "C:\Users\Adam\Desktop\games\my sweet neighbors\My_Sweet_Neighbors-0.12-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 619, in update
    self.screen.function(**self.scope)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 64, in execute
  File "game/script.rpy", line 64, in execute
  File "game/script.rpy", line 73, in execute
  File "game/script.rpy", line 73, in keywords
  File "<screen language>", line 73, in <module>
NameError: name 'dlpos' is not defined

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 7.0.0.196
My Sweet Neighbors 0.12 0.12
Sat Oct 27 00:51:07 2018
 
goobdoob

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botc76 said:
And of course native-American English is all there is, fuck those lousy Brits and those Australian Bruces.... ;)

also, I didn't even know Native Americans had their own language. I figured their own languages would be their primary interest.
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Yeah, those Brits and Aussies don't say "hi hi" either.

"hi hi" is someone who doesn't SPEAK English looking at the written word and thinking it's pronounced "hee hee". It's not.

This game takes place in the U.S. How do I know? Look at the first sentence in the description - "You play a man in his late-thirties, who moved into a new apartment." Not a flat, an apartment.

thunderrob said:
i was going to comment on "native american english" as it was too good to pass up ..but i'll let you handle it...in other news..if She's going to say Hi Hi at least put her in cat ears and tail and give her big eyes? because..reasons...
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You two need to go back and read what I wrote again. Not "Native American English", not "native american english", but "native American English". As any native speaker would know, capitalizing the words like that means "how a native speaker of American English would speak", not "how a Native American would speak English". That kind of thing is like saying "your such a looser for mispeling that stuff!"
 
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ThunderRob

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a looser huh? ..Hi HI!!!....i dont give a hoot about punctuation and proper capitalization when i'm sitting here drinking a tea texting on a porn pirate site...i'm how i am.."Rob has zero fucks to give"
 
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goobdoob

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thunderrob said:
a looser huh? ..Hi HI!!!....i dont give a hoot about punctuation and proper capitalization when i'm sitting here drinking a tea texting on a porn pirate site...i'm how i am.."Rob has zero fucks to give"
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Aw, come on, man, you missed "your" and "mispeling"! :)
 
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King Monkey Mon said:
i hear you i knew she was like elena from dating my sasha which was nice but after seeing her facial expressions like when she knew that me and Sasha were in a relationship and the daydream scene during the photoshoot it makes me all the more eager for more content and making that daydream into a reality :D
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Jess is so much better than Elena...she's way more developed
I'm hoping the MC is upset he didn't get to have his fun with the M and goes into their room and has his own fun
 
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jeannotginto

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kikisx said:
Bonjour à tous,

Je suis toujours à la recherche de personnes désirant aider à la traduction. J'ai notamment besoin de personnes relisant le texte car traduire et relire soi-même est compliqué et surtout totalement impartiale. C'est pourquoi, si vous souhaitez ce jeu en français merci de me contacter.

La version fr est en cours de développement.

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Good morning, everyone,

I am always looking for people to help with translation. I particularly need people to proofread the text because translating and proofreading oneself is complicated and above all totally impartial. That's why, if you want this game in french please contact me.

Version fr is in progress
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Suis disponible. Par contre, le lien ?
 
LokiTime

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Well, not the best update for this game, but at least we got it, so thanks the team for the share.

Not really understand where the story is going... Well, wait and see i guess.
 
Irgendwie Irgendwo

Irgendwie Irgendwo

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Nice update as usual, feels a bit short after the long wait, but the plot is more than okay. Some points.

- Can we please establish now that the game is not abandoned? Thank you.

- Seems the proofreading squad didn't catch the "bizarre" (instead of "bizar") right at the beginning.

- Hi hi, or rather "Hihi hihi hiiiiii" is German for mischievous laughter. Picture some cartoon character cheering a successful prank.

- Thank you for keeping the more risqué content optional and not bothering me with
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in future updates, since I shut that down immediately.

- The more I kept following Mom the more I thought,
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Looking forward to the next update!
 
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AGoodDay2Die

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Deane9850 said:
hi hi is generally pronounce as hee hee, more girlish sound then ha ha. ha ha is manlier, and he he (which sounded like hay hay) is like devilish laughter.

And btw, if any NPC triggered, I'm not sorry at all.
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"Hi hi" would be pronounced, in English, with a long "I". "Hi" is short for "hello" but whereas saying "hello, hello" is acceptable as a sort of emphatic greeting, (and often with a bit of a leer included,) saying "hi hi" just seems retarded. "Ha ha" (or "haha" or "hah hah") is used as an outright laugh, "he he" (more often as "hehe" or "heh heh" and all pronounced with a short "e" but NEVER with a long "a" like in "hay hay" or "hey hey" - neither of which is any kind of laugh,) denotes a chuckle, while "hee hee (or "heehee") would best be described as either a "feminine titter" or a "crazy laugh", depending on the context.

Whether "hi hi" is Russian, German, Dutch, Japanese, or any of several others I've seen it ascribed to - or all of them - when translating into English it should be properly translated, just like the rest of the dialogue.
 
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SevenDeadlies

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Great update! I noticed a couple of things the proofreader missed, but they have been mentioned above. Keep up the good work!
 
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