I'm enjoying the game, so thank you.
Jess is gorgeous. I love the relationship they have.
But ...
Only 5 pages of saves? I save a lot. Not just for where I need to make a choice. I like to save anywhere I might want to go back and re-play a scene, or just somewhere I think a character looks particularly nice and I want to revisit that image. I will run out of save slots very quickly with only 5 pages. Yes, I know I'm weird and most people probably save only when they need to make a decision.
Please add more. Preferably unlimited. In some longer VNs I am up to 20 pages (at six slots per page, so just under 14 pages of 9) and the story is not over!
I spotted what I think are some dialogue errors. Mostly it's good but there were a couple of oddities.
- In the car: "Do you know what time moms getting there" - should be "mom's"
- In the kitchen after Jess arrives: "Ah he is! Hey sport!" - "Ah, here he is!" (or "there he is")
- In Jess' room: she says "Why can't all boys be like you?" then there's some other dialogue about what she means and then he says "Don't worry sis, someday you will" as though she asked "Why can't I find a boy like you?" but she never said anything like that.
Minor mistakes that in no way reduced my enjoyment.
I'm still in the lounge scene, not sure how much more there is. If you want me to keep reporting this kind of thing I'll try to catch them (always possible I am too engaged in the story and miss some.)