VN Ren'Py Naruto: Shinobi Lord [v0.25 Public] [Cats-creators]

[Harem Trooper]

Many people who played version 0.1 had a false impression about the further development of the game.
The main argument is that the MC enjoys watching sex.
But everyone overlooks the fact that it’s not the process of their sex that is interesting for MC, but the very fact that he is in his favorite fandom and watches live what he once watched on porn sites.
First of all, it's an isekai. The main character gets used to the new conditions. In 0.2, it is already clearly seen that the MC has motives that are directly related to the submission of Hinata to himself.
The game is rapidly moving towards freedom of choice, where everyone decides for himself what the main character will be.
Despite the fact that I already wrote this, I will emphasize once again that there will be no NTR in this game. At least for the foreseeable future.

The main reason why people had this impression of the game is because thats what the game showed them. They can only judge whtat they saw. This was simple bad executed if you say the game direction is a completely different one. Like the pictures I presented which I took from the game itself, its very easy to get mislead thinking MC is just another guy who is a Voyeur at least ( "but the very fact that he is in his favorite fandom and watches live what he once watched on porn sites") and a Cuckhold at best:

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Hence I dont understand how people this early in development of a game can review it, be it "bad" or "good" which why I give this game the benefit of the doubt for now. However its not looking good, at least for me. I just tried 0.2 to see what it brings and see and behold, another unavoidable sex scene with Naruto and Hinata. (See why I rather wait for more content before giving my last conclusion?)

I think its what Sewyoba said the bigger problem here. We all know that we (The Player) will bang or be in a relationship with Hinata at some point and her fucking around with Naruto will piss people off. Its not avoidable and what it make even worse, she enjoys it to the fullest.

Most games who need these scenes (for story reasons or just for sex scenes alone) at least try to show that both of them have problems in the bed, which again in a corruption game like this makes sense, but not here. There is a difference for a the Player watching a struggling couple having sex and letting the wife unsatisfied afterwards, or a lusting creep watching the wife getting her brain fucked out by her Husband.

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I know she is his Wife but the game started good when it was mentioned both of them dont have much sex anymore, hence Naruto occasionally sends a shadow clone to visit her. Only then to go a full 180° turn around where we have to sit by and watch them fuck instead interfering.
Im not even going to point out the plot holes about MC OP Powers to corrupt People with a single touch but fails to do so on Hinata when he already had multiple times to. Or why Kamiko boosting Narutos Libido which is completely contradictory with her and MC goals (if he is not a cuck).
And these are only the scenes we have access to, I dont even know what fuckery happend in the Patreon exclusive scenes which we dont have to.

 

[Momimop]

The main reason why people had this impression of the game is because thats what the game showed them. They can only judge whtat they saw. This was simple bad executed if you say the game direction is a completely different one. Like the pictures I presented which I took from the game itself, its very easy to get mislead thinking MC is just another guy who is a Voyeur at least ( "but the very fact that he is in his favorite fandom and watches live what he once watched on porn sites") and a Cuckhold at best:

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Hence I dont understand how people this early in development of a game can review it, be it "bad" or "good" which why I give this game the benefit of the doubt for now. However its not looking good, at least for me. I just tried 0.2 to see what it brings and see and behold, another unavoidable sex scene with Naruto and Hinata. (See why I rather wait for more content before giving my last conclusion?)

I think its what Sewyoba said the bigger problem here. We all know that we (The Player) will bang or be in a relationship with Hinata at some point and her fucking around with Naruto will piss people off. Its not avoidable and what it make even worse, she enjoys it to the fullest.

Most games who need these scenes (for story reasons or just for sex scenes alone) at least try to show that both of them have problems in the bed, which again in a corruption game like this makes sense, but not here. There is a difference for a the Player watching a struggling couple having sex and letting the wife unsatisfied afterwards, or a lusting creep watching the wife getting her brain fucked out by her Husband.

Spoiler: like this

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I know she is his Wife but the game started good when it was mentioned both of them dont have much sex anymore, hence Naruto occasionally sends a shadow clone to visit her. Only then to go a full 180° turn around where we have to sit by and watch them fuck instead interfering.
Im not even going to point out the plot holes about MC OP Powers to corrupt People with a single touch but fails to do so on Hinata when he already had multiple times to. Or why Kamiko boosting Narutos Libido which is completely contradictory with her and MC goals (if he is not a cuck).
And these are only the scenes we have access to, I dont even know what fuckery happend in the Patreon exclusive scenes which we dont have to.

Now what I'm trying to convey is quite difficult to understand.

It takes time to show what we have in mind.

First of all, I judge from the side of the author, who knows what will happen next in the plot.

 

[Harem Trooper]

Now what I'm trying to convey is quite difficult to understand.

It takes time to show what we have in mind.

First of all, I judge from the side of the author, who knows what will happen next in the plot.

You just have to understand what already happend is already a deal breaker for many. Good content in the future dosent mean it will change their judgement of the game, not for the majority at least. Not in Adult VNs, or in mangas or in mahwas, thats from my experience I witnessed. Im pretty sure you guys have something special in mind, hence I will wait for the next update to give it a finaly go, but Im pretty sure many people wont even see it because of how the game already started and continues to do.

In the end, I will suggest to learn form these mistakes and try not to repeat them in future updates. No one wants a bad product, hence people complain in the hope it will get better from that.

 

[Momimop]

You just have to understand what already happend is already a deal breaker for many. Good content in the future dosent mean it will change their judgement of the game, not for the majority at least. Not in Adult VNs, or in mangas or in mahwas, thats from my experience I witnessed. Im pretty sure you guys have something special in mind, hence I will wait for the next update to give it a finaly go, but Im pretty sure many people wont even see it because of how the game already started and continues to do.

In the end, I will suggest to learn form these mistakes and try not to repeat them in future updates. No one wants a bad product, hence people complain in the hope it will get better from that.

We are new to this business, so now we are learning from our mistakes.
In any case, thanks for your opinion.

 

[acondo]

The main reason why people had this impression of the game is because thats what the game showed them. They can only judge whtat they saw. This was simple bad executed if you say the game direction is a completely different one. Like the pictures I presented which I took from the game itself, its very easy to get mislead thinking MC is just another guy who is a Voyeur at least ( "but the very fact that he is in his favorite fandom and watches live what he once watched on porn sites") and a Cuckhold at best:

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Hence I dont understand how people this early in development of a game can review it, be it "bad" or "good" which why I give this game the benefit of the doubt for now. However its not looking good, at least for me. I just tried 0.2 to see what it brings and see and behold, another unavoidable sex scene with Naruto and Hinata. (See why I rather wait for more content before giving my last conclusion?)

I think its what Sewyoba said the bigger problem here. We all know that we (The Player) will bang or be in a relationship with Hinata at some point and her fucking around with Naruto will piss people off. Its not avoidable and what it make even worse, she enjoys it to the fullest.

Most games who need these scenes (for story reasons or just for sex scenes alone) at least try to show that both of them have problems in the bed, which again in a corruption game like this makes sense, but not here. There is a difference for a the Player watching a struggling couple having sex and letting the wife unsatisfied afterwards, or a lusting creep watching the wife getting her brain fucked out by her Husband.

Spoiler: like this

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I know she is his Wife but the game started good when it was mentioned both of them dont have much sex anymore, hence Naruto occasionally sends a shadow clone to visit her. Only then to go a full 180° turn around where we have to sit by and watch them fuck instead interfering.
Im not even going to point out the plot holes about MC OP Powers to corrupt People with a single touch but fails to do so on Hinata when he already had multiple times to. Or why Kamiko boosting Narutos Libido which is completely contradictory with her and MC goals (if he is not a cuck).
And these are only the scenes we have access to, I dont even know what fuckery happend in the Patreon exclusive scenes which we dont have to.

Nice receipts, how could anyone think that the Mc it’s not a cuck after that and the dev seriously just add another unavoidable scene of Naruto and Hinata?

Many people who played version 0.1 had a false impression about the further development of the game.
The main argument is that the MC enjoys watching sex.
But everyone overlooks the fact that it’s not the process of their sex that is interesting for MC, but the very fact that he is in his favorite fandom and watches live what he once watched on porn sites.

So the MC it’s just a sad voyeur, got it

How much of your game will be this (totally no NTR) cuck/voyeurism content?

 

[Silver2301]

Ohh no here comes the bitching about NTR again
Dev I have one piece of advice don't mind the people who bitch about NTR here.
Your art looks fantastic I will look forward to more updates

 

[lyfsavor]

Really diggin' the dev's original artwork, lets check this baby out!

 

[Lightbringer7766]

will himawari and sarada be in this

 

[Violine]

Art is fckin promising. But, as we all know here this quality ends with two ways. They are the slow development with rare updates and few arts or it can be just abandoned with few reasons. Hell I would be wrong. Just statistic.

 

[Zero1994]

Don't fucking pay attention to the crybaby of the anti-NTR, arguing with this is a waste of energy, follow what you want for your creation

Greetings

 

[Xlan]

This game has great potential, I hope it will be for a long time, and another question, will Sarada be included?!!

 

[hobobobb]

Beautiful art.
Needs NTR tag.

Clearly this is not for me, but you "keep doing you".

All the best.

Sadly (and reluctantly) having to click 'Ignore' on this one.

 

[Wulf N7]

Amazing art. Seriously, you have a lot of talent. Translation is a little rough at times but that can be fixed.

Any plans on animating every scene?

 

[rouge_g]

I respect a hentai isekai storyline that actually considers the world to have characters with histories and relationships before you arrived that, Wow, might continue for awhile before the PC can change anything.

Gonna definitely play this one.

 

[Macattack]

Do people not get what NTR is? This is in no way or shape that holy shit. I havnt played but it just sounds like the Mc is into peeping it isn't that deep

 

[Finisher69]

I have been playing porn for the last two years. This game has one of the best arts I have ever seen.

I am yet to try it, but I am pretty sure this will soon be trending with a good storyline and decent update intervals (with good amount of content ).

All the best!

 

[Waifston]

Why MC is so depressed?

 

[Leadpoison]

Overall aesthetic is beautiful! A genuine treat to the eyes playing though it and looking forward to continuing. Wish you much success.

 

[bruce555]

Why MC is so depressed?

Because is a cuck !

 

[pika2018]

Does anyone have the save with the patreon scenes released ?