my 2 cents on the art: it's subpar, but functional. The writing is actually decent, and the storylines are well done for a porn game. It is just enough story to make the characters feel alive without distracting or stalling for time until you get to the sex, and the art is fitting for that. You get to know how the characters look and whats going on. I dont see the need to get all anal about that.
This game is still way better than that russian Witch Trainer knock off that has superb art but garbage writing/storyline and therefore just fails as an erotic game.
On a different note, I just played through the latina teen liquor store chapter, and at the end it says I have unlocked a chapter, but I didnt get a password or new chapter button. Is that a bug? Or am I missing something?
EDIT: After looking through the game files I realised that there is no further chapter, at least not for this version. Would be way better if it said "You have reached the end of this version/the demo" instead of confusing me with wrong information.