VN Ren'Py Natsumi Love Story [v0.4.9] [Steradianfauns]

[SteradianFauns]

I think it's good you are willing to clear things up for people who missed stuff, but I also think that others seem to be missing things that you had made pretty clear already. You shouldn't have needed to say all this and nothing you said surprised me and it shouldn't surprise anyone else either. I can't understand how people missed so many things you have done a good job of laying out in the story.

I don't want to insult anyone, but just reading the dialog in the story and the things you have already said here should have made it clear to anyone paying attention the type of story you are telling. The people who aren't getting your story just won't get it. You're doing fine in the way you are showing and telling things if people would just actually read and think about them and not get upset for no reason. I think a lot of people just don't want to have to think at all when they try to play games on this site, and then get mad when one doesn't treat them like children and explain everything in big letters.

Keep doing what you're doing and tell your story, I think it's good so far, and those of us who can understand a decent story will be here for you.

Thanks for your response and your support

Actually, I'm more worried that the people who haven't play it yet, read the comments and got misunderstand as well, and decide not to play it. So I was trying to clear up those misunderstanding before it got out of hands.

 

[SteradianFauns]

Good job dev for at least being responsive.
The 2 things that made me stop playing though is 1. No pregnancy, only impregnation 2. The anti-NTR plot (I thought this would be more of a romantic story).

While I do not enjoy sharing MC's girls with other girls that much, if it was skippable, I probably would have continued.

I will probably pick up the game when it is completed, but it is not a game I feel like continuing right now, and good luck on your games.

Yup, that's alright, and thanks

 

[Virulenz]

9. Why MC marry Yui and why Natsumi marry other: That will be too much spoiler. But I hope my explanation this time is clear enough. If you don't like to share a girl with another girl even if it's a threesome or if you don't like lesbian scene even if the sex scene can be skipped, then I'm really sorry, this game is not for you, because those will happen. Maybe on my next game as I have lots of stories waiting to be turned into a VN, and many of which don't have these things.

Erm, i need an spoiler here because absolutley nothing could come to my mind that would make me allow any guy marry any girl i love...so i need a spoiler here to come back...the nightmare prologue didnt let room for a lesbian wedding...they talked about a guy and even without ntr thats nothing i could handle

 

[HansDampf788]

since Lessons in Love, one of the VN that inspired me

Oh great, he is inspired by an overrated, grindy shitbox game with dialogue that comes right out of a fever dream.

 

[Sommion]

the link to the patch is broken

 

[Look-see]

i kind of if not mostly wish the antagonist was at the first time attempt at blackmailing/NTR, rather then him ever succeeding in the first place. but again thats just me. i dont want him to have any kind of victory whatsoever.

 

[SteradianFauns]

Erm, i need an spoiler here because absolutley nothing could come to my mind that would make me allow any guy marry any girl i love...so i need a spoiler here to come back...the nightmare prologue didnt let room for a lesbian wedding...they talked about a guy and even without ntr thats nothing i could handle

That's okay, I'm not going to spoil this one. But this is another misunderstanding.

I did use a wrong term in the prologue because I didn't do a proper research, but I chalked it up to the one who said it is so used to a traditional wedding that she also use the wrong term. Or if you talked about a name that is mentioned in the prologue, that character already appeared in chapter 3 and clearly, she's not a guy. But nowhere in the prologue said that she's the one Natsumi married to.

 

[wronghole]

Zippyshare is forbidden and not reachable in germany, so it's not possible to download the patch, except you use some proxy. Since not everybody is familiar with this stuff, I would recommend another sharehoster for the patch.

 

[anschwww]

Zippyshare is forbidden and not reachable in germany, so it's not possible to download the patch, except you use some proxy. Since not everybody is familiar with this stuff, I would recommend another sharehoster for the patch.

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[Pushpa Gotama]

That's okay, I'm not going to spoil this one. But this is another misunderstanding.

I did use a wrong term in the prologue because I didn't do a proper research, but I chalked it up to the one who said it is so used to a traditional wedding that she also use the wrong term. Or if you talked about a name that is mentioned in the prologue, that character already appeared in chapter 3 and clearly, she's not a guy. But nowhere in the prologue said that she's the one Natsumi married to.

better say it then, the spoiler,for the peace of mind of all

 

[QuestionTime]

Don't know why my comment was deleted for "kink shaming" when all I said was unmarked unavoidable yuri NTR ruins attempts at *pure* love. NTR is fine when marked so those who dislike it may avoid the game or play it if they're into it. I just have an issue with mixing the two.

So technically you're sharing the other girls with Natsumi, or in other words, threesome.

Yuri is not optional, but the sex scenes are skippable.

It's not a threesome if the MC isn't there and involved. If you want to avoid the NTR tag and label it "sharing" that'd still require some sort of player choice otherwise it's still gonna be non voluntary and be NTR. There's also the fact that even if it was sharing and not NTR it would still be out of character for a Yandere to want to fuck anyone other than the one they love. Personally i'll probably stick with pan hero and hopefully it doesn't go down the same "mandatory sharing/NTR" route.

 

[SteradianFauns]

Don't know why my comment was deleted for "kink shaming" when all I said was unmarked unavoidable yuri NTR ruins attempts at *pure* love. NTR is fine when marked so those who dislike it may avoid the game or play it if they're into it. I just have an issue with mixing the two.

It's not a threesome if the MC isn't there and involved. If you want to avoid the NTR tag and label it "sharing" that'd still require some sort of player choice otherwise it's still gonna be non voluntary and be NTR. There's also the fact that even if it was sharing and not NTR it would still be out of character for a Yandere to want to fuck anyone other than the one they love. Personally i'll probably stick with pan hero and hopefully it doesn't go down the same "mandatory sharing/NTR" route.

But...the MC is going to be there and involved, that's what a threesome is.

And I don't own this thread, so I'm not the one who deleted any comment.

 

[QuestionTime]

But...the MC is going to be there and involved, that's what a threesome is.

And I don't own this thread, so I'm not the one who deleted any comment.

I know it wasn't you also do you mean taking part or watching them? Either way does the none harem route have monogamy? I recall the summary saying there was an ending without the harem and presumably without the "sharing"

 

[QuestionTime]

5. Why Natsumi who has a yandere potential fantasized about Risa: Because she's human? I mean I know she's just a character and not a real human, but who among us here never fantasized about things that we ended up regret fantasizing? Isn't that what post-nut clarity is all about? That's also why she's reluctant to share the fantasy with MC at first.

I personally think it's out of character for a Yandere type to be attracted to others people than their love interest. I think it's more comparable to having a "straight" male character fantasize about dudes or something rather than nut clarity. I feel Yanderes all have an extreme, often unhealthy, love for their love interest so her experiencing lust towards others and wanting to involve others in their relationship is kind of strange if she's Yandere. In the sense of a yandere in a harem I guess you could try to say she wants to be the main girl and assert dominance I guess but even that's stretching it. Lusting after others and actively wanting to involve them in your relationship kinda breaks the Yandere thing because imo they all desire monogamy, even if they can't have it.

This situation might be the result of wanting to find a way to include her more frequently with other girls as you said but idk if you could call her Yandere. I guess with the set up of "Yandere" sister and harem you kind of locked yourself into a strange writing situation. My personal perception of Yanderes make me believe they'd prefer monogamy if the MC offers it and yandere x harem personally only makes sense to me if it's the MC who won't accept monogamy and the Yandere only wants him and maybe tries to be a main girl.

 

[HansDampf788]

A yandere doesn't fit in a harem game. A yandere thinks "if I can't get him no one can" and sharing doesn't fit their personality as well.

 

[cebs]

Here's my unofficial android port of Natsumi Love Story v0.4.6


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[JoeTheMC84]

I think a lot of people are reading too much into her “being a yandere.” She’s a fully realized character and as such can be more than one thing. Not to mention hypocrisy is a realistic characteristic that she could have as well. A cuckqean-yandere may not be common but if anything her having both those traits together just makes her more unique and interesting to me than all the one dimensional versions of the pure -dere characters that fill so many other games.

Also, the whole yandere thing feels to me like sexual role playing she and the MC do for fun anyway. That’s just the way I read their interaction though.

 

[SteradianFauns]

I know it wasn't you also do you mean taking part or watching them? Either way does the none harem route have monogamy? I recall the summary saying there was an ending without the harem and presumably without the "sharing"

Both, mc will watch them, hence the yuri which is skippable, then join them and turn it into a threesome. Besides, the yuri part is still way into the future anyway, I might change it from skippable into avoidable, depending on what the patrons wants from story.

Yes, there is an ending without the harem, you'll be able to choose it when the choice to create a harem comes, it's been hinted so many times in the story.

I personally think it's out of character for a Yandere type to be attracted to others people than their love interest. I think it's more comparable to having a "straight" male character fantasize about dudes or something rather than nut clarity. I feel Yanderes all have an extreme, often unhealthy, love for their love interest so her experiencing lust towards others and wanting to involve others in their relationship is kind of strange if she's Yandere. In the sense of a yandere in a harem I guess you could try to say she wants to be the main girl and assert dominance I guess but even that's stretching it. Lusting after others and actively wanting to involve them in your relationship kinda breaks the Yandere thing because imo they all desire monogamy, even if they can't have it.

This situation might be the result of wanting to find a way to include her more frequently with other girls as you said but idk if you could call her Yandere. I guess with the set up of "Yandere" sister and harem you kind of locked yourself into a strange writing situation. My personal perception of Yanderes make me believe they'd prefer monogamy if the MC offers it and yandere x harem personally only makes sense to me if it's the MC who won't accept monogamy and the Yandere only wants him and maybe tries to be a main girl.

A yandere doesn't fit in a harem game. A yandere thinks "if I can't get him no one can" and sharing doesn't fit their personality as well.

It's also been written a lot that Natsumi is still torn between being a normal cute girl and being a yandere. Also, all of the extreme yandere thing she did is still only in MC head. And this story will decide which direction she will go. If she goes into fully yandere, then yeah, she will think "if I can't get him no one can", if she goes into the other direction, the harem is created.

There is a reason why Natsumi started being obsessive or act like a yandere towards MC, she have told mc. MC also has figured it out. Both are also already written in chapter 1&2.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Both, mc will watch them, hence the yuri which is skippable, then join them and turn it into a threesome. Besides, the yuri part is still way into the future anyway, I might change it from skippable into avoidable, depending on what the patrons wants from story.

Yes, there is an ending without the harem, you'll be able to choose it when the choice to create a harem comes, it's been hinted so many times in the story.

Okay, I've read some explanations for the harem and polyamorous relationship, and I guess the story is going to the polyamorous relationship direction, but mc will still have relationship with all the LI.

For me, that surely I'm weird, lesbian scenes are, at best, boring. The MC seeing two LIs having lesbian sex and then joining isn't something that falls into the kind of scenes I'm interested in seeing. The truth is that I prefer a harem to polyamory.

It's also been written a lot that Natsumi is still torn between being a normal cute girl and being a yandere. Also, all of the extreme yandere thing she did is still only in MC head. And this story will decide which direction she will go. If she goes into fully yandere, then yeah, she will think "if I can't get him no one can", if she goes into the other direction, the harem is created.

There is a reason why Natsumi started being obsessive or act like a yandere towards MC, she have told mc. MC also has figured it out. Both are also already written in chapter 1&2.

The main reason why I still haven't decided to start the game is the word "yandere" to define the MC's sister, to which we can add polyamory and possible non-avoidable lesbian relationships...

 

[ninjahotsprings]

A yandere doesn't fit in a harem game. A yandere thinks "if I can't get him no one can" and sharing doesn't fit their personality as well.

A few devs make it work like Ashley from Harem Hotel but more often fans expect the yandere to stand alone which when Sakura merged into Public Sex Life H was off putting for some fans.