- Aug 13, 2021
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Try actually playing it...ugh. I have to pause every few sentences because of the cringe overload. Dialogues go on and on and no one says anything interesting. So far, anyway... but I doubt it will change.
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Guys, I got some complaints that the game had an error somewhere. You can solve the problem by throwing the "animation.rpy" file given in the link into the "game" folder.
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Have you ever tried to read a book without pictures?
Something called a novel written by people called writers
- Aug 13, 2021
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Indeed, and those I enjoyed because they actually told a good story, had good character development, and didn't ramble on and on about nothing.
I had a difficult time with the story. More so the complete lack of the English language. No one speaks like the characters do. If this is machine translated it should be better English than it is. If you ever get an actual translation I might try it again,until then this is a hard pass. Trying to understand the story is currently painful,drawn out,and sparse on details in very poor English.
- May 16, 2019
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This game is a Visual Novel, so the writing needs to be on point too. Not just the graphics.
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As a non-English speaker, these writings don't really seem any worse than half the translations of Hugo, Sartre, Dante, Cervantes or whatever in English.
If I take the spirit rather than the form, for me, yes, it is a good novel by an author above the average of what is found on this site.
Even if it's certainly not a Nobel, a Pulitzer or a Renaudot, yes, there are better ones, even on this site. But it's still far above the fuck, dick, suck and c° of at least 90% of the "authors" found here
Now, to each his own, of course.
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Are you self reporting? Are you the creator on an alt?
You are comparing famous work, translated by professionals, to this.
I swear, The Sims 4 (or any other sims game) is one of the UGLIEST games you could possibly use for a porn game. Actually, maybe it's just me, since most Sims porn games just have a heavy use of trashy CC instead of actually making their Sims look nice.
Plus, what is going on with the Hijabs? The textures are like... umm.. do you have Laptop Mode enabled or something?
And PLEASE. Don't mix and match Alpha CC and Maxis Match CC!! I swear, almost every adult game with the Sims 4 as renders always have CC all over the place. ONE OR THE OTHER!
Proofreading please.
Plus, what is going on with the Hijabs? The textures are like... umm.. do you have Laptop Mode enabled or something?
And PLEASE. Don't mix and match Alpha CC and Maxis Match CC!! I swear, almost every adult game with the Sims 4 as renders always have CC all over the place. ONE OR THE OTHER!
Proofreading please.
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I will reply for the developer incase it is missed, No. This person is a member and making a good comment, imo, regarding another's comment. I am not in any way connected to this game nor it's development, just commenting as well.
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Although the English is broken, maybe mine is as well. I was able to understand the point the non-fluent English speaking developer was making. It could also be that I have so many new American citizens working in the same profession that I picked up how to relate to the misused words often spoken, especially if the individual feels pressured to get the words out, who knows, I enjoyed the game though, if anyone cares.
Dialogs are really long but i was begined enter in the story, then end of part 1 was sadly come... Did it have others parts available? i watched on patreon but it seem that not?
Sorry, not available yet. Most likely 2nd episode will be on Patreon in the first week of December, and then 10-15 days later here.
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This game has one of the most interesting main characters in any game that I've played from this site. He is extremely worldly-wise (understanding the nature of the way the world works) and very adept at understanding the hidden motivations of the people he encounters. However this knowledge has come at a great personal price. He has been severely abused as a child (in ways we don't yet fully understand) to the extent that he finds it impossible to develop close personal trust with anyone around him.
However he is not sullen, angry or bitter. He is just extremely pragmatic and feels no need to dress up the truth about someone with 'nice' or politically correct words.
The English can be tough to work through at times but I encourage you all to make the effort to understand what is going on here and what are the personal interests of each character. This has the potential to be a great game and I hope the author will persevere with the story and allow us to get to know these people better.
However he is not sullen, angry or bitter. He is just extremely pragmatic and feels no need to dress up the truth about someone with 'nice' or politically correct words.
The English can be tough to work through at times but I encourage you all to make the effort to understand what is going on here and what are the personal interests of each character. This has the potential to be a great game and I hope the author will persevere with the story and allow us to get to know these people better.