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Tough luck to you then, I havent been able to find a decent NTR Parody like what you said playing at the cucker for a while now. (Maybe I'll make one if I'm desperate enough )- Thread starter Ulith
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Tough luck to you then, I havent been able to find a decent NTR Parody like what you said playing at the cucker for a while now. (Maybe I'll make one if I'm desperate enough )
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What did I bring?
400+ images, the complete Kurumi prologue story, and a lot of new tech.
Next update?
Bi-weekly, no more delays.
Before I left, you might have noticed that I posted an image of Tokisaki Kurumi. Actually, I didn't want to start Kurumi's chapter so soon because there are still many stories before hers that haven't begun. But when I tried to write those stories, I found that I simply couldn't bring myself to do it. So, starting Kurumi's chapter was essentially an act of avoidance on my part. However, I soon realized that Kurumi's story is... more difficult, and I was struggling to continue. I think if I had continued in that state, my updates would have become slower and slower, and my story would have deviated further and further. So, I had to address some more fundamental issues. Now, I can say that I've done it. In the process, I tried out a lot of ideas. I know it took a lot of time, but please try the new version. I think it's not bad.
Why didn't I tell you? Because I didn't know when I would be able to finish it. In fact, it took far longer than I had anticipated, and the thought of you continuing to wait with expectations was causing me a lot of stress and felt really painful.
Finally, thank you so much for your early support, which gave me the time to get things done. If you have a subscription record between May and December, DM me on Patreon, and I'll send you a free copy of the latest game.
In the past, I was arrogant yet insecure, with a strong sense of vanity and a delicate ego. I cared too much about what you thought, and I would often feel bad for a long time because of your criticism. But after these past months of not reading replies, maybe that's not right. But now I feel so much better, I can finally be myself, there's nothing better than improving myself. So, I'm back, you bastards.
I never thought I'd be the reason why other people make games. It looks like you haven't updated in a while. Don't follow my example when it comes to update frequency.So he doesn't communicate at all, even with Patrons ? Man he's the reason I start making game
Definitely not what I expected.
Please be aware, that, if you catch a wave, you're prone to falling off if you try to force staying on top of it.
Change is a slow, grueling process and every flame that burns bright and boldly, never stays alight long enough to reach deep.
Now to turn notions into reality by deeds.
Please be aware, that, if you catch a wave, you're prone to falling off if you try to force staying on top of it.
Change is a slow, grueling process and every flame that burns bright and boldly, never stays alight long enough to reach deep.
Now to turn notions into reality by deeds.
We need more Netori focused games. Thanks for gifting us this in a small market.
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OMG you're back. It's so rare to find a DAL game so far. I've tried another DAL game named Date a Live Shattered Memories but the characters in that game are weird, it doesn't look like the original (especially loli characters like Yoshino, Kotori, Natsumi). But your game is totally awesome. I love the way you try to make exact appearance of every characters. I used to get depressed cuz i thought you drop this masterpiece but now you're back my lord !!!
I won't give up unless reality crushes me, I love what I do and I hope you enjoy it.
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Here to cheer on you dev, Shidou always pissed me off being so passive, we will take better care of the girls, keep it up
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Not Shido.
version is too early for me to make a f95 review. Here's some thoughts.
The models aren't very good, kind of simple. It can be overlooked, but the breasts look awful, like Solid jello mounds affixed to the chest. The oversized nipples also don't look good to me, but that may be personal taste.
I liked that the MC is actually "alpha" and also how he interacted with the girls in the beginning.
I understand that the "黑王" chapter is just you trying to express yourself. I won't talk about that one.
I felt like the Kurumi "side" chapter was trying too hard to be poetic and dramatic. It didn't make sense for Kurumi to make a poem of this guy's memories in the first place on the spot. I understand you are setting MC up to be a super clever schemer, and this may become difficult in the future. Often, when writers try Hard to write something they don't have enough experience on, it looks shallow. Like Tokyo Ghoul trying to be scientific, but it ends up looking like complete bs. I'm not saying this is the case now, but it may become that way in the future if you're not careful.
The models aren't very good, kind of simple. It can be overlooked, but the breasts look awful, like Solid jello mounds affixed to the chest. The oversized nipples also don't look good to me, but that may be personal taste.
I liked that the MC is actually "alpha" and also how he interacted with the girls in the beginning.
I understand that the "黑王" chapter is just you trying to express yourself. I won't talk about that one.
I felt like the Kurumi "side" chapter was trying too hard to be poetic and dramatic. It didn't make sense for Kurumi to make a poem of this guy's memories in the first place on the spot. I understand you are setting MC up to be a super clever schemer, and this may become difficult in the future. Often, when writers try Hard to write something they don't have enough experience on, it looks shallow. Like Tokyo Ghoul trying to be scientific, but it ends up looking like complete bs. I'm not saying this is the case now, but it may become that way in the future if you're not careful.
First of all, thank you for not leaving a negative review directly.
Could you give me a few examples of models that you think are good and complex enough? I really don’t know how to improve them.
The breasts are something I can do nothing about, KK doesn't have a real physics engine.
Large nipples are really a personal preference of mine, my favorite artist is Ahemaru.
Is "黑王" Chinese?
I had some ideas → I think these ideas are good → I find a way to write them out, it's not because "I want to try my best to write something overly dramatic and poetic."
About the “poem”, that's actually what I was going to say not MC because I haven't updated long time, the original was much longer and I think I'll delete it completely.
I agree with your point, just like how Kaguya-sama tried to write about business battles and noble families.
Actually, the difficulty I had before wasn’t about how to write MC as a "super clever schemer," but rather, how should a "super clever schemer" like MC interact with these girls that are as pure as a blank sheet of paper and develop relationships with them. In previous storylines, I’ve written MC to be too "perfect." This has made me unable to even conceive a way for him to continue developing relationships with these girls. I analyzed his character, and the conclusion was that, in that condition, he should’ve treated these girls with disdain.
I already have an MC that I want, but I need one that advances the plot and fucks girls. That’s why ultimately I spent the "False Emperor" and "Perfect Day" two chapters describing MC returning to being an ordinary person, relying on his intuition, doing what he likes, and being exhausted to the point that he needed to have fun and rest. At the same time, it also introduced some external conflicts.
Writing has always been difficult for me, and I tend to rely on inspiration, but I'm not skilled enough to turn ideas into words very well. I am not able to write a plot and then complete it immediately. But I have already finished the storylines for Tohka, Origami, and Kurumi as well as some future directions. They are basically the three most complex characters, so I think that, at the very least, it shouldn’t be too difficult and won’t make me drag it out for too long.
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