VN Ren'Py Abandoned Neuvau [v1.06.01] [Asmodeus_]

[Rinbael]

I don't know what to think about this game after this update. I agree with others that the blackmail stuff was really silly if you chose maledom choices. I get it had to happen for the story but if the MC isn't a sub it makes no sense, everything else in the story was fine though.

After this update it is pretty obvious that the game is meant to be played with your MC as a sub. The Andrea stuff is silly if you aren't a sub. I will say the whole teaching the MC to be dom thing is interesting since I don't think he would be able to do so without her help.

I just hope the MC will eventually be able to either turn the tables on Andrea or just get her sacked since she really annoyed me and I can't stand her. I will keep an eye on the game though since there is some things I like especially Suzie but I think it's obvious that the game is mainly a femdom game at it's core. I think fans of femdom will really like this game and maledom fans might struggle to enjoy it.

 

[OrphanOrphan]

Not my cup of tea...

 

[Deleted member 15555]

I don't know what to think about this game after this update. I agree with others that the blackmail stuff was really silly if you chose maledom choices. I get it had to happen for the story but if the MC isn't a sub it makes no sense, everything else in the story was fine though.

After this update it is pretty obvious that the game is meant to be played with your MC as a sub. The Andrea stuff is silly if you aren't a sub. I will say the whole teaching the MC to be dom thing is interesting since I don't think he would be able to do so without her help.

I just hope the MC will eventually be able to either turn the tables on Andrea or just get her sacked since she really annoyed me and I can't stand her. I will keep an eye on the game though since there is some things I like especially Suzie but I think it's obvious that the game is mainly a femdom game at it's core. I think fans of femdom will really like this game and maledom fans might struggle to enjoy it.

Is it at least very light femdom or is it really unbearable for people that don't like it?
I'm not a fan of femdom content and if that is forced it will pretty much turn me off from the game even if later the game turns into male dom.
So the mc basically starts as a sub?

 

[Rinbael]

Is it at least very light femdom or is it really unbearable for people that don't like it?
I'm not a fan of femdom content and if that is forced it will pretty much turn me off from the game even if later the game turns into male dom.
So the mc basically starts as a sub?

The femdom is almost completely avoidable if you pick the right choices. The MC has confidence problems and is kind of a loser at the start he is slowly starting to become more confident and sure of himself if you pick the dom choices.

The problem is in the recent update he is blackmailed by his college counselor to either become her sub if you pick those choices or be forced to let her teach him how to be a dom like I said if you play as a sub I'm assuming the story is less silly. Since I'm playing my MC as a dom the blackmail stuff is really silly.

The best option would be to try the game out for yourself to see if you like it it's not that long and the femdom is mostly avoidable if you pick the right choices.

 

[gregers]

Is it at least very light femdom or is it really unbearable for people that don't like it?
I'm not a fan of femdom content and if that is forced it will pretty much turn me off from the game even if later the game turns into male dom.
So the mc basically starts as a sub?

Sexually it's fairly vanilla for now, leaning more into the psychological aspect of dominance rather than bondage or s/m-stuff. It's all about the dominant imposing their will on the sub and the sub letting go of their control, and seems very well-written at that (non-sensical blackmail plot aside). As Rinbael says, this looks like it could be very good for the people who are into the core content, less so those looking for maledom.

The MC starts as a shy dude, stumbling and stuttering, and so insecure he gets infuriated for hours by a curt phone call from a bored administrator (my second-least favourite part of the game). There are some hints at character growth, but how much growth will be allowed remains to be seen; if the dev wants to keep the story within a manageable scope, they may want to stop the MC evolving too much in different directions.

 

[BallerTime]

Well, this is an easy ignore.

Five updates and there's still not any adult content that doesn't involve the main character being a doormat? Then, to cap it off, you give the player the chance to tell you not to do something three times in a row and you still ignore their choice? Fuck off. Also, no, doing exactly what you are told is still being submissive even if you are told to spank someone. The game as it exists now should not have a male domination tag.

 

[Kellermann]

No gingers at all?
Certainly one of those three blondes could have been on team freckles for some diversity.

 

[Kukipett]

Well i played the game with two different path a lustfull one that was quite amusing and exciting, i guess it's the bets way to play it and a second one in a dominant and experience way and it was of course very short and annoying. But the worst was the end of the dominant path where in fact the MC get blackmailed in the most stupid way.
Andrea saying that she recorded the session and that she would make him expelled just because he got a hard on during the talking. That's utterly ridiculous as she was asking him about this issue and he tried his best to hide it, and the MC as usual is a complete moron for falling into this. He also has a phone, why not just recording what comes next with Skyla, Andrea would be expelled from the university within the next hour for sure for such a behavior with some students.
But well we are in a porn VN, MCs are stupid, plots are sometimes ridiculous and the dev tries his best to give us poor puny humans the choices we request in those games, but those choices have most of the time bad consequences as they become quickly very difficult to handle by the dev and it's hard for him to keep the story believable!

 

[Asmodeus_]

Amazing update, so many different branches to the story.

One of my favourite games on here, love it.

Thank you for your kind words! I really appreciate it!

 

[Asmodeus_]

And by chance there will be a path where there is neither femdom nor maledom?

There are a few characters that are neither femdom/maledom, but the main story is one of those two.

 

[Asmodeus_]

Lured in by the "male dom" tag I tried this game ... I´m confused and worried about it ...
Confused because the male dom startet pretty late game (ch5) and only under specific circumstances ... not to mention the strange MC behavior ...
And worried because of those many paths/possibilities I can almost sense already the dev´s burn-out and an unfinished game ...
Hopefully my guts are wrong about the burn-out-syndrome (which is sadly an raising problem) and I/we can enjoy this game with great potential further (and hopefully) until a glorious game finish ...

so far 7/10 from my side ...
I wish you the best (and no burn-out ) Asmodeus_

What? Why did you think about burn-out? I'm here going strong!

And thank you for your kind words!

 

[Asmodeus_]

Yeah the MC screams "perfect sub" the feel of the whole game is heavily leaning towards femdom...so sudden maledom in latest update doesn't make that much sense imho...but the writing is good...just not for maledom fans like us...good luck dev, the quality is there, keep up the good work

Yeah, the femdom is heavy, but the maledom option is here for anyone that wants to explore.

 

[Asmodeus_]

Update was great! The scene guide really makes it obvious how much you'll miss in a given playthrough... Hnnnnng, Andrea is great <3 Looking forward to what comes next!

Thank you Zavijava_ , I really appreciate it.

 

[Asmodeus_]

There is a bug in ch.1 when talking with Mrs Jones after the alley scene : "$ lust += 1" is missing

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In ch.2 there seems to be a logical bug when talking to Maureen and her friends : You increase Relationshipbalance with her but the only options are to keep or loose relationship.

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Wow! You're awesome! I'll fix this!

 

[Asmodeus_]

I don't know what to think about this game after this update. I agree with others that the blackmail stuff was really silly if you chose maledom choices. I get it had to happen for the story but if the MC isn't a sub it makes no sense, everything else in the story was fine though.

After this update it is pretty obvious that the game is meant to be played with your MC as a sub. The Andrea stuff is silly if you aren't a sub. I will say the whole teaching the MC to be dom thing is interesting since I don't think he would be able to do so without her help.

I just hope the MC will eventually be able to either turn the tables on Andrea or just get her sacked since she really annoyed me and I can't stand her. I will keep an eye on the game though since there is some things I like especially Suzie but I think it's obvious that the game is mainly a femdom game at it's core. I think fans of femdom will really like this game and maledom fans might struggle to enjoy it.

Thank you for sharing this! I really appreciate it!

 

[Asmodeus_]

Well i played the game with two different path a lustfull one that was quite amusing and exciting, i guess it's the bets way to play it and a second one in a dominant and experience way and it was of course very short and annoying. But the worst was the end of the dominant path where in fact the MC get blackmailed in the most stupid way.
Andrea saying that she recorded the session and that she would make him expelled just because he got a hard on during the talking. That's utterly ridiculous as she was asking him about this issue and he tried his best to hide it, and the MC as usual is a complete moron for falling into this. He also has a phone, why not just recording what comes next with Skyla, Andrea would be expelled from the university within the next hour for sure for such a behavior with some students.
But well we are in a porn VN, MCs are stupid, plots are sometimes ridiculous and the dev tries his best to give us poor puny humans the choices we request in those games, but those choices have most of the time bad consequences as they become quickly very difficult to handle by the dev and it's hard for him to keep the story believable!

Don’t you think that if the MC would take out his phone, that Andrea would take notice? She would just take it from him. It’s not her first rodeo if you can guess.

Also if she’s comfortable in doing such things in her office, don’t you think that there’s something bigger going on? That’s what the MC is thinking and is trying to realize what’s going on. He’s thinking very rationally and knows he’s in trouble. He remains in this situation to weigh his options. He is risk averse, not stupid.

And the blackmail thing is not that he got hard, but because he asked her to help him. It’s called sexual harassment towards a teacher. He has said it, he was recorded on her phone (and after he signed the consent forms). That proves the intention.

Imagine having a coworker and she asks you:
- Is everything okay? Need any help?
- Yeah, with my hard-on
- Yes? HR? * sexual harassment *

Oh, and you want to know what Andrea was asking him about? His speech impediment! She KNOWS that this session is recorded! Again, it’s not her first rodeo!

I hope that clears it up!

 

[Asmodeus_]

No gingers at all?
Certainly one of those three blondes could have been on team freckles for some diversity.

There is a redhead, but not displayed on the cover because she’ll take part later in the game.

 

[Asmodeus_]

Well, this is an easy ignore.

Five updates and there's still not any adult content that doesn't involve the main character being a doormat? Then, to cap it off, you give the player the chance to tell you not to do something three times in a row and you still ignore their choice? Fuck off. Also, no, doing exactly what you are told is still being submissive even if you are told to spank someone. The game as it exists now should not have a male domination tag.

I’m sorry you feel that way. This is a classic visual novel way to say to the player that this is the way to move forward.

Either way you can’t please everyone!

I can remove the maledom tag if that’s so infuriating for you

 

[gregers]

Don’t you think that if the MC would take out his phone, that Andrea would take notice? She would just take it from him. It’s not her first rodeo if you can guess.

Also if she’s comfortable in doing such things in her office, don’t you think that there’s something bigger going on? That’s what the MC is thinking and is trying to realize what’s going on. He’s thinking very rationally and knows he’s in trouble. He remains in this situation to weigh his options. He is risk averse, not stupid.

And the blackmail thing is not that he got hard, but because he asked her to help him. It’s called sexual harassment towards a teacher. He has said it, he was recorded on her phone (and after he signed the consent forms). That proves the intention.

Imagine having a coworker and she asks you:
- Is everything okay? Need any help?
- Yeah, with my hard-on
- Yes? HR? * sexual harassment *

Oh, and you want to know what Andrea was asking him about? His speech impediment! She KNOWS that this session is recorded! Again, it’s not her first rodeo!

I hope that clears it up!

It was pretty clear that that was roughly what you were going for; it just doesn't make sense. The moment Andrea either tries to use force against him or he takes a photo of her, the balance of power has tipped. Her having a recording of the MC telling her, after repeated promptings, that he has an erection (the fake choice there is immensely aggravating, btw.) goes right out the window the moment there's photo evidence of her having sexual relations with a student. That's a career-ruiner—and a massive problem for the university as a whole if it gets out.

As I said a few comments back: I understand that it is necessary to set up the plot you want. But that doesn't make it good writing.

 

[Asmodeus_]

It was pretty clear that that was roughly what you were going for; it just doesn't make sense. The moment Andrea either tries to use force against him or he takes a photo of her, the balance of power has tipped. Her having a recording of the MC telling her, after repeated promptings, that he has an erection (the fake choice there is immensely aggravating, btw.) goes right out the window the moment there's photo evidence of her having sexual relations with a student. That's a career-ruiner—and a massive problem for the university as a whole if it gets out.

As I said a few comments back: I understand that it is necessary to set up the plot you want. But that doesn't make it good writing.

Yeah, I get it. Maybe i need to rethink that part!