VN Ren'Py Abandoned Neuvau [v1.06.01] [Asmodeus_]

[Asmodeus_]

Tried like 6 new games today, all pretty new, first 5 were either had potential but needed a bunch of work or straight up garbage. This is the first one with both promise, good coding and writing. Went full on dom, even cancelling on the dominatrixes, until I met the "counselor" My current playthrough ended with like 18 dom points, one sub point(when I agreed to become the "student", like 6 lust points(I used a save editor to add one, so I could peek at the daughter when she was peeing, needed 4 and I only had 3) and like 7 experience.

Dev(s) keep it up and you may have a new supporter.

Hey! That’s cheating!

Thank you for your kind words! It means a lot!

And I’ll keep working on it for sure!

 

[Asmodeus_]

Ok tried it out, here's my feedback (just for the starting 2 chapters):

• I like the realistic (and more defined) look of the characters, good job
• I like how you can easily follow how your stats can affect the game and your choices. Much needed.
• When Tina is teasing the MC (on his bed) you totally need to show her body, not a closeup of her (even pretty) face

I'll explore more tomorrow

PS: oh and what about Leanne ? The first impression is that she could be a pretty interesting character, but I see there's no content (yet )

Thank you for your kind words! And for taking the time to give valuable feedback!

You’re right on that Tina scene! I’ll note that for next release!

And yes, Leanne is pretty cool, and she comes in much later. She’ll have some content on CH7 and I think she’s worth the wait

 

[Asmodeus_]

The remake was worth the effort. The story is smoother and the artwork is a huge improvement.

Somehow I miss the blackmail a bit. Hopefully this only means that the game starts slower, but we still get to see some evil non-con femdom later on.

Thank you for your kind words! It means a lot!

Yeah, there was a discussion here in the thread, and people were right that it didn’t fit the narrative. It wasn’t seamless. And it painted the character of Andrea in a weird way. So I rewrote that part.

There still is some “evil” in the story but it will be delivered much later. Where it will be built into the narrative more gradually.

 

[Asmodeus_]

The refresh looks great! Congrats.

Any chance of animations being added, at some point?

Thank you for your kind words!

I really want to, but it seems too daunting for me. At least for now. I think I’ll need to become a bit more experienced in Daz in order to do it properly.

 

[shadow-x]

When will the next version come out I'm so excited your game is great

 

[Asmodeus_]

Suzie's new model alone made the wait worth it

Thank you! It means a lot!

 

[Asmodeus_]

In regard to the description "move into family friend's house". Do we perchance indulge in our good old buddies mother dearest?

I’m a bit confused. You speak too “gentleman” for me to understand

If you mean the landlady, Suzie, then the answer is yes. It’ll come!

If you mean the MC’s mother, then no. She’s not in this game.

 

[Mwanted]

There still is some “evil” in the story but it will be delivered much later. Where it will be built into the narrative more gradually.

Yeah don't underestimate it, you need the dark side too because for what I can see right now it's all goodness and sweetness Maybe Andrea's secretary or Leanne can help with that

 

[Asmodeus_]

Nice remake, everything's much better (though there are some spelling errors, I saw "stollen" once and I think that's not the only misspelled word), but since I've already seen all the content before (and because it's pretty tame yet) I'm still waiting for smth truly exciting to happen, though the punishment scene is pretty nice. I liked

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Thank you for your kind words!

What I missed a typo? Dammit!
I’ll do another spellcheck (I did a lot, how did I miss it?) Thank you for telling me!

Spoiler: Andrea punishment

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[Asmodeus_]

is good 10/10... mc is switch, sum and dom few games handle both

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[Asmodeus_]

I found the game interesting with all the different choices. It will be great to add a save naming fuction to keep paths in different saves.

Thank you for your kind words!

Renpy gives a naming capability by default on the save pages! That’s why I didn’t add the save naming feature. It’s faster if you name the save pages IMO.

Click on the number of the save page and you can type the name you like! This way you can organize your save pages like;
page 1 “dom path”
page 2 “sub path rika”
page 3 “sub path skyla” etc.

 

[Asmodeus_]

now it is clear that the author has really reworked the game - there are no problems with the logic of the character's actions in the game. this makes me happy.

the game is not about a dominator or "experienced" =) both options lead to Andre escorting us out.
and if you look at the banner in the game itself, it becomes obvious who Andre could make from the MC, namely, only a male being accustomed to be a fuck-toy for older women. a shitty prospect for a guy, to be honest - unless he's going to grow up and become a man who thinks with his head and not a dick.

I recall one saying "what one woman did for 20 years, raising and teaching an adult man from a boy - another woman can bring down in 20 minutes, making a fool out of a man, the son, over whom the mother tried for 20 years - the stray slut turns into ruins in 20 minutes"

sorry, Asmodeus_ - game itself good.
the deepest reason i don't like this game is i have a problem. I succumbed and allowed a woman to make a fool out of me and still cannot forgive myself in any way, because I lost time, strength and initiative, I lost the opportunity to leave this woman - age does not allow. that it.

and game itself is a good detector for whom who like me.
if you fill butthurt - then you have problem.

It means a lot coming from you! And I really appreciate you taking the time to share!

I can understand and respect your perspective! And in no way I feel “butthurt” as you expressed yourself very clearly and respectfully!

 

[Asmodeus_]

Just started playing and its interesting...
Are there characters that you can only have dom/sub relationship with?
Obviously the woman from the club seems very much a dommy mommy but I'm hoping Tina is someone you can punish for being a little brat....

Also hope the Dev doesnt restrict the sexy nylons from the cover just to our lovely domina(s) and being "something of a dom myself" we get to dress the female subbies in nylon stockings and pantyhose too.

So yeah, interesting game so far. definitely needs a cheat mod.

Thank you for your kind words!

Well, each love interest is either dom or sub and one is a switch (meaning that depending on the mc she could be a sub or a dom). I’ll let you guess who is which, but it’s pretty obvious so far. There are no twists in this aspect of the game.

And yes, you’re exactly right about Tina! She’s fits more to the sub brat character, but I won’t say more for now

About the stockings/pantyhose there’s no restrictions on my part. I’ll note that down for the future

 

[Asmodeus_]

I can't get to the last scene where you jet jerked off, any ideas?

Spoiler: MC punished scene

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[Asmodeus_]

Animated?

Nope

 

[Asmodeus_]

Harem?

Nope

 

[Asmodeus_]

When will the next version come out I'm so excited your game is great

Thank you for your kind words!

Next chapter is big, so in about 2-3 months! You can join patreon where I make weekly updates on progress

 

[Asmodeus_]

Yeah don't underestimate it, you need the dark side too because for what I can see right now it's all goodness and sweetness Maybe Andrea's secretary or Leanne can help with that

I’m with you 100%

The admin secretary is not what it seems, but I won't tell more for now.

But, Leanne can definitely help with that! You got that right!

 

[Kuokaman]

You mean Rika. You can certainly interact with her,

Thank you for you help. It would be great however if I could meet her while not being a sub, I like to play myself and I don't feel comfortable in that role.

 

[gregers]

Played through the remake and on the whole it seems an improvement. Still early doors so we'll see how it picks up from here.

The MC can still get right in the sea with this particular attitude though.

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