Ren'Py Abandoned New Body, New Life [v0.7] [Moccasin's Mirror]

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Moccasin's Mirror

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Drunk Lizzie is fun.

However, and you might already be aware be aware of these things, but I've encountered two minor errors.

Once your recognition hits 20, there's no number any more.
And the event where Nicole asks about who had her room before, the game refers to Sienna as Samantha.

These might be errors with the Compressed version, so I'm going to try the regular version tomorrow morning.
For the stats we have numbers up to 20, we should have caped it. The other one I didn't knew so I'm going to fix it although it's very likely that it will be in the full version too.
 

kiDRetadoR

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Okay, so. After playing this game for quite a few hours, I will give my most honest review about it.

Starting off with the bad things:

.- The game is unfinished. There is no real ending to it, you can reach to a certain point in the story and it will suddenly end, until the next version. This is honestly quite a big disappointment for me, even if it means cutting out some content and adding it up later, I would love to have an ending or at least some sort of hint of how the game is going to end

.- The game doesn't have a gallery option in the settings, this means that if you want to check the scenes you have till certain point, or just re-check it after a while, you either need to play the game entirely again or just go to the /game/images folder inside of the game main's directory. I would definitely add a gallery option in the settings with the currently unlocked CG's, in ero games I feel like this is must have to prevent what I previously mentioned.

.- Sometimes certain objects are clipping through the clothes of the main character, also when they celebrate with the wine kegs, I don't know if what I am seeing is a backyard or just part of the house, there also seems to be a door there leading somewhere. So yeah, I would like a little bit of clarity in regards to that

.- Game is awfully written, there are lots of grammatical errors that make it kind of hard to understand what the plot is about, or who is the message directed to.

.- I found quite a few bugs during my playthrough. If you check the character's tab more than once the game just crashes. I also found a bug where if you minimize or just load a previous scene, even going back to previous dialogues, sound just stops working until you restart the game

Good things:

.- The art quality of this game is okay. The only suggestion I would make is, there needs to be more straight / futanari scenes in the game, as it is now I think there is way way more lesbian/yuri (it's the same basically, yuri is the japanese term for it) than straight/futanari. Tara is a character that I could totally see being a futanari, her body is like perfect for that role. Silvia's daughter in law is another that I would totally see being a Futanari. Sammy, Dani, I also see them as futas.

.- Story is also okay, I like the way that the characters interact with each other. Jogging together, helping each other out, etc. It's not a deep story, it didn't make me empathize with the main character at all. I feel more bad about Mya than any of the rest of the characters, but it's an okay one.

And that's all I have to say, I really hope that the developer of this game sees this and re-checks their game because it needs to be polished quite deeply. I would still recommend this game, despite the previously mentioned issues. I see potential in it, and there's quite a lot of enjoyable content in it, especially the minigame
 
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kiDRetadoR

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Also, does somebody have some kind of guide for this game? I've seen certain scenes in the image gallery that I can never get to trigger in my game and I woud love to
 

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Okay, so. After playing this game for quite a few hours, I will give my most honest review about it.

Starting off with the bad things:

.- The game is unfinished. There is no real ending to it, you can reach to a certain point in the story and it will suddenly end, until the next version. This is honestly quite a big disappointment for me, even if it means cutting out some content and adding it up later, I would love to have an ending or at least some sort of hint of how the game is going to end

.- The game doesn't have a gallery option in the settings, this means that if you want to check the scenes you have till certain point, or just re-check it after a while, you either need to play the game entirely again or just go to the /game/images folder inside of the game main's directory. I would definitely add a gallery option in the settings with the currently unlocked CG's, in ero games I feel like this is must have to prevent what I previously mentioned.

.- Sometimes certain objects are clipping through the clothes of the main character, also when they celebrate with the wine kegs, I don't know if what I am seeing is a backyard or just part of the house, there also seems to be a door there leading somewhere. So yeah, I would like a little bit of clarity in regards to that

.- Game is awfully written, there are lots of grammatical errors that make it kind of hard to understand what the plot is about, or who is the message directed to.

.- I found quite a few bugs during my playthrough. If you check the character's tab more than once the game just crashes. I also found a bug where if you minimize or just load a previous scene, even going back to previous dialogues, sound just stops working until you restart the game

Good things:

.- The art quality of this game is okay. The only suggestion I would make is, there needs to be more straight / futanari scenes in the game, as it is now I think there is way way more lesbian/yuri (it's the same basically, yuri is the japanese term for it) than straight/futanari. Tara is a character that I could totally see being a futanari, her body is like perfect for that role. Silvia's daughter in law is another that I would totally see being a Futanari. Sammy, Dani, I also see them as futas.

.- Story is also okay, I like the way that the characters interact with each other. Jogging together, helping each other out, etc. It's not a deep story, it didn't make me empathize with the main character at all. I feel more bad about Mya than any of the rest of the characters, but it's an okay one.

And that's all I have to say, I really hope that the developer of this game sees this and re-checks their game because it needs to be polished quite deeply. I would still recommend this game, despite the previously mentioned issues. I see potential in it, and there's quite a lot of enjoyable content in it, especially the minigame
Thanks for all the feedback, this week I'm going back working on V0.7 (We are finishing our other game this past weeks so I haven't worked much in this one) I'm going to check the writing, specially at the beginning since I started this game mostly for fun than to show it. For your list of possible futanari, most of the have been naked already in game so it would be weird to make them grow a penis, but we have a succubus so stranger things have happened.
In any case here the closest thing to a guide is this that was already posted on the main post.
Hopefully the newer content of the game is way better written and with less clipping issues, although I'll try to fix the old content for next version.
 
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kiDRetadoR

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Yes, I agree with you that Dani and Sammy are already seen naked and they are lesbians.. but we haven't seen Tara naked anywhere, nor Silvia's daughter.. so there's still hope in that

Thank you for seeing this and I look forward for the next update
 
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.- The game is unfinished. There is no real ending to it, you can reach to a certain point in the story and it will suddenly end, until the next version. This is honestly quite a big disappointment for me, even if it means cutting out some content and adding it up later, I would love to have an ending or at least some sort of hint of how the game is going to end
While I sympathize as I also want the game to be done, I donno what you expected from a game that doesn't have the [Completed] banner attached to it. :unsure:

The only suggestion I would make is, there needs to be more straight / futanari scenes in the game, as it is now I think there is way way more lesbian/yuri (it's the same basically, yuri is the japanese term for it) than straight/futanari.
I speak for myself when I say I don't want more of that, it messes up the Yuri for me, especially when it's futa. The game has been repeated a few times over as having a lesbian focus, so that's the wheelhouse they're aiming to please with and that's what draws people like me here. Focusing away from that to insert more dick into the whole thing would decrease my interest specifically because I enjoy Yuri for of the lack of dicks. Rather a big deal.

Though I won't say I'm about to shit on the notion of having more options. If it's optional I can just move along from that and focus on the content I like. It's more work for the developers, sure, but if it was implemented it could make both sides of the audience happy I suppose.
 

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While I sympathize as I also want the game to be done, I donno what you expected from a game that doesn't have the [Completed] banner attached to it. :unsure:


I speak for myself when I say I don't want more of that, it messes up the Yuri for me, especially when it's futa. The game has been repeated a few times over as having a lesbian focus, so that's the wheelhouse they're aiming to please with and that's what draws people like me here. Focusing away from that to insert more dick into the whole thing would decrease my interest specifically because I enjoy Yuri for of the lack of dicks. Rather a big deal.

Though I won't say I'm about to shit on the notion of having more options. If it's optional I can just move along from that and focus on the content I like. It's more work for the developers, sure, but if it was implemented it could make both sides of the audience happy I suppose.
I honestly completely missed the fact that it didn't have the completed tag, I just downloaded it.. so that's my bad

In regards to the yuri part, I didn't know this game had a yuri focus. It's okay, since the game has many possibilities and like you can choose the options to go for the futa scenes, but I feel like if there is straight/futa porn.. it should be equally varied. But anyways, those are my opinions of course... and I totally respect yours, we will see what the developer does with it.
 
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Thanks for all the feedback, this week I'm going back working on V0.7 (We are finishing our other game this past weeks so I haven't worked much in this one) I'm going to check the writing, specially at the beginning since I started this game mostly for fun than to show it. For your list of possible futanari, most of the have been naked already in game so it would be weird to make them grow a penis, but we have a succubus so stranger things have happened.
In any case here the closest thing to a guide is this that was already posted on the main post.
Hopefully the newer content of the game is way better written and with less clipping issues, although I'll try to fix the old content for next version.
I don't want to rush you or to make you feel pressured, but how is the work progressing?
 

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I've been playing Lust Vessel in the meantime. Your artist for that was just amazing.
<3 Slimy.
We started working in Lust Colony, our new game, since Lust Vessel is now finished. Tomorrow we'll have some previews of our third character on twitter and patreon if you want to check it out!. But if for some reason you bought Lust Vessel on steam please leave a review, we have very few of those.
 

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To be clear, finishing in its entirety or for this update?
The update, just finished compressing the images there is some writing and testing to do since I added the "go back in time" option when you reach the end of the version so you can see all the events every time, but I need to make sure it doesn't break the game.
So v 0.7 will be up on patreon this week and around the end of the year here. Hopefully v 0.8 will take less time since the semester ends next week and I don't have to release full games for some time
 

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