VN Ren'Py New Coral City [S2 v0.4] [HoneyGames]

[eightypercent]

Tried this VN... started off really well [i played carefully at start, wanted to win back Kirstin but failed miserably] and then concentrated more on Tatianna, Ashley, Michelle and Martina which seemed enough for me. BUT somewhere around chapter 5/6, the quality of the English got bad [sorry guys, I know it isn't easy... trying to provide some constructuve criticism here]. The level of English in the first few chapters was much better, and I began to have to make more effort in the later chapters and it sort of ruined the whole experience for me.

The story is interesting with lots of women: I thought the whole Maude/Kirstin thing had huge potential but I got put off after having to watch them... maybe I should have tried harder? I do like how you have tried to develop sub-plots.

There are many grammatical and spelling errors... these really need to be sorted out. Good luck with that!

 

[HoneyGames]

Tried this VN... started off really well [i played carefully at start, wanted to win back Kirstin but failed miserably] and then concentrated more on Tatianna, Ashley, Michelle and Martina which seemed enough for me. BUT somewhere around chapter 5/6, the quality of the English got bad [sorry guys, I know it isn't easy... trying to provide some constructuve criticism here]. The level of English in the first few chapters was much better, and I began to have to make more effort in the later chapters and it sort of ruined the whole experience for me.

The story is interesting with lots of women: I thought the whole Maude/Kirstin thing had huge potential but I got put off after having to watch them... maybe I should have tried harder? I do like how you have tried to develop sub-plots.

There are many grammatical and spelling errors... these really need to be sorted out. Good luck with that!

A guy grammar checked all the game. In 1.0 is checked just the daily routine. in 1.1 he checked also all the events. some dialogue are in events, some other in daily routine. after chapter 5/6 there are more dialogue in events, that's why probably it's more "engrish".

(daily routine and events is a division I did while coding for convenience and to more easily control what was said in previous dialogues.)
The guy who does the grammar check anyway is very fast and I think the next releases will come out with the correct translation right away (or at most a couple of days after the first release).

 

[balvenie1401]

A guy grammar checked all the game. In 1.0 is checked just the daily routine. in 1.1 he checked also all the events. some dialogue are in events, some other in daily routine. after chapter 5/6 there are more dialogue in events, that's why probably it's more "engrish".

(daily routine and events is a division I did while coding for convenience and to more easily control what was said in previous dialogues.)
The guy who does the grammar check anyway is very fast and I think the next releases will come out with the correct translation right away (or at most a couple of days after the first release).

Do you have a progress update/ETA for 1.1 you could share?
Cheers

 

[HoneyGames]

Do you have a progress update/ETA for 1.1 you could share?
Cheers

No because I've coded some events in day 76 and not yet some of day72. So I have to end all before I can share

 

[Fapmigo]

Is it useful to buy sextoys?
I never found an opportunity to use the egg vibes or the cuffs

 

[P4cc3r5]

Is it useful to buy sextoys?
I never found an opportunity to use the egg vibes or the cuffs

Guess you don't have any friends that can appreciate them then? Sorry - couldn't resist. I'm guess the likes of Rebecca and others may appreciate them in the future.

 

[Fapmigo]

Guess you don't have any friends that can appreciate them then? Sorry - couldn't resist. I'm guess the likes of Rebecca and others may appreciate them in the future.

I don't know man, Yvette doesn't seem to be too fond of cuffs
So there's no point buying them for the moment?

 

[Mister_M]

Yvette doesn't seem to be too fond of cuffs

I'd love if Yvette (on girlfriend/love route) would like to do smth more kinky with the MC.

 

[Fapmigo]

I'd love if Yvette (on girlfriend/love route) would like to do smth more kinky with the MC.

Me too amigo, but she's in dire need of love so better not mess with her

 

[Mister_M]

better not mess with her

Have no intention of doing that. Yvette is the best girl ever after all

 

[P4cc3r5]

I don't know man, Yvette doesn't seem to be too fond of cuffs
So there's no point buying them for the moment?

Bought everything that's available anyway (apart from expensive dress for Martina if not on that route) - never know when the'll come in handy. Always have a stock of 5x viagra & weed too of course

Have no intention of doing that. Yvette is the best girl ever after all

Yvette is sweet and needs some loving - but I'll put her behind my beloved Tatianna , exhibitionist Michelle and hard to get Ashley (still dreaming about a threesome with Tatianna )

 

[Pumpkin1984]

Dude, when are You planing to share a next version with us?

 

[P4cc3r5]

Dude, when are You planing to share a next version with us?

See this post - further up the page - https://f95zone.to/threads/new-coral-city-v1-0-honeygames.28118/page-115#post-3407449

 

[cccxxx]

any update?
how's italy are you getting over it?
we're still stuck till the 14th

 

[HoneyGames]

they've started to reopen something, but people believe they can do what they want now. I'm afraid we're back in lockdown in two weeks if the state can't find a way to limit the stupidity of Italians

1.1 will be available real soon, I'm orking on it

 

[P4cc3r5]

they've started to reopen something, but people believe they can do what they want now. I'm afraid we're back in lockdown in two weeks if the state can't find a way to limit the stupidity of Italians

1.1 will be available real soon, I'm orking on it

Hope they see sense. Can't believe the number of US states opening to one degree or another with cases & deaths still rising.

 

[saddlface]

they've started to reopen something, but people believe they can do what they want now. I'm afraid we're back in lockdown in two weeks if the state can't find a way to limit the stupidity of Italians

1.1 will be available real soon, I'm orking on it

Unfortunately it isn't just Italians.

 

[Universe12345]

I read in the comments that the story began where follower ended, do i need to play followers first if I want to follow the story? I like playing the stories because just screwing some 2d/3d girls can get pretty boring

 

[Chrisdarock19]

I read in the comments that the story began where follower ended, do i need to play followers first if I want to follow the story? I like playing the stories because just screwing some 2d/3d girls can get pretty boring

This game has a really funny/crazy intro that sums up the major plot points of Follower. Watch it to understand who certain people in this game are

 

[Pumpkin1984]

BTW, with all respect to HoneyDev's work, but I like Ren'Py unnoficcial port of Follower. I know, that he put a lot of ellbow grease in it, but I jost don't like games on Unity engine. I hope, that one day he (or some one else) will gona port his previous games to Ren'Py engine