Grick Rimes

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But please try to improve proof reading ^^

I do enjoy the game, but some lines are horrible. Especially when you write he instead of she (or vice versa). Sometimes it is just annoying, but when they talk about ppl not on screen, it can get confusing.
You may not want to take the time to do this, but if you "Unren" the game, you can do like I did and go through, fixing the dialog that's off. My feeling is that english is not a primary language of the designer. I don't KNOW that for sure, but it's a feeling. As a trained editor, I may have changed a few intentions with some of my edits, but the game reads much better and still flows with the pictures.
 

lelela123

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Hi HoneyGames , first of all thanks for this game and your hard work.


I would like to know if the rebuilt will enable you to improve animations or is it something you are not focused on ?


The game is still great though, no worries.
 
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HELP

need a cheat or a console command to get Rebecca on porn path.

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unfortunately if you don't do the bjvideo paths and you cheat just about the porn paths there could be issues. I mean you have to cheat all the variables about the pornpath.
 
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You may not want to take the time to do this, but if you "Unren" the game, you can do like I did and go through, fixing the dialog that's off. My feeling is that english is not a primary language of the designer. I don't KNOW that for sure, but it's a feeling. As a trained editor, I may have changed a few intentions with some of my edits, but the game reads much better and still flows with the pictures.
unfortunately english isn't my primary language.
I had to limit a lot some dialogues and some paths because I could not express in English what I wanted to say.
If the game will earn me some money I think the first thing I'll do is hire someone to translate from my mother's lingia to English, this will allow me to write better and faster.
there are many shades in my language to say things waxes and each way can give a little different meaning.
So in plotting, I had to be a little coarser.
Even many double entendres and phrases that could be humorous would obviously lose their meaning once translated.
 

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Hi HoneyGames , first of all thanks for this game and your hard work.


I would like to know if the rebuilt will enable you to improve animations or is it something you are not focused on ?


The game is still great though, no worries.
there'll be no animations except for some little things. As you can see the game really has a lot of scenes (and I've rendered many of them for the rebuilt). In the new version the sex scenes will run differently, and if I had to render one animation for each variable I'd probably be able to add 2 scenes for each release. Calculating the amount of paths in the game could get boring waiting to trigger the scene with the girl you like. or it would push the player to follow girls that he cares less about to trigger a scene.
When I can buy a more powerful PC maybe I'll put some animations in the games. right now I can't...
 
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Love this game, but i have the feeling im missing some scenes with girls i like. Would appreciate a walkthrough or a gallery, since this game is so immense
 

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Thanks for your answer. Well, now gotta restart or wait for a save ^^
v1.3 you have to restart anyway. and in 1,2 there is just the unlock for Rebecca porn paths. Her scenes will be in next releases so, do as you prefer, but if Repplay the game could be boring wait until the next release.
 
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Grick Rimes

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unfortunately english isn't my primary language.
I had to limit a lot some dialogues and some paths because I could not express in English what I wanted to say.
If the game will earn me some money I think the first thing I'll do is hire someone to translate from my mother's lingia to English, this will allow me to write better and faster.
there are many shades in my language to say things waxes and each way can give a little different meaning.
So in plotting, I had to be a little coarser.
Even many double entendres and phrases that could be humorous would obviously lose their meaning once translated.
I hope you did not take offense by my post. I most certainly could not speak your native language. You do well enough that the meaning is sometimes clear. I promise, if i were to try to express myself in your language, the meaning would be very unclear. I would love to say I could translate for you, but non-english languages are very difficult for me to learn, unfortunately.
 
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I hope you did not take offense by my post. I most certainly could not speak your native language. You do well enough that the meaning is sometimes clear. I promise, if i were to try to express myself in your language, the meaning would be very unclear. I would love to say I could translate for you, but non-english languages are very difficult for me to learn, unfortunately.
No offense, don't worry.
I know, unfortunately, all my english language limitations...I added the part where I talk about how I would have done some dialogue differently just because I'm verbose and I'd really like to be able to take more care of some of the details
 
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HoneyGames bug new save start first week

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in script
    $ keeshaint += 1
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in <module>
    $ keeshaint += 1
NameError: name 'keeshaint' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in script
    $ keeshaint += 1
  File "I:\ADULT GAMES 2\NCC-1.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 900, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "I:\ADULT GAMES 2\NCC-1.2-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1930, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec bytecode in globals, locals
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in <module>
    $ keeshaint += 1
NameError: name 'keeshaint' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
NCC 1.2
Tue Jan 28 00:57:48 2020
$ keeshaint += 1
NameError: name 'keeshaint' is not defined



Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/02 day 19.rpy", line 375, in script
    $ ashelygood += 2
  File "game/02 day 19.rpy", line 375, in <module>
    $ ashelygood += 2
NameError: name 'ashelygood' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/02 day 19.rpy", line 375, in script
    $ ashelygood += 2
  File "I:\ADULT GAMES 2\NCC-1.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 900, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "I:\ADULT GAMES 2\NCC-1.2-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1930, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec bytecode in globals, locals
  File "game/02 day 19.rpy", line 375, in <module>
    $ ashelygood += 2
NameError: name 'ashelygood' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
NCC 1.2
Tue Jan 28 02:18:51 2020
$ ashelygood += 2
File "game/02 day 19.rpy", line 375, in <module>
$ ashelygood += 2
should be ashley
 
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Cayn

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No offense, don't worry.
I know, unfortunately, all my english language limitations...I added the part where I talk about how I would have done some dialogue differently just because I'm verbose and I'd really like to be able to take more care of some of the details
I am sure some native speakers would be willing to help you out with the writting without payment if you are credit them in your game. Maybe you can do some recruitment on your patroen or this post. Great game tho :D
 

alominus

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In my patreon I write all the new things for each version when I release it
Mate, no offense, but if we were able to access the changelog on your patreon, we wouldn't be here. As I'm sure you already know, your changelogs are hidden behind a paywall. I doubt holding your changelog back every time your game gets leaked early is going to earn you any extra patrons. Damage is already done. :cautious:
 
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HoneyGames

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Mate, no offense, but if we were able to access the changelog on your patreon, we wouldn't be here. As I'm sure you already know, your changelogs are hidden behind a paywall. I doubt holding your changelog back every time your game gets leaked early is going to earn you any extra patrons. Damage is already done. :cautious:
Sorry , you're right.
usually I made a free post when I release a new version but the day I've released 1.2 patreon had issues and I wasn't able to make public post.
Now I set it as public so you can see it

 

Mario4don

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HoneyGames bug new save start first week

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in script
    $ keeshaint += 1
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in <module>
    $ keeshaint += 1
NameError: name 'keeshaint' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in script
    $ keeshaint += 1
  File "I:\ADULT GAMES 2\NCC-1.2-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 900, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "I:\ADULT GAMES 2\NCC-1.2-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1930, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec bytecode in globals, locals
  File "game/01 weekone.rpy", line 1062, in <module>
    $ keeshaint += 1
NameError: name 'keeshaint' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
NCC 1.2
Tue Jan 28 00:57:48 2020
$ keeshaint += 1
NameError: name 'keeshaint' is not defined
I don't know if I'm right, but after reviewing all the variables with Keesha I think it should be
$ keeshainfo += 1

but maybe HoneyGames to say if I'm right
 
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