- Thread starter BaasB
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No worries, went through the file and fixed it myself. God job on the patch, apart from the first little glitch its seamless.
Thanks for the reply.
Peace and biscuits,
be well.
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- Jul 15, 2017
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Either using an outdated mod or patch, or saved too late. There was definitely a lot more content in Ch4.
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Definitely 6, maybe 7
- Dec 22, 2017
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A lot of people don't seem to understand the difference between media criticism and a customer service complaint.
If you don't like how a visual novel's story is shaping up, fine. If you don't like it and you demand that it changes, you've misunderstood how this works.
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I love Chelshea! 
hope to see more of her in the chapters to come, hell I'll be happy if the next chapter from beginning to end is just Chelsea rambling on
hope to see more of her in the chapters to come, hell I'll be happy if the next chapter from beginning to end is just Chelsea rambling on
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Good! I was hoping people would find her chatter endearing more than annoying. She's your quintessential flighty chatterbox girl. I love her!I love Chelshea!
My only gripe with her is it felt rushed with her character. He met her at the diner, later walked her to the bikini store and now she's wearing lingerie and considering giving herself to someone she's known less than a few days. I know she's sheltered and curious but it doesn't feel like natural progression.
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That's fair. I guess in my mind I figured Kim had been teaching her a thing or two "off camera". But I get why it might feel rushed when it comes to the MC and his fam.
Yeah, I understand trying to fit everything into the story and develop relationships is tough so I'm not sure of a good solution to it. if she had been a family friend for some time and the MC knew her prior that might make it feel more organic if she had a long standing crush like Kaylee has. With the girls being her surrogate for entering the harem cult.
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I'm thinking of a fix for this that I can put into chapter 5. Like, maybe a convo between MC and [insert character name] that will explain it all a little better than just..."and then Chelsea is there."
Maybe some past connection with Heather and Chelsea's parents could work. Heather seeing how overbearing they are with her and she takes a moment to instill some words of wisdom on her that's related to the girls and the MC. I don't know, but I appreciate the consideration. Enjoying your work.
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