Ren'Py Completed Newlywed to Be [v1.03] [DeDagames]

[Deleted member 770309]

No because I put the wife on low sex drive and never cheated but when that asshat Bob breaks into your house and demands to move into your house he does of course and she gets freaky with him in your hot tub that very night.

Well thanks for the save guess that is me out. The MC sounds like a mega loser. Like really some guy breaks into your house and you can't do anything about it that is just stupid as all hell.

 

[stahalle]

Is this the same dev of the other 2 unfinished games?

if you talking about living with laura and deserted island dreams, than yes he is.

 

[Turret]

To all discutants in the thread: I both played the game, his other game and looked into the pic and text data. Unlike what some users say, it is possible to avoid NTR and steer towards Harem or swinging, but here comes the biggest problem this developer has!
Much depends on the choices made at game start, but it is not clear what you need to chose for your specific aims. In addition, as I found out during playing "Deserted Island", some paths need super specific choices combined with right pregame chosen stats without any hints why that is so. Sometimes you need to do very counter-intuitive ones for what you want to gain. That might be made more difficult because this Devs mistake rich English! There is e.g. a choice in "Deserted" totally inverted due to wrong labelling!
In my opinion, outside the strange graphics, his games have good potential, but only if he corrects the texts and gives walkthroughs because of his sometimes super narrow paths.

 

[chocolatemoli]

Very Impressive Work, I love it!

 

[ropppp]

Around 100 more pictures are just being rendered.
Walkthrough. This is a hard question. I will do it after the final release. The final release will come in a month. Then I will create a walkthrough with choices to certain endings. I plan at least 40 possible endings. Just 7 is ready.
Then the game will be "turn-based" with random events. Random events like pregnancy - lovers - birts and so on.

I just asked helped from my patrons to review the text. Here I attach the text files, too. 1-25. Around 600 lines each. If somebody wants to help me he will get early release, too.
If you can't support or simply do not want to support the game then help me. Only if you like the game at least a little. If you take one TXT file to review then add here in a comment that TXT1 is being done by me.

You must be registered to see the links

Then you can send me the file to: demenyl82paet@gmail.com

About text files: Each "text" in a row is duplicated.
Change the second one. The first one is the original, I use it as a key. I wrote a program that exchanges text automatically. The second one is the suggested change.

You are right, my native language is not English. I use it every day, but it is not English. That is why help is needed.

The harem route is still not possible. You can fuck Jada. You can fuck Lara. But not both of them. I will figure something out.
NTR can be totally avoidable. Based on your wife's stats. But if she is lustful Simon fuck and Bob fuck can not be avoided.

 

[ropppp]

Is this the same dev of the other 2 unfinished games?

Yes. The first one was a very week try. And this one is almost finished. So spit on me. I only published it here when it is almost finished. YYYYYEEEESSSS IIIIII AMMMMM THAT DEVELOPER. But I will finish Deserted island dreams.

I don't get too much support. So I do it as a hobby. I work as an engineer. I have a good job that is why I don't really mind how many supporters I have. Why I abandoned those games. I never abandoned Deserted island dreams. I just made a pause to do this game. You have too little chance to improve a story when you are limited to 2 islands. About Laura. That was a weak try. Read the comments. Just negative feedbacks. If mosts of the feedbacks are negative would you not leave the game? Yes, you would. And it was a good choice. I will never continue that game.

Then I tried to improve myself. Better plot. Better graph. I got very good experience in blender.

Here 50-50%. Why I can leave a game that is not welcomed by most of the community? Because I do it as a hobby. :-D :-D :-D :-D

Criticize somebody's work is very easy. (I am not talking about building tips.) You are in a very good position. You are untouchable. This game was paetron only for months. And thanks to you it will be again. I don't need this shit on my neck

My offer still stands to those who help me with making it "more English". You will get a final link.

 

[gilgamesh9]

Yes. The first one was a very week try. And this one is almost finished. So spit on me. I only published it here when it is almost finished. YYYYYEEEESSSS IIIIII AMMMMM THAT DEVELOPER. But I will finish Deserted island dreams.

I don't get too much support. So I do it as a hobby. I work as an engineer. I have a good job that is why I don't really mind how many supporters I have. Why I abandoned those games. I never abandoned Deserted island dreams. I just made a pause to do this game. You have too little chance to improve a story when you are limited to 2 islands. About Laura. That was a weak try. Read the comments. Just negative feedbacks. If mosts of the feedbacks are negative would you not leave the game? Yes, you would. And it was a good choice. I will never continue that game.

Then I tried to improve myself. Better plot. Better graph. I got very good experience in blender.

Here 50-50%. Why I can leave a game that is not welcomed by most of the community? Because I do it as a hobby. :-D :-D :-D :-D

Completely understand was just wondering because there's a lot of games out there now where people are just taking the style from other. Didn't mean any disrespect i liked all three of the one i played so far.

 

[Malcowitz]

I have never seen a cucking chart before. Wild, absolutely wild.

And apparently hubby actually gets some action, maybe even with other women? What??

 

[ropppp]

I have never seen a cucking chart before. Wild, absolutely wild.

And apparently hubby actually gets some action, maybe even with other women? What??

Suggestion taken. People don't like wild things. The chart will be removed from public release.

 

[titsgtfo]

Suggestion taken. People don't like wild things. The chart will be removed from public release.

haven't played yet (downloading now) but I find the idea of the cuck chart both hilarious and excellent

 

[Turret]

Yes. The first one was a very week try. And this one is almost finished. So spit on me. I only published it here when it is almost finished. YYYYYEEEESSSS IIIIII AMMMMM THAT DEVELOPER. But I will finish Deserted island dreams.

I don't get too much support. So I do it as a hobby. I work as an engineer. I have a good job that is why I don't really mind how many supporters I have. Why I abandoned those games. I never abandoned Deserted island dreams. I just made a pause to do this game. You have too little chance to improve a story when you are limited to 2 islands. About Laura. That was a weak try. Read the comments. Just negative feedbacks. If mosts of the feedbacks are negative would you not leave the game? Yes, you would. And it was a good choice. I will never continue that game.

Then I tried to improve myself. Better plot. Better graph. I got very good experience in blender.

Here 50-50%. Why I can leave a game that is not welcomed by most of the community? Because I do it as a hobby. :-D :-D :-D :-D

Criticize somebody's work is very easy. (I am not talking about building tips.) You are in a very good position. You are untouchable. This game was paetron only for months. And thanks to you it will be again. I don't need this shit on my neck

My offer still stands to those who help me with making it "more English". You will get a final link.

Great that you will finish Deserted Island as well! I like that game, it has good possibilities. As for negative feedback: I am a hobby writer myself and I can tell you, good and bad critic will never stop happening. You need to grow a thick pelt and take the best from the feedback. Some bad feedback can still be helpful, but you can never stop the trolling of some people. Case in point, I get lots of praise for my stories, but backlash too. There is one guy who even admits he did not read more than the first paragraph of the story (which has over 40 chapters), but attacks it viciously. Facepalm!

 

[International]

Suggestion taken. People don't like wild things. The chart will be removed from public release.

He's not saying that it's bad. That chart is great, please keep it and add Marcus to it.

I'm not really into NTR, but impregnation and sluttyness are good. There's a good amount of content in the game so far, and you clearly want to make a specific kind of game, so keep at it. I do have a few suggestions from my playthroughs for things I would have liked while I was playing.

It's hard to notice when there's a POV change between the MC and GF. Maybe you could put an avatar of who's speaking next to the text box? Or use distinct colors for each character's name or text.

Character creation feels clunky, it would be nice to have a randomize option for the MC and his GF to be able to jump right in and deal with whatever happens. Maybe also a pre-set default option for stats for each?

There's a bug with watching the pen drive video on the boat with Marcus, the scene shows a hottub scene with Simon instead.

Emma fucking Elon on on cycle day 14 uses the same text as the first encounter. Makes it sound like they've never met, even after fucking several times.

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[Deleted member 770309]

"We will try to involve some nasty things in our games.
For example unprotected sex, pregnancy risk, threesomes, or cuckold relationships. All of them can be avoided. If you want to have a harem ending you will have the opportunity."
so they not really deliver what they promise on patreon. i can´t avoid all things and can´t have a harem. at least the stay true for the first 4 things.

I feel like a cuck queen option would of made both games far better you know were the wife gets off on watching the MC with other women.

 

[Malcowitz]

Suggestion taken. People don't like wild things. The chart will be removed from public release.

Nah man, the chart isn't the issue, as it explains what's going on for those that want to know: it's more the notion that you're tracking these wild variables around practically quantum cucking on the MC, where the least option is that he's the dad.

It's wild to see how the game seems to be about her being the village bicycle that usual porngames usually have the MC being, I guess, and all of it neatly tracked and charted in a way that shows precisely how it goes into the cheating

Both the ntr and the methodical nature of it are completely incomprehensible to me

 

[maverick@79]

horribly written no real choices and stuck with ntr content which is ok but not cool when its not listed that its unavoidable or avoidable

 

[RickJencans]

The graphics are pretty bad, to the point that I didn't find a single character remotely fappable. The english is also very hard to understand, as are the differences between many dialogue choices so I was often confused as to which option would advance which route. I also found a few of the events replaying over twice with different routes even if I chose one or the other. The boat event, for instance, always seems to play twice with different outcomes no matter what I pick. If this game got a LOT of polish, somewhere underneath here is a great concept for a game. The execution is very very flawed, but maybe that can be fixed. I like the multiple branching NTR routes, the option to avoid it is nice as well, though it seems many people are having trouble with it because they are all setting her lust to max. It might be better to avoid tying NTR to lust ONLY, instead tying to loyalty or other stats always, since almost everyone is probably going to click "100" when asked "how horny should your character's love interest be" in a porn game.

Oh, and for the record, I like the chart too. It was one of the things that made me interested in the game. Right now it obviously doesn't DO anything, but it's a fun thing to have and if it eventually becomes relevant to gameplay, that would be cool as well.

 

[Lou111]

This is quite good!
Those customization options at the start, bravo.
Not sure why we limited "times cheated" to 5 though...
The angle that the MC never found out about her cheating was never added in but overall the concept is genuinely unique.
Well played.

 

[ropppp]

He's not saying that it's bad. That chart is great, please keep it and add Marcus to it.

I'm not really into NTR, but impregnation and sluttyness are good. There's a good amount of content in the game so far, and you clearly want to make a specific kind of game, so keep at it. I do have a few suggestions from my playthroughs for things I would have liked while I was playing.

It's hard to notice when there's a POV change between the MC and GF. Maybe you could put an avatar of who's speaking next to the text box? Or use distinct colors for each character's name or text.

Character creation feels clunky, it would be nice to have a randomize option for the MC and his GF to be able to jump right in and deal with whatever happens. Maybe also a pre-set default option for stats for each?

There's a bug with watching the pen drive video on the boat with Marcus, the scene shows a hottub scene with Simon instead.

Emma fucking Elon on on cycle day 14 uses the same text as the first encounter. Makes it sound like they've never met, even after fucking several times.

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i will check the bugs rigt away. thank you for your feedback.

 

[thecook]

Hey nice game ! I saw there is a chastity cage in one of your screens ? How do you get to that scene ?

 

[ropppp]

Hey nice game ! I saw there is a chastity cage in one of your screens ? How do you get to that scene ?

Bob cuck route => find an other bull => Elon cuck route.