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Crosaith.

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Uh... wtf? How's this so highly rated? MC acts like a damn 12 year old. Hiding under a table, talking about ratting on a girl, childish responses etc etc.
 

White Bomber

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Wut.....? There's sex with Alice!? Really!?!?!??!
without spoiling. i think its the best ending, it was worth it.

the Vanilla story is actually good even without picking any of the 2 girls.

the dev is talented when making me and the boys story scenes, this is how guys usually act in real life, even when doing the right or wrong thing to solve problems.

im in the mood to try his other games.
 
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PatSnake

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Jan 4, 2018
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I'm putting this on ignore after playing it.

Liam is a piece of shit for what he did. The MC is so pathetic for how he reacted to Liam's betrayal. I ignored Celine and Penny and got a game over. Why would I want asshole Liam's leftovers or a stripper as a LI?

The overview of the game talks about Liam's sister and then surprise she is married and not an option. "It's worth mentioning that you've always been in love with his sister, maybe this is your chance to do something about it... maybe. Nobody knows what could happen on just one weekend ¿Right? " What a lie. Turns out there's no chance to do something about.

The game is bad decision after bad decision. Good luck to the dev.
I disagree completely with you! As far as I read from the previous comments, the first chapter was over when you posted this and if you have played it, you would now why Liam has done it and that Celine is clearly not a leftover!

I don't understand why people can be so mean without clearly hasn't played the game until the end first!

And regarding Alice, if you had a possibility with her, it would have defintely put a NTR tag to the game and there's not so...
 
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PatSnake

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Uh... wtf? How's this so highly rated? MC acts like a damn 12 year old. Hiding under a table, talking about ratting on a girl, childish responses etc etc.
Because the story is good! Like a story that could happen in real life! But I think you're kinda like good 'ol porn without any story in it! Seems like it! :LOL:
 

jaques

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And regarding Alice, if you had a possibility with her, it would have defintely put a NTR tag to the game and there's not so...
That is a load of bull. The husband could easily have put on a facade but would actual fall in the first category that Alice hates, the stripclub would have been a very good opportunity to get that facade to drop (could even make the route "hidden" so it is only triggered in a certain way), and things could snowball from there. Wouldn't have been resolved in the first chapter, but the seed could have been planted. Honestly wouldn't have cared about the actual seed having been planted, that could have just been another tragic twist to the story.

The entire "this is your chance to do something about it" in the intro is a shit red herring that soured a lot of the rest of the game.
 

PatSnake

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That is a load of bull. The husband could easily have put on a facade but would actual fall in the first category that Alice hates, the stripclub would have been a very good opportunity to get that facade to drop (could even make the route "hidden" so it is only triggered in a certain way), and things could snowball from there. Wouldn't have been resolved in the first chapter, but the seed could have been planted. Honestly wouldn't have cared about the actual seed having been planted, that could have just been another tragic twist to the story.

The entire "this is your chance to do something about it" in the intro is a shit red herring that soured a lot of the rest of the game.
This is your right to think like that but I still disagree.

This is what thought the MC in the intro of the game but after he realizes that he lost his chance because she's married and her husband is a nice guy. Apart from that, I understand that you would have preferred to date Alice rather than the others, she's a beautiful woman but she always saw the MC as her little brother so, it's the dev's choice and for me, that doesn't make the game bad. For me, it's even more realistic that way.
But you're not obliged to love the game neither play it. ;)
 
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impernable

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Man, what a ride. I just finished playing throught the Celine route and I loved every second of it, so much so that I'm now left sad that it's over.

I will go back to play through the Penny route eventually, but it's gonna be tough, every time I have to pick Penny over Celine I just can't do it.

Great job Mr George, wonderful game :)
 
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Crimsonfiend76

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For me it was easy to friend zone Celine just like what she did to Liam. Not a fan of the blue hair/alt-girl persona, though I did like her easy going personality. I also didn't like feeling pressured by the dev, breaking the 4th wall into pursuing her path. Just like most forced girlfriends in other VNs, I instantly resisted choosing her. On a side note dev, if your intent is to make a character like Celine the de facto main, obvious LI, either make her more attractive all around or make it a kinetic VN.

Honestly, I would have loved the opportunity to have a chance with Danielle, whether to date her, or as a friend with benefits. Fred was so hate-able, there was nothing dev could do to make him sympathetic to me. Speaking of sympathetic, I got the difficult position Liam was forced into, and nice subtext on the destructive nature of obsession overall, but I had issues with that first story arc. I get the why part, but Liam should have been a better life-long friend and just man-to-man or a bro and tell the MC about his sister Alice.

*She was not attracted to certain guys (in which apparently the MC felt he belonged to)
*She was only ever going to see the MC as a little brother and not a romantic partner
*The MC's unhealthy obsession already led to him missing out on other more available girls who did like the MC


Whether the MC accepted those reasons or not, it would be on the MC and not Liam, but at least Liam would have his conscious clear and told him what he needed to hear. At that point the MC would be able to choose if he could be the bigger person and support Alice at her wedding or even before she eventually met Camilo.

I also refused to believe that after harboring such life long intense feelings for someone, the MC was simply going to get over Alice that fast and be able to interact with both Liam and Alice like nothing. At the very least, it was going to take some time (and maybe some therapy/counseling) to get over the grief before being able to be open for someone else. For me, that's why it was easier to just friend zone Celine, at most maybe have a brief fling with Danielle or Celine with the understanding nothing will ever come of it, they have no future as they are heading in opposite directions.

Alice probably doesn't need to know the MC DOES NOT see her as a big sis or has been in love with her all his life, but if she is gonna press him on why he is acting the way he is, there should be an option to just confess to her, if for no other reason than to get that closure and get it off his chest. See this is why I felt baited playing this, I thought we would at least get a chance to be with Alice, but not only did that not happen, I hated hearing about how she was already pregnant with another man's baby.
The MC may think he belonged to one of the category of men she detests, but I disagree. The MC was every bit the same as Camilo, except not short or ugly. I believe that the MC could have been given the opportunity to show Alice he can treat her as just another person, who loves her unconditionally without putting her on a pedestal. I also think it was a bit heavy handed how the dev wants the player to romance Celine, but then later presents another girl as a romantic option. Kinda sending mixed messages, no? Unless you're gonna allow players the chance at a harem or throuple, why even introduce competition for Celine?

IMO, my dream path would have been a full harem with Alice, Celine, Penny and maybe even Danielle, or at least some kind of throuple options.
 
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manabasha

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There were 2 chapters in this game before (Ch1, Ch2), do we need to download the old ones, and if so where? or is the final chapter covers both 1 & 2?
 

snowman97

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Is there a way to sleep with girls other than Celine and Penny except for the imagination ending?
 

Jah-Ith-Ber

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This was a very nice diamond in the rough.

This just gave me really nice 90's rom-com vibes. It was well written and well crafted and tugged at the heart strings before giving you a pleasant HEF.

Amazing the dev made such a long game in only 9 months.

I really preferred Celine as a brunette she was so cute and girl-next-doorish lol

I was kind of skeptical about this in the first chapter. It felt like the tone was conflicted because it was talking about obsession and putting a girl on a pedestal being bad but it was like the MC was doing exactly that all over again. He went from "perfect" love of his life Alice to the manic pixie dream girl in Celine. Celine doesn't really redeem herself from this sterotype unless you pick her in which case I do think she is miles away the best choice as MC starts to know her as a whole person and fall in love with her for real. I see the logic in moving on from Celine but it makes no sense to pass up a promotion in order to stay with Penny who he's known for such a short while. The Celine path feels organic and moving towns for a promotion is something MC seemingly would do anyways even without the consideration of being closer to her.

Cannot wait to see what dev comes out with next really loved it.

ps - I get peoples bad feelings about not being able to get with Alice it hurt but thats because this story speaks to a pretty universal male experience of heavily crushing on the IDEA of a girl rather than the person so the catharsis of being able to move past it I think was really nice and made for good story-telling (more so then just winning over Alice would've been)
 
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