The corruption goes fast af, the girl gives herself way too easy... but for a first game is a lot better than most Scars clones, so that's something. Let's hope he focuses on 1-2 routes max next time so he can flesh them out.
The dad route was like, yeah, you can touch my boobs because you're sad, oh okay, you can fuck me now, boring as hell.
The rich dwarf was like oh, I'm rich, I have connections, I can help your loved ones, I can fuck you and she was like oh ok.
The dude from the online game asked her for photos, she sent him photos, then met in person and 2 days later he's already fucking her...