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"take revenge on every guy that sleep with your wife."
Now this is the type of NTR i can get behind
Now this is the type of NTR i can get behind
Basicly to cuck or get cucked.Some scene will be avoidable, you'll have the choice to peek or not, but some won't be !
But it's more like a half-NTR game, your are being cheated on, but you won't be a faithful husband !
Meet various girls, travel and take revenge on every guy that sleep with your wife.
...You would be the type to sit in some dark corner of the room with his hand shoved down his shorts.
That's equity for you
Revenge by becoming NTR Guy yourself. Dis-NTR-isation through NTR... Will this suit you?I want "Can I revenge NTR Guy?"
Because the MC wants to get his revenge, and to do so, staying close to his wife is necessary. Also, he hasn't fully figured out his feelings about this whole situation yet!I mean, i like netori as well as revenge...
But why are you even staying with that slut wife, if you are no cuck and know she cheats![]()
Not for now, I’ll try to improve the texts for the next version. If I can’t manage, I’ll call on proofreaders!Are you looking for proof readers?
I don't want to spoil too much, but :Does the revenge end in being cucked more?
3 images is indeed very few, but it's mostly because I didn't necessarily want to show more yet! The more updates there are, the more images there will be. I tweak the AI images on a few details, but RPGM allows for a good balance between non-AI and AI.There's only 3 preview pics right now, and I have a mega aversion to varying art styles in games. I'll take another look once there's some more preview of what to expect from the game. I have no problem with AI art provided it's not all over the place.
Revenge it is my good sir!I don't care "Is NTR unavoidable?" . I want "Can I revenge NTR Guy?"![]()
Some scenes are avoidable, others won't be. But there will be few unavoidable scenes!Is the netori avoidable?
That's a good point, some quests might not necessarily be completable in a single update, but I'll try to "cut" them to make everything more digestible. Otherwise, I'll definitely try to make the quests as finishable as possible.Not a terrible first release. You did mark it as a demo, so you'll get a pass for a lot. Just remember that people will get less forgiving as time goes on and more content is added to the game.
Personally would've liked to see more completed content than just the prologue/tutorial, but that's just me.
My advice to the dev, so that you stand out from other RPGM games:
1. Release completed quests in each update. Trickling quest progress per update gets old after a while and people could lose interest. I'm aware that making a game is hard work, even with simpler engines like RPGM. Look at how other popular games handle their updates and organize your development process to imitate that in a way that works best for you.
2. Proof your text before releasing it. I saw a few basic grammar and spelling errors that could easily be avoided, even if English is not your first language. There are free text document programs/apps out there that come with spell checkers and grammar checkers. Just put your dialog in there to clean it up and then copy it over.
I don't plan on making the game overly complex, just adding a few puzzles and collecting quests, and that's it. I use RPGM to have a "base" for the game that I find interesting, not to make a combat-style RPG!3. Follow the rule of KISS. Keep It Simple, Stupid. You don't need any elaborate mechanics in the game, a simple point-and-click is fine. Especially if you want to keep the game accessible for one-handed play. Your current setup is perfectly okay. Don't pull a Secret Dawn and add features or mini-games that people aren't asking for or don't want. It detracts from the experience of wanting to enjoy a simple porn game.
Thanks!4. Your premise is very promising and well done so far. Keep it up. It's perfectly valid if you just want a light-hearted story that isn't meant to be taken seriously.
I have the storyline for now, a few points about different characters, and an idea of the events I want to include in the game. But overall, the script is mostly written! I want to keep the story simple to avoid getting lost in it, having too many inconsistencies, or even discouraging the player.5. Make sure to plan out your story much further out than your updates are. It'll help you stay on track and lock you in on what assets you'll need to get updates done. Planning is a huge part of game dev, and I've seen far too many adult games on this site fall apart because devs plan each update as it comes rather than plotting a lot of the narrative and mechanics out in advance before they sit down and start working on their games. This is especially important if you intend to have a plot with increasing complexity, such as how the curses will affect the men and the lives of their wives. Interconnectivity can make the world feel more full than it actually is, but remember suggestion 3 as well. Pretty sure most people here don't care if the story is the next Lisa or BaDIK. We mostly just wanna get off.