VN Ren'Py NTR'ed by My Friend [v0.13.1] [NTR.ai]

[NTR.ai]

Hmm so there are 1 NTS and 3 NTR routes for this?

Anyone care to share what's the difference between Pure NTR, Light NTR and Heavy NTR?

Based on initial impressions so far, this VN is rather verbose when it comes to third party narration. Most VNs even if word heavy, usually emphasise in the dialogue and internal thoughts space instead of narration. Feels like it was translated directly from a web erotica.... Nice graphics and animations for an AI game though.

Just to clarify, it’s not from any web erotica. At first, I didn’t really know how to balance narration and dialogue, but with each version, I gradually reduced the amount of narration. By v0.11, I think I finally found a length that feels right. I decided to keep it that way for three reasons:

1. I feel that having one or two lines of narration between dialogues helps keep the pacing from feeling too tight or rushed.
2. I don’t want to include too many of the MC’s thoughts, because if he overthinks but doesn’t act, it is weird.
3. Given the second point, some of the “underlying tension” or subtle ongoing developments still need to be hinted at through narration.

 

[Slooty_StoriesX]

Just to clarify, it’s not from any web erotica. At first, I didn’t really know how to balance narration and dialogue, but with each version, I gradually reduced the amount of narration. By v0.11, I think I finally found a length that feels right. I decided to keep it that way for three reasons:

1. I feel that having one or two lines of narration between dialogues helps keep the pacing from feeling too tight or rushed.
2. I don’t want to include too many of the MC’s thoughts, because if he overthinks but doesn’t act, it is weird.
3. Given the second point, some of the “underlying tension” or subtle ongoing developments still need to be hinted at through narration.

FWIW however you want to describe the storytelling, it's mostly working for me.

 

[NTR.ai]

Alas, that happens in almost every NTR game. No other choice is available; NTR(cheating) requires the male MCs to be kept in the dark as long as possible, plus players who fantasise about cheating sex always seek the thrill brought by the risk of getting caught. Hence, explicit and blatant cheating sex can only be presented next to those stupid males who are too foolish to notice what is going on; only they can justify the outrageous and unrealistic negligence.

Exactly.

Just to add, I did try to depict the obliviousness is more like his trust and kindness.

 

[NTR.ai]

The game started good and I liked the NTR path till they had sex on the bed where MC was present and sleeping. At least drug the man, have him drink bottle of wisky so we can understand why he did not wake up with all the noise and movement!
Unfortunately, the more update we had, especially NTR path became so mediocre/stupid. MC became super oblivious and stupid. I was fucking shocked when I see that in one of the NTR ending he said "get out of the house".

I tried to justify it by him drinking wine and exhausted due to two days of sleeping around three hours.

 

[Slooty_StoriesX]

"Don't worry about it. Enjoy time with your dad."

OMG sweetie, nooooooooooo!!!

Why do I get the feeling she's still calling *someone* Daddy?

 

[noxcha]

Respect to the dev. Not milking it like others do just wrapping up this game and moving on to the next release. I think the game is basically complete, and it was a damn good one. Bravo!

 

[Wicks99]

Just to clarify, it’s not from any web erotica. At first, I didn’t really know how to balance narration and dialogue, but with each version, I gradually reduced the amount of narration. By v0.11, I think I finally found a length that feels right. I decided to keep it that way for three reasons:

1. I feel that having one or two lines of narration between dialogues helps keep the pacing from feeling too tight or rushed.
2. I don’t want to include too many of the MC’s thoughts, because if he overthinks but doesn’t act, it is weird.
3. Given the second point, some of the “underlying tension” or subtle ongoing developments still need to be hinted at through narration.

Thanks for the clarification. I may have been over hasty in forming an opinion given that I'm still early in gameplay - now at the part where Cristie first banged Blake in the bathroom, so that's like a V0.2 perhaps?

I have no issues with having some third-party narration, in fact I don't really like the 99% dialogue + slideshow that is adopted by most of the Daz games out there, too dependent on visual renders. It's just that where I am at in early game, the ratio outside of lewds is like 50% narration : 30% dialogue : 20% thinking which is quite unusual for an AVN.

Hence I figured the game might have been a port over from a novel where such allocations are the norm. Glad to hear that you've settled on a good formula for the script in later versions and certainly looking forward to improvements as I go along.

Still a thumbs up for the nice graphics and animations. Nicely made. Only thing is so far I notice animations have a slightly different aspect ratio resulting in black side bars on the sides when played, not sure if this was intentional or a limitation of RenPy?

 

[drips99]

Can we get scene with milf?

 

[Slooty_StoriesX]

Oh, MC, you poor bastard.



You poor, poor bastard.
I have so much to process now. Damn you dev. I hate you. And maybe love you.

 

[MN01-737]

part of me hoped we saw an ending scene with Sarah if you know what i mean... "Mc gets fucked again thinking Sarah is strong but in the end she still gets taken by Blake." the apotheosis of ntr i would say

 

[Slooty_StoriesX]

part of me hoped we saw an ending scene with Sarah if you know what i mean... "Mc gets fucked again thinking Sarah is strong but in the end she still gets taken by Blake." the apotheosis of ntr i would say

I was half expecting that twist. I guess we have to save something for the sequel. That will be devastating.

 

[Rahveryn]

Just finished with your NTR paths... I am pretty sure I'd just leave, hunt Blake, then in a moment when he away from the minted whores, without a word spoken just blow Blake's head off, leave him in a ditch, turn my back on the worthless whores, and leave them all in misery. Fuck. them. all. My god I have rarely hated a character as much as your antagonist, Mr. NTR.ai. The only ending that I actually enjoyed on this path was the "Slight NTR" one. Wow.

That said, you do great art. the images are top notch. The story flowed, even if it flowed directly into a steaming pile of crap, Fairly solid storytelling even if I can't understand this kink. Overall, a very well done project. I'm curious how my Bittersweet and NTS saves will end up.

 

[Slooty_StoriesX]

I was going to save the "severe humiliation" NTR for tomorrow night, but I ended up going back into the game now to play through it. It's so fucked up. All three of those endings were severely fucked up.

...And I'm going to play through them all again tomorrow night.

 

[Zobra]

I’m really into the NTR theme, but unfortunately, there aren't many NTR games out there

i mean....

i wish there was an Option to play as FMC only , male protagonist in NTR games (generally) fucks my head & gives me headache with how Stupid they can be
Tho is there a path to claim your girl back ? (then maybe share her willingly like a cuck) or the MC doomed to get Ntred Only and stay in the dark

p.s: So why the fuck are you here if you don't like NTR ? well , the answer can be complicated , for example some ntr games can be fun when Protagonist is female or when MC revenge back then dump the bitch

 

[Chaoticjustice]

In the moderate humiliation ending

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[Snitzel1402]

After see ending i think if u make DLC or side story about Evelyn side will be intersting xD

about story see her corrupted XD

 

[hotzenfotz]

Dev please continue NTRd by my dad now, and make the people less brain dead. The art is insanely hot.

 

[NTR.ai]

Thanks for the clarification. I may have been over hasty in forming an opinion given that I'm still early in gameplay - now at the part where Cristie first banged Blake in the bathroom, so that's like a V0.2 perhaps?

I have no issues with having some third-party narration, in fact I don't really like the 99% dialogue + slideshow that is adopted by most of the Daz games out there, too dependent on visual renders. It's just that where I am at in early game, the ratio outside of lewds is like 50% narration : 30% dialogue : 20% thinking which is quite unusual for an AVN.

Hence I figured the game might have been a port over from a novel where such allocations are the norm. Glad to hear that you've settled on a good formula for the script in later versions and certainly looking forward to improvements as I go along.

Still a thumbs up for the nice graphics and animations. Nicely made. Only thing is so far I notice animations have a slightly different aspect ratio resulting in black side bars on the sides when played, not sure if this was intentional or a limitation of RenPy?

Thanks for the clarifications as well. I actually appreciate scenes that rely heavily on visual renders, if I understood you correctly, like those with subtle movements. Unfortunately, since AI tends to be quite unpredictable, I often can’t create those kinds of details, so I have to rely on narration to describe things like a nervous flinch.

As for the black bars on the sides, thanks for pointing that out. I’d noticed them before and initially thought it was a Ren’Py limitation, but after checking some animations today, I found that a few don’t have the black gaps. So I guess that was my mistake—I’ll make sure to pay more attention to it. (Though for some scenes with larger black areas, that was intentional.)

 

[NTR.ai]

Just finished with your NTR paths... I am pretty sure I'd just leave, hunt Blake, then in a moment when he away from the minted whores, without a word spoken just blow Blake's head off, leave him in a ditch, turn my back on the worthless whores, and leave them all in misery. Fuck. them. all. My god I have rarely hated a character as much as your antagonist, Mr. NTR.ai. The only ending that I actually enjoyed on this path was the "Slight NTR" one. Wow.

That said, you do great art. the images are top notch. The story flowed, even if it flowed directly into a steaming pile of crap, Fairly solid storytelling even if I can't understand this kink. Overall, a very well done project. I'm curious how my Bittersweet and NTS saves will end up.

Yeah, that path is meant for people who value, I guess I’d say realism. And although I wouldn’t agree with the word “crap,” I appreciate your relatively objective opinion, especially considering you don’t understand the kink.

 

[Rahveryn]

Yeah, that path is meant for people who value, I guess I’d say realism. And although I wouldn’t agree with the word “crap,” I appreciate your relatively objective opinion, especially considering you don’t understand the kink.

Well, I was trying to be nicer in my wording. What else would you call the situation your MC finds himself in on the Hard NTR and Pure NTR paths? Either one is an unacceptable situation to find ones self in. "Crap" is as nice an adjective as I can find for it.

That said, you told the story well. I understood the characters even if I did not particularly like many of them. The artwork was some of the best I've seen in many, many VN/Games. In fact it was the quality of your art that kept me coming back, as I'm obviously not into the MC Humiliation types of NTR games and stories. So I continued to look, in spite of my reservations, to this point, simply because when somebody does a good job, it is deserving of praise. Your work does.

Thank you for that Slight NTR ending, btw. I don't know if I'd have explored the other two had I not followed that one out to completion first. lol