VN Ren'Py NTR'ed by My Friend [v0.3.0] [NTR.ai]

[NTR.ai]

To be honest, all you're doing now is making your ignorance and inability to respond logically even more obvious...

 

[ItsNotUs]

To be honest, all you're doing now is making your ignorance and inability to respond logically even more obvious...

Yes, my logic is not compatible with yours!
Cristine shouldn't swallow cum in one place so as not to stain body! Lol In real life, some girls are so squeamish that they can't even think about cum getting into their mouths! But go on!

 

[NTR.ai]

Yes, my logic is not compatible with yours!
Cristine shouldn't swallow cum in one place so as not to stain body! Lol In real life, some girls are so squeamish that they can't even think about cum getting into their mouths! But go on!

Yeah, yeah, funny how the saint keeps tripping over his own logic.

They argue with me, I don’t argue with them!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Yeah, yeah, funny how the saint keeps tripping over his own logic.

I just laughed, you wrote to me - what's wrong?

 

[NTR.ai]

I just laughed, you wrote to me - what's wrong?

I just typed, you argued with me - what's wrong?

 

[jarngaffel]

1. Sorry, but did you play v0.5.0 or v0.5.1? I refined a lot of the dialogues in v0.5.1, so I’m just curious if the changes feel like an improvement to you.
2. About the semen part—the reason why the FMC agrees to take it in her mouth is because she doesn’t want it getting on her body. So ideally, most of it shouldn’t be dripping out.
3. As for Blake's behavior—I designed it this way to maintain a more believable relationship dynamic early on. I didn’t want him to come across as too much of a jerk from the start, so their friendship would feel more genuine. Of course, once he starts actively trying to sleep with Cristine, that dynamic changes completely. But in the beginning, I wanted to keep him from being too aggressive or forceful.

Thanks again for the feedback! Just a small note—sometimes the design choices aren’t just for logic, tension, or eroticism, but also for pacing and character development. I hope that makes sense!

I mean I don't know about the drama, just writing what I feel lol

1. Yea just played 0.5.1 and it feels much better but God still gets used alot. Nothing wrong with it but it gets repetitive.

3. In terms of pacing so far it feels ok until the bathroom scene as it does not feel like shes willing to go that way yet and the way it happens isn't really believable. Considering she hasn't sized or touched Blake's member at all, has not had any direct sexual interaction with Blake yet and she just casually slips in this gargantuan dick casually not knowing Blake is sitting there in the bathroom then not doing anything about it is kinda... a leap and a half in hentai logic. Thats also why JAVs have alot of teasing to make the NTR more believable.

Only giving my feedback because I felt like there would have been a good teasing animation to move this pacing into the BJ scene and -then- eventually into the bathroom scene where she can't resist getting off once shes tasted a little of what Blake has to offer. Saying all this cause Ive been liking your stuff, just food for thought.

 

[NTR.ai]

I mean I don't know about the drama, just writing what I feel lol

1. Yea just played 0.5.1 and it feels much better but God still gets used alot. Nothing wrong with it but it gets repetitive.

3. In terms of pacing so far it feels ok until the bathroom scene as it does not feel like shes willing to go that way yet and the way it happens isn't really believable. Considering she hasn't sized or touched Blake's member at all, has not had any direct sexual interaction with Blake yet and she just casually slips in this gargantuan dick casually not knowing Blake is sitting there in the bathroom then not doing anything about it is kinda... a leap and a half in hentai logic. Thats also why JAVs have alot of teasing to make the NTR more believable.

Only giving my feedback because I felt like there would have been a good teasing animation to move this pacing into the BJ scene and -then- eventually into the bathroom scene where she can't resist getting off once shes tasted a little of what Blake has to offer. Saying all this cause Ive been liking your stuff, just food for thought.

1. Oh, got it—sorry about that! I’ll be more mindful next time.
2. I see what you’re getting at, and I appreciate the perspective. Just to clarify, though—some JAV actually do start with direct penetration and build the emotional tension afterward. I’m not saying that to justify my approach, but just to explain where I was coming from in designing the scene. I totally get that the pacing feels different from what most NTR games do. It’s true—I’ve just gotten a bit worn out by the typical slow-burn and wanted to try something a little different.

And don’t worry—I know you’re giving feedback in good faith, not like a certain self-proclaimed saint out there, haha. I really do appreciate it. I wasn’t offended at all, and I hope nothing I said came off the wrong way either. I just wanted to give you a bit of insight so you’d know the choices weren’t made at random. I’m sorry if it didn’t quite land for you, but I genuinely did put thought into it and tried to make it meaningful.

 

[ItsNotUs]

I just typed, you argued with me - what's wrong?

To be honest, all you're doing now is making your ignorance and inability to respond logically even more obvious...
Is this called just typed?
Lol
Well then I typed it too - what's wrong?

 

[NTR.ai]

To be honest, all you're doing now is making your ignorance and inability to respond logically even more obvious...
Is this called just typed?
Lol
Well then I typed it too - what's wrong?

Yeah, yeah, whatever you say, making an argument again, funny.

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

It seems we’re very much on the same page. I’ve gone ahead and revised the dialogue and uploaded the new version—really sorry about how rough the original lines were.

And as for the update frequency, it’s because I still focused on this one haha
BTW, may I know why you like Cristine more?

I haven't read the update yet but I'll check this later.

As for Christine compared to Grace, well, that's just my preference for brunettes. I'll add that the comparison is obviously unfair because we've seen more expressions, attires and personality when the new one is just an empty shell so far.

Though, I have to say that the new character gives a more innocent vibe despite being built like a bombshell, which should fit the tone of your new story.