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yay some hairy girls would love for some hairy armpits but still happy.
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Shaving in a "Nudist School" world should be a mandatory requirement with daily inspections to make certain not a single hair escaped.Shaving in "Nudist School" world should be punished by imprisonment for 25 years or more...
That's my opinion.
That's my opinion.
- Oct 24, 2019
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Having only shaved girls is boring. Well I love them all, but a variation is always welcome.
I liked it the game.
I liked it the game.
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- Feb 21, 2020
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Fingers crossed, brother!
It's well deserved, Elsa94!hey guys! Thank you for all the love!! I totally did not expect it! Thank you
I don't think seeing the MC and Olivia having sex this soon has botched the narrative, but it feels like in the next update there could be a scene where they reflect on that, and then move on to have it simply because they want to get intimate. Frankly, Elsa94, don't sweat it. It wasn't a blunder at all.
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I feel like being a guy and a nudist in an all-female school would be a total disaster, if only because I'd spend the entire time with a massive hard-on that would never go down. Teenage boy hormones and naked girls don't really mix well.
Game looks good. Interesting premise, nice renders. Hopefully things go well.
- Jan 31, 2019
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Okay, played the update - damn! Olivia is freaking GOLD man! Love her big tits and amazing nipples.
A few notes though - would definitely get an english proofreader and writer onto this, as there are still many errors in the spelling and grammar, plus there are sometimes better ways to explain things happening. Like the last scene, rather than 'you cum' when the MC ejaculates, maybe write something along the lines of 'you can't hold it anymore; she feels so damn good! Shuddering, you shoot your load into her!' But, that's just my opinion, and I'm a native english speaker and reader, so that's my bread and butter.
Beyond that, while, I know it's hard, I'd advise a bit more evidence of intercourse in your pictures and scenes. For example the creampie with Olivia showed no visual evidence of her having just being creampied, not cum leaking out down the MC's penis, no cum on the MC himself or on the floor from the multiple ejaculations. Plus, there's no reaction on Olivia's part about actually taking a dick for (possibly) the first time, from her facial expressions, or her inner thoughts, at least during the deed itself. From her reaction, you'd assume she was just doing homework, not breaking her hymen, or doing somethign which (most) people on the planet find to be extremely pleasurable. Adding those details would be a good idea, in my opinion.
Also, just replayed it - I just realised from the first creampie, to the break in the second, the MC's body has suddenly swung 180 degrees, to the point where at first he was looking at her ass, to the second creampie where he's suddenly looking at Olivia's tits and face. Smal graphical mistake, I think.
Anyway, thank you so much for the lovely game Elsa94. I look forward to seeing the updates as they come.
A few notes though - would definitely get an english proofreader and writer onto this, as there are still many errors in the spelling and grammar, plus there are sometimes better ways to explain things happening. Like the last scene, rather than 'you cum' when the MC ejaculates, maybe write something along the lines of 'you can't hold it anymore; she feels so damn good! Shuddering, you shoot your load into her!' But, that's just my opinion, and I'm a native english speaker and reader, so that's my bread and butter.
Beyond that, while, I know it's hard, I'd advise a bit more evidence of intercourse in your pictures and scenes. For example the creampie with Olivia showed no visual evidence of her having just being creampied, not cum leaking out down the MC's penis, no cum on the MC himself or on the floor from the multiple ejaculations. Plus, there's no reaction on Olivia's part about actually taking a dick for (possibly) the first time, from her facial expressions, or her inner thoughts, at least during the deed itself. From her reaction, you'd assume she was just doing homework, not breaking her hymen, or doing somethign which (most) people on the planet find to be extremely pleasurable. Adding those details would be a good idea, in my opinion.
Also, just replayed it - I just realised from the first creampie, to the break in the second, the MC's body has suddenly swung 180 degrees, to the point where at first he was looking at her ass, to the second creampie where he's suddenly looking at Olivia's tits and face. Smal graphical mistake, I think.
Anyway, thank you so much for the lovely game Elsa94. I look forward to seeing the updates as they come.
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To be fair, you could call out those with hardened nips and soaked nethers.
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Here is some thoughts: maybe this whole garden club scene could be moved to a later chapter (assuming that this visual novel will be organized as chapters). You could then think of something different to substitute for the second nudist trip. That way, you can keep all of these renders but shift it to a different point in this novel.
I agree that it is not a blunder at all. In fact, I love it. But I think the timing of this whole sex thing might be a bit... sudden, relative to the entire novel sequence. But I don't have a problem with keeping this scene in the position it is in now if the author choose to do so. As you said, a scene where they would reflect on what just happened there might be a good way to address this, whether the scene is moved or not.
On another note, Elsa94, I really love this entire garden club environment. May I ask what is the name of DAZ3D scene/environment/whatever this asset is called? Presumably, it is available off the DAZ3D Store. It is quite a beautiful setting, if I may say so. If you had made any adjustments to the settings like adding or moving any objects in it, I think you set it up quite well.
Speaking of which, I think this is a setting that the novel could return at some point. Honestly, I have been a bit obsessed with gardening... in The Sims 4. I don't garden in real life but I like having nice gardens around the house. That and, of course, I like pubic garden, too. Not just public garden.
Sorry, just have to go there. That being said, we need to be mindful of a potential downside from moving scenes which is that it may render the saves made at the end of this update incompatible. You can, however, rename the old scenes and use their old names for substitute scenes. Assuming, of course, that they were not uniquely named like "garden" in their name.
Either way, I am fine with whatever decisions you may make, Elsa94. It is all up to you.
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Game/Creator: Nudist School/ Elsa
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This is my walkthrough mod for this game. I added some recommended choices and also have a cheat choice for all scenes (mostly in the 1st release). Enjoy!!.
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This is my walkthrough mod for this game. I added some recommended choices and also have a cheat choice for all scenes (mostly in the 1st release). Enjoy!!.
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P/s: Updated to v0.14
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