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Посмотрел новое обновление.
Сюжет с учительницей интересный. Только как и до этого уже писал что можно было добавлять побольше описания при интимных сценах. Они проходят очень быстро с минимум описания. То есть пару слов и в следующей сцене видео уже поменялось. Всё показано но можно было ещё пару сцен описания ощущений действий написать. Это не помешает. Но обновление всё в том же стиле что и до этого игра. Дальше просто пару слов про то что можно добавить.
I looked at the new update.
The story with the teacher is interesting. Only, as I already wrote before, it was possible to add more description during intimate scenes. They go very quickly with a minimum of description. That is, a few words and in the next scene the video has already changed. Everything is shown, but a couple more scenes could have been written describing the sensations of the actions. It won't hurt. But the update is still in the same style as the game before. Then just a few words about what you can add.
Ошибки. Errors.
Что нужно. What do you need.
Остальное. Rest.
Сюжет с учительницей интересный. Только как и до этого уже писал что можно было добавлять побольше описания при интимных сценах. Они проходят очень быстро с минимум описания. То есть пару слов и в следующей сцене видео уже поменялось. Всё показано но можно было ещё пару сцен описания ощущений действий написать. Это не помешает. Но обновление всё в том же стиле что и до этого игра. Дальше просто пару слов про то что можно добавить.
I looked at the new update.
The story with the teacher is interesting. Only, as I already wrote before, it was possible to add more description during intimate scenes. They go very quickly with a minimum of description. That is, a few words and in the next scene the video has already changed. Everything is shown, but a couple more scenes could have been written describing the sensations of the actions. It won't hurt. But the update is still in the same style as the game before. Then just a few words about what you can add.
Ошибки. Errors.
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Что нужно. What do you need.
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FYI, if anyone plays this release but finds some later save don't load, you should be able to use a save from the hot springs or earlier. (I was specifically able to use a save where the MC chooses at which girls to look, just before he gets an erection that touches Olivia.)
Thank you very much. I was just patiently waiting, because I knew there would be an update sooner or later. And I got rewarded for that patience. Nice job!
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Hey, Elsa94, I noticed you still have something that previously had been pointed out: at the end of v0.8 where Diana asks the girls various questions, you still have renders where the tape over girls' nipples disappear and then reappear (e.g., have Bailey miss the Hooke's Law question; have Glory miss the question about DNA; have Lyra miss the question about π; etc.). If that is supposed to be the MC imagining it, that isn't clear. If not, you might want to correct that because it's a little confusing to see it happen.
Also, at the bar, you have this:
It looks like you already gave the "Teacher" over the main class a first name (Rose), so I'm not sure why you don't use it since you do say "Madam Diana". (I would at least say "Madam Diana and your teacher" in the above line, although I think "Madams Diana and Rose" works well.)
Also, at the bar, you have this:
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I'm all for having NO tape!!! NO TAPE!!! NO TAPE!!! NO TAPE!!!
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I don't disagree. Consistency or less confusing switches would be nice, though.
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It would be cool if MC went up and just peeled it off saying, "Better take this crap off if you expect me to maintain an erection!" Hahaha
Tape on the nipples is NEVER a good look!Sooo... there's virgin/s in this game, right? are any of the girls we did so far a virgin? coz I don't seems to recall any of them bleed.
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not even sextapes?
doubt it, newcomer might be but most likely not.Sooo... there's virgin/s in this game, right? are any of the girls we did so far a virgin? coz I don't seems to recall any of them bleed.
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I'm pretty sure most of them are implied to be very inexperienced if not actual virgins. As for bleeding, in the vast majority of games that I've played that have had explicitly stated virgins, the vast majority of the time no blood is shown so you can't depend on that as an indicator of virginity.Sooo... there's virgin/s in this game, right? are any of the girls we did so far a virgin? coz I don't seems to recall any of them bleed.
Not complaining, tho, but it'd still be nice to see abit of red just to be positively sure, I'm pretty sure there's no mention if Allana was a V or not before, after and during the first time MC "poke" her, even Olivia, I think it's only MC assuming she's a V iirc, heck Lena too even tho iirc she said she's a V ( also abit "anti-climactic" if she's really still a V when she lost her V card to MC )
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