PalmFace

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Oooh, I see. I thought there was supposed to be more content after the "temple entrance" lol

Can you say what the last chance to avoid the bad end is? ^^
Anybody able to tell me which choice leads to the bad end? Not too keen to replay everything without knowing where to avoid the ending lol
 

Kripper10

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Man... this was kinda boring as far as an H-Game/VN goes. Very few choices, and when you *do* the kinky fun stuff, there's like... fuck all, lol. I'd recommend waiting until they add WAY more adult content before jumping in this stuff because, at a certain point, I was literally just turning on the skip-all option cause of how boring the story was. I came for the kink and porn, not a horror story that often gets confusing and too weird for a porno.

When you do get to the actual kink stuff, it's great, but just the lead-up to that stuff is so long. You'll spend like an hour plus just reading a bunch of stuff that makes you feel more like you've wasted 7.8g of space for this... If there's one recommendation I'd give to the author/creator of this; focus on the porn more than the story if you want to keep people invested in this.

If all you're seeking is to write a novel, I recommend places like RoyalRoad or itch. The reason I say this bit of harshness? The porn in this feels like it's just a minor addition rather than the main focus. Literally, it felt like the adult content in this game was just added last minute and you'd not at all notice anything was missing if it was removed tomorrow XD.
 

Kripper10

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It's more... if they want to focus on the story and just the story, they shouldn't make it an H-Game. As it is, there was essentially no porn content for the vast majority of the VN aside from a handful of parts, and it all felt as though it was added for the sake of just... being there rather than serving an actual purpose for the story. When the fun stuff does, actually start coming up, the game ends... 0.7 update and 7.85g of stuff, with the vast majority of it being nothing beyond... just this handful of fun scenes, with the rest all just more dialogue and focus on the story rather than the stuff many of us on F95 are actually searching for.

I respect the author, developers, and artists for putting this together, and I appreciate their efforts, but as it stands, this feels less like a porn game and more like a horror/mystery novel with how little actual porn is in it.
 
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DiscipleOfVirginia

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It's more... if they want to focus on the story and just the story, they shouldn't make it an H-Game. As it is, there was essentially no porn content for the vast majority of the VN aside from a handful of parts, and it all felt as though it was added for the sake of just... being there rather than serving an actual purpose for the story. When the fun stuff does, actually start coming up, the game ends... 0.7 update and 7.85g of stuff, with the vast majority of it being nothing beyond... just this handful of fun scenes, with the rest all just more dialogue and focus on the story rather than the stuff many of us on F95 are actually searching for.

I respect the author, developers, and artists for putting this together, and I appreciate their efforts, but as it stands, this feels less like a porn game and more like a horror/mystery novel with how little actual porn is in it.
But what if, hypothetically of course, this ratio of story to erotica is what makes the author put food on their table? And one of the reasons their game sticks out from the crowd? What if, and bare with me here, that in order to write erotica well, you need tension? And if the main character gets their cheeks clapped within an hour, there is not much more you can do with said character in terms of tension (That we allready established is a necessary component of erotica)? And this could have been an issue and a major criticism of the authors first work, which may or may not have included a caked up gypsy with a gun (Again, we are only speaking in hypotheticals here)? And this is them rectifying said issue?

(This all being hypothetical of course)

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Anybody able to tell me which choice leads to the bad end? Not too keen to replay everything without knowing where to avoid the ending lol
I'm pretty sure it was the choice Trish makes to tell Ryan or not about Amy. Not telling leads to the bad end. There are also the bad ends when you fumble the password inputs too many times, but that is just an instant game over with no further story or sex scenes.
 
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Massi89

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At a certain point, when the character list gets updated with Eddie and Em, I get an error message whenever I try to enter the character list (although if I just keep reding the VN, it seems to be working fine so far).
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DiscipleOfVirginia

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Reading version 0.7
At a certain point, when the character list gets updated with Eddie and Em, I get an error message whenever I try to enter the character list (although if I just keep reding the VN, it seems to be working fine so far).
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Are you playing from the start? As in, did you download the latest version and then play from the start?
 

Massi89

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Definitely the Björk of adult games.
That sounds like a great compliment, Björk is a genius musician.
I hope that Melanie falls in love and marries Gerald.
There is this picture that excites me a lot, the one on DiscipleOfVirginia's patreon page, with Gerald touching Melanie's butt, and she looks back at him with a horny smile while carrying her husband on her shoulders :love:
 
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