There is some room for improvement in the writing but I think that part of it is just typos, another part of it is just caused by the fact that the developer is not a native English speaker (I assume she's from Sweden), and another part of it is intentional. Klaudia (character in the game) is a Swede and she speaks a slightly broken English for that reason.Picked this up after being moderately interested in an early version of one of the Dev's other projects. But after an hour of clicking through hundreds and hundreds of screens of poorly written prose I'm wondering if this even qualifies as a 'Game'. I haven't had a single choice to make yet.
Does it have any? Does it have enough which have sufficient impact that you might run through it more than once?
Other than that, it does have quite a lot of writing choices that I like.
It does have choices, if you didn't see them that means you gave up pretty quickly.