Happy New Year Everyone ^^ To celebrate, I made a quick summary of the entirety of Autumn Boulevard:
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- Aug 22, 2017
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Anybody able to tell me which choice leads to the bad end? Not too keen to replay everything without knowing where to avoid the ending lol
- Dec 27, 2016
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was so good watching FMC losing her mind over klaudia's juices Moaaaaar of klaudra's rumpa please 
- Jan 7, 2018
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Man... this was kinda boring as far as an H-Game/VN goes. Very few choices, and when you *do* the kinky fun stuff, there's like... fuck all, lol. I'd recommend waiting until they add WAY more adult content before jumping in this stuff because, at a certain point, I was literally just turning on the skip-all option cause of how boring the story was. I came for the kink and porn, not a horror story that often gets confusing and too weird for a porno.
When you do get to the actual kink stuff, it's great, but just the lead-up to that stuff is so long. You'll spend like an hour plus just reading a bunch of stuff that makes you feel more like you've wasted 7.8g of space for this... If there's one recommendation I'd give to the author/creator of this; focus on the porn more than the story if you want to keep people invested in this.
If all you're seeking is to write a novel, I recommend places like RoyalRoad or itch. The reason I say this bit of harshness? The porn in this feels like it's just a minor addition rather than the main focus. Literally, it felt like the adult content in this game was just added last minute and you'd not at all notice anything was missing if it was removed tomorrow XD.
When you do get to the actual kink stuff, it's great, but just the lead-up to that stuff is so long. You'll spend like an hour plus just reading a bunch of stuff that makes you feel more like you've wasted 7.8g of space for this... If there's one recommendation I'd give to the author/creator of this; focus on the porn more than the story if you want to keep people invested in this.
If all you're seeking is to write a novel, I recommend places like RoyalRoad or itch. The reason I say this bit of harshness? The porn in this feels like it's just a minor addition rather than the main focus. Literally, it felt like the adult content in this game was just added last minute and you'd not at all notice anything was missing if it was removed tomorrow XD.
should we tell him?
- Oct 30, 2019
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Nah, the dawning realization is much more exciting
- Jan 7, 2018
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It's more... if they want to focus on the story and just the story, they shouldn't make it an H-Game. As it is, there was essentially no porn content for the vast majority of the VN aside from a handful of parts, and it all felt as though it was added for the sake of just... being there rather than serving an actual purpose for the story. When the fun stuff does, actually start coming up, the game ends... 0.7 update and 7.85g of stuff, with the vast majority of it being nothing beyond... just this handful of fun scenes, with the rest all just more dialogue and focus on the story rather than the stuff many of us on F95 are actually searching for.
I respect the author, developers, and artists for putting this together, and I appreciate their efforts, but as it stands, this feels less like a porn game and more like a horror/mystery novel with how little actual porn is in it.
I respect the author, developers, and artists for putting this together, and I appreciate their efforts, but as it stands, this feels less like a porn game and more like a horror/mystery novel with how little actual porn is in it.
But what if, hypothetically of course, this ratio of story to erotica is what makes the author put food on their table? And one of the reasons their game sticks out from the crowd? What if, and bare with me here, that in order to write erotica well, you need tension? And if the main character gets their cheeks clapped within an hour, there is not much more you can do with said character in terms of tension (That we allready established is a necessary component of erotica)? And this could have been an issue and a major criticism of the authors first work, which may or may not have included a caked up gypsy with a gun (Again, we are only speaking in hypotheticals here)? And this is them rectifying said issue?
(This all being hypothetical of course)
- Dec 27, 2016
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in order to write erotica well, we make more klaudia content
thanks.I'm pretty sure it was the choice Trish makes to tell Ryan or not about Amy. Not telling leads to the bad end. There are also the bad ends when you fumble the password inputs too many times, but that is just an instant game over with no further story or sex scenes.
/threadin order to write erotica well, we make more klaudia content
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Reading version 0.7
At a certain point, when the character list gets updated with Eddie and Em, I get an error message whenever I try to enter the character list (although if I just keep reding the VN, it seems to be working fine so far).
At a certain point, when the character list gets updated with Eddie and Em, I get an error message whenever I try to enter the character list (although if I just keep reding the VN, it seems to be working fine so far).
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Are you playing from the start? As in, did you download the latest version and then play from the start?
Yes I'm playing from the start and I'm overwriting the saves I had made from the older versions (I'm not reading it all in one go)
That sounds like a great compliment, Björk is a genius musician.
There is this picture that excites me a lot, the one on DiscipleOfVirginia's patreon page, with Gerald touching Melanie's butt, and she looks back at him with a horny smile while carrying her husband on her shoulders
Got you thanks! I have gotten reports on this. Let me know if the issue is still there when you reach the new content.
- Jan 7, 2018
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Again, as I said, it's why I recommend sites like RoyalRoad and Itchi for the sake of focusing on the writing aspect. While it may be true that particular erotica needs tension, it does NOT require this much tension or horror. As someone who's also written my fair share of works in the past, I can say that if one is trying to advertise this as PORN, then they should have more content that IS porn rather than merely putting out a novel for the sake of trying to get their first work out. It's dishonest and doesn't do well to build up trust with future readers as they'll start to view all future projects this individual does as being similar and you'd get more people disinterested than you would interested.
Instead, suppose one is to focus on the literary aspect. In that case, one should do JUST that and not shift it into something that is viewed as being erotica but is a very dull erotica at that when compared to others that... while not good gameplay-wise, are certainly able to keep and retain attention due in part to the amount of porn they add to their VN, as opposed to this piece. Which seems to focus more on the narrative then it does the porn... which they're trying to advertise to gain monetary support for. You don't see H-Artists focusing on non-Hentai works, as they know where their money comes from. Sex sells, and if there's not a lot of sex, how do you sell?
Now, I will say if this is a first attempt, I applaud it and hope they continue to write, improve, and create more stories as it's a good first attempt, like really good. But saying that, I do think there should be a clear separation for the next outing, as even many of the new reviews lately have thus far also highlighted this. Cause they're downloading a 7.8g game hoping for some fun, kinky porn, not 1.2g of porn, while the remaining 6.6g is all story XD.
Essentially, one must know their audience and craft something around it while still maintaining the same degree of creativity that drives the writer's passion.