VN Ren'Py Abandoned Off the Pitch [v0.9 Extra] [Maks]

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MC is one of the top athletes in the world. He had fame, money, and beautiful women.
However, MC would lose everything after one reckless night.
Out of options, MC has to move back to his hometown to coach the local college women's soccer team.
Will MC be able to turn a losing team around or will he succumb to his personal demons...​

Thread Updated: 2023-03-21
Release Date: 2023-02-19
Developer: Maks
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Version: 0.9 Extra
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Language: English
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MrDL

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So Big Shots but instead of a disgraced basketball coach who takes a job at a private girls school as their basketball coach the MC is a disgraced soccer player?
 
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SeveredRealms said:
Gonna assume this will be much like Revenga in writing style and tags though it would be nice if this one had more of a harem ending. Revenga's ending seemed a bit rushed. Hopefully this one will be as good or better.
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Well, I can say that Maks has actually gotten better over time. Second Chance was a pain to get through. The Engrish was horrible and the extremely rushed endings sucked. Revenga was good and I haven't finished the last release yet, but, people said the endings were also rushed. Let's hope this turns out even better than the last.
 
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DrakoGhoul

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Not going to lie, i expected some revenge against one of my parents in here somewhere. After Second Chance(mom and step sis) and Revenga(step mom and step sis) i thought it was the dad's turn.

Anyway, I'll try this. After reading the overview it seems like it could be interesting. I enjoyed both of the Dev's last games so I'll play and see what's going on in here.
 
rKnight

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BaasB said:
MC is one of the top athletes in the world. He had fame, money, and beautiful women.
However, He often succumbs to his personal demons...
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Girl: "I've heard that you're pretty close to the head cheerleader, and you know, I can be a 'extremely cheerful' cheerleader in the team."
MC: "Okay! Just get on your knees..."
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Girl: "Ugh! It tastes like shit!"
MC: "Oh, sorry girl... Just moments ago your brother asked me to join the soccer team,
and you know, there ain't no such thing as a free lunch..." lol

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THX for sharing...
 
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Well it's so bad at so many levels I don't know where to start. I mean, the story is all over the place, more than rushed. It seriously needs a writer to put some order in those ideas and shape characters a bit more. And I guess asking for a little bit of realism is just out of place here, the only tiny bit of realism is the quick hook up at the bar but everything else is just so badly portraited. And the only choice that seems to matter (it's said that closes her path) is agreeing to keep in touch with your long-lost bestie, a girl we don't get to see her face. Honestly, it's just annoying to see a somehow interesting idea going to waste just like that. I totally see how it could work with some decent writing and a more realistical and grounded approach. As of now, it's just like a brainstorming conducted by some guy with ADHD disorder - and very little respect for women football. Instant delete
 
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