Interesting update.
I like your scene design skills, they are very well done and I would even say cinematic.
Some of the better animated sex scenes out there. A bit of it went weird/uncanny valley like the slapping and some of the slow downs/sound effects.
I am guessing the world already knows about that stuff, otherwise MC having 2 whiskey and not taking any pills seems like he would freak out.
The MC being violent and crass on their own seemed like a jump in character. He was not that way with anyone else and only maybe Mi-sun on the train could be choked. I get you needed it to force the position, but it also makes you look back on older interactions where players had choice and just makes it feel like cognitive dissonance.
I will agree with a poster earlier who said it felt short, that whole portion feels like it should have been at the end of a larger update, whether it be at the end of a day, or if it would have been longer in the club with the MC talking to all the girls, etc. Just something more.
Also the Chelsea scene felt weird, being everything we know of MC seemed like he never cared which he even said as much I think, yet that whole scene says the opposite.
Game is interesting and has good models and decent animations. Unsure about the world building and story until there is more, and most characters seem distinct which is nice.
MC presents as Multiple personality disorder with the jumping between player choices and forced story.