Having almost every recent comment that says this game has anything but stellar writing removed isn't really a good look haha. I even said despite the fact I dont like the story in this game that it was better than many on the site but I guess expressing an opinion is considered trolling.
My comment has also been deleted (so basically this whole discussion) so again you're making some stupid assumptions. When it comes to writing it's one of the best games, that you don't like the story is an entirely different thing. Characters behave like real characters and not everything we say they'll like (so no "win" button here or fake choices where no matter what we choose we'll have a harem) plus they are consistent in their behaviour and after a while it's easy to sense what they might like and what might offend them. In many other games characters behave randomly and to min-max you either have to use a walkthrough, save-scum, use cheats or unrenpy and console.
The idea for the plot alone puts it above 99% of other games, with interesting (ex)girlfriend angle or even that blackmail thing (that many don't like but that's just preference and it is well-written). And yes, there is porn-logic here (so "logic") and things like crazy hobo in it (for comic relief) but that's what I would expect from an erotic game. E.g. normally your girlfriend's mom wouldn't be too attractive and even if she was it would be very, very unlikely she would like to have a fling with you (same goes for such beautiful landlady like Andrea) but we're not playing erotic games to have realistic stories, are we?
And yes, there is Pale Carnations that sets the bar so high no other erotic game comes close but that's an anomaly (and let's be honest, when compared to best written games like Age of Decadence or Planescape: Torment it's nothing special, it's exquisite among erotic games and that's it).
