VN Ren'Py Abandoned Offcuts [v0.3.1] [stencilbits]

[Bagger288]

Well, this took me like... 7 hours or something. That's absurd for a demo without any grind in it.

I was getting some Japan vibes at the beginning, and wasn't really engaged, but those dissipated soon enough and somewhere around the halfway point I started feeling like this game is worth following. The withdrawal of false choices likely helped. I don't quite see how the story will flow from here, but I'm willing to spend half a dozen hours to find out.

This thing isn't on par with the best free VNs, but it's in their league - and that's impressive for a team of one.

 

[original1]

Great job. Those renders on the end screen make me look forward to the Melissa path.

 

[maglama]

Ah man, this game might not be making any huge advancements in the lewd game field, but fuck me is this 0.1 good. I'm digging this a lot.

 

[Dolphin3000]

GREAT start! I really enjoyed the original picture style. And there is a bunch of content for a first release!
Keep up the great work!

 

[Amberzed]

Not posted before, but long-time site user & reader & in all that time, I think this is one of the best two 0.1 releases I've seen, both in terms of content and quality, only rivaled by Mythic Manor. Keep up the good work.

 

[Master69]

Really nice demo/0.1 version. Keep up the good work!!

 

[Tirias]

Great artwork and holy shit that was one hell of a long demo i def recommend , you wont regret it people

 

[Sun Quan]

Tried this last night and it is really excellent for a 0.1 "demo". It has a tremendous amount of story so far and must have taken forever to create. I'm impressed. It definitely captures the feel of a genuine jp hentai vn. The characters are fun, the story is engaging without being so deep that you wonder if you're really playing an ero game, and the banter and dialogue is well written. So far there's only really one path but it definitely gives the impression that, after a few versions, there'll be a lot of different branches you can follow. There's quite a few "a couple days later," moments that could be broken up with encounters with different girls as half the ones who were introduced barely got any attention, e.g. Alice who just disappeared about 2/3 in. The visuals are interesting and different from the usual Honey Select / DAZ models, but no less cute.

I'm going to keep an eye on this game for certain, though I probably won't play again until there's a lot more content and it's not so focused on one of the girls. Excellent game, good job, dev.

 

[Rythan25]

very interesting art style, like a mix of cel-shaded with an unfamiliar (to me at least) technique... definitely will keep an eye on this one.

 

[Le Taz]

for a 0.1 the content is just astonishing...
Not much consequences regarding the few choices.
The styling is surprising at first but really nice.
I liked it a lot.

 

[Rick Aiken]

This was just creepy LoL

 

[AuroraVT]

really like the amount of content and it was good content just wish u weren't forced into a relationship u didn't choose

 

[5CH4CHT3L]

This was just creepy LoL

Yep teeth are not supposed to look like this. Only the ones in the edge are pointed

 

[Kuniyoshi]

Easily the best 0.1 of all time! lol ...One thing I did notice was that upon loading an earlier save to choose different options I realised that the overall outcome seemed to stay the same...not necessarily a bad thing, but I do prefer choices.

 

[raizeny]

Loved every second of it.

Keep it up!

 

[Nightwinter]

That is just girls bro, I get what you are saying however she doesn't actually mean it, melissa on the other hand i dunno, but with Nina she is more trying to hide her feelings using said tactics, hence why at certain times she completely drops that act because that is what it is an act. however she is a little feisty (which is great to have in a woman imo) but not a bully or tsundere, that is melissa XD Nina is just one of those closed of types that pretend to be something on the outside to hide the inside because they think too much of what other people might think (hence her being my fav character, initially i disliked for the same reason until i realised it was mostly an act and she was just feisty. I like my wahman feisty makes life interesting.

"Tsundere (ツンデレ, pronounced [tsɯndeɾe]) is a Japanese term for a character development process that describes a person who is initially cold (and sometimes even hostile) before gradually showing a warmer, friendlier side over time."

Nina is Tsundere... an act and all, but her attitude is tsundere.

 

[Xand]

I do not know if the dev of this game is going to read this, but I have to say this out loud. When I downloading this game I was like ohh another 0.000001 Renpy VN, boy oh boy was I mistaken. I've played a lot of VNs, read a lot of mangas and watched a lot of animes in the slice of life genre, and I reckon this one is one day going to be one of the very best ones out there. Sure it's like reading a typical Shounen manga but damn. The characters are so realistic and likable, the art is wonderful and the writing? Well that made me smile. And that is a very rare thing indeed.
I sincerely hope that you(the developer) complete this amazing piece of work. I wish you all the very best.


I think I've said more than I had intended in the first place.

 

[Tarasia]

What i find funny is that the cg's of Nina are called Sis in the gamefolder, while ingame she isn't. So uncenor patch?

 

[AuroraVT]

What? You expected all the branches in a .1 initial release?

It's pretty rare to get even 10% of what's included here in any other initial release.

I agree the amount of content is amazing but unless i missed a choice somewhere i always end up win bed with a specific girl whether want to or not. If its a harem type game thats fine but if u are supposed to choose one shouldn't be forced into bed with another

 

[Cevanth]

Too good to be a 0.1, the artwork is amazing, the choises you can make are okay, don't have a problem with them, the caracters are very likeable too. I don't know what else to say... im amazed.

Keep up the good work developer, may the force be with you!