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Very nice except that the little daughter talks way to mature, make her talk like she looks 
Why too mature? She's 18, you know...?Very nice except that the little daughter talks way to mature, make her talk like she looks![]()
It happens decently often in the game, actually. I'm not going to count instances, but I remember a number of these mix-ups before v0.3 or even v0.2. I think there are two easy explanations. Maybe the dev mostly understands but still makes some mistakes. By way of example, English speakers self-overcorrect the "and I" construction, which is an incredibly easy one; something more complicated, like understanding gender in pronouns when it's completely foreign to your language, is probably more prone to errors. (You can see a similar problem with native speakers of Asiatic languages who try to use prepositions in English; our prepositional use is often actually pretty inconsistent, so mistakes are understandable and even likely.)I am absolutely certain it is a translation issue, but I am not certain about your theory (or your quoted percentage) that it is because the dev's native language doesn't use gender pronouns, for 2 main reasons: 1, the error is very infrequent (so much that the only reason I even commented was as a partial joke and comparison to the daughter's use of parental names instead of their title) and would likely happen more often if your proposal were correct. And 2: I am unsure of the percentage of worldwide languages but I do know of at least 10 languages from major countries(countries with global economic infrastructure to the point that their languages are fairly recognisable around the world) myself (and these are just the ones I know of, I am sure there are more) where not only do they use gender specific pronouns, but their nouns are also gender specific. Having said all of that, the translation confusion isn't that big of a thing for me, as I said I only mentioned it as a funny comparison.
Thanks , i'll try that .... i shall tell my machine bros and sis'sTo simplify your life and avoid waiting till 2022 please copy the game folder, renpy, and both .sh and .py archives replacing the ones on the 0.2 version
If i saved your time, to whoever you are drop a like![]()
I guess it comes from the translation, in some languages that word daughter is maybe much more used in a family dialogue than in english.Any particular reason the MC constantly says "daughter" every few lines? I get it, she's his daughter. There's no need for a constant reminder, it's redundant.
Examples, and I'm paraphrasing:
Oh daughter...
Yes daughter...
Come here daughter...
I love you daughter...
Sit daughter, sit.. good daughter.. *woof*
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Yeah, sounds like it. I've seen it in other VNs as well and corrected that so it at least doesn't read like it came from a food processor. There were a lot of other things I noticed in it that were cringe-worthy. For example, who in their right mind charges a phone ON a house? There's only one outlet and it just happens to be located on the roof? Man, that's a lot of extension cords running into the house. But II guess it comes from the translation, in some languages that word daughter is maybe much more used in a family dialogue than in english.
But it looks odd to me too, i noticed it when i played that game.
How to put this script?The grammar was so poor in this I felt compelled to fix it before proceeding any further in the game. He, His and I aren't appropriate for daughters. Deleted about three dozen uses of the word "And", also modified some very puzzling uses of English. It's mostly readable now, mostly.
Is there a way to apply this to android?I made a quick Mod for the game with a few music tracks, walkthrough (well, there are only a few obvious choices so far...) and some other functions.
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Sept. 27, 2021
Re-uploaded my Mod for the new game release v0.3 again
Download Mod v0.3 (~23MB)
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Reworked script file which integrates the corrections from
bamachine's script fixes into my Mod (thanks to Jellyluve): Link
Some ingame pics of the Mod:
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Ah mb thanks