Dipper_Pines

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For a practice game, this was a fun one. I have only one thing to offer... My brain still hurts from the ease at which you pass off powering the phone (energy) with data/bandwidth/computing ability (data/number crunching) as one in the same. I know it's supposed to be a made up world and I should discount such things as alternate reality, but having been an engineer for over 30 years these things are embedded in my DNA....it just made me need a beer or three to accept... LOL
Still... great story - thanks for sharing!
 

Reallycoolhat

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I will wait for sluttown that seems to be a game to wait for, especially since you have said that there will be a character you turn into a sissy/trap instead of yourself being turned...a rare occurence.
 

dodoking

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Oh! Man... First time commenting on this site. I REALLY Love your games. Or better, the way you write your Story. I'm Really Excited for "Sluttown" Keep Up the Good work :D
 
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Lednacek

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where is the game component of this? all I get is a lot of clicking mostly the same repetitive daily actions.
 

BConscience

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You realise it's Surname and not Sir Name? I thought this was intentional, but I can't find any reason why it would be. Am I being dumb or is that a genuine typo
 

Xand

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AmusingOddity

There seems to be a bug where you change the names of the characters and they still appear to use their default names.

And there's a spelling error in the main character naming screen as well. "Sir name" should be "surname" or "last name" if you want to keep it simple.

But on the whole this was a pretty great and enjoyable click fest. Best of luck with Sluttown U.S.A!
 

somebodynobody

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The Good.
Having keyboard control to move the screen on.

Sex isn't instantly jumped into just because of a McGuffin.


The Bad.
A lot of "dead" time. By this I mean a lot of the screens are just tiny snippets of the day happening with no gameplay, feels extraneous when it is a week of repeated things.

Story is fine but the science and everything surrounding it doesn't make sense. Like recharging an App. Or why after having a working prototype they need the psychologist instead of before.

Has some jumping in the story, like activating the app with Viola in her apartment. How it is written is that the phone was never pointed at her and yet she is glassy eyed. Another example is when Valentina sent the white noise sound, which means she would have had to record what MC did, and thus heard him tell her to be nice or one of the later suggestions. Which obviously she would know he is messing with her. As an addendum he should probably do something to make her not record things anymore or at least make it obvious that she is recording and thus nothing is caught.

MC changed attitudes out of nowhere. He goes from being nice and worried to at the end going to fuck a whole town. Corruption is fine, but at least show the MC going down that path. Was jarring to have him telling Viola to take all the time she needs and then later saying he could have hundreds like her, yet in no place in between was he ever showing that change with her.

A lot of typos and grammar issues, use something like grammarly.


The Neutral.
I would say study games like become someone, become alpha, and other HTML twine games that look nice.


Bugs.
Post Valentina fight about Viola taking it in the ass you have a </span> showing.
 
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konabwo

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cannot but support any prospect rp sandboxes
centered around mind control.
is it necessary? i understand that it grants some freedoms when generating lewd and xxx scenarios . but more likely at the expense of immersion
depends on the scale ofc ...starting with something somewhat credible - occasional hypnosis or aphrodisiac ... and ending with totally noncredible spells / godly superpowers and succubuses ( i played games containing the latter as well ...u take such premises 'as is' and keep going but for me it is rather distilled sandbox experience, that is, i just complete those tasks and get porn "rewards" without much or any thinking. which is easier for me given that im not a reader [i assume the same is true for most sandboxplayers. so given an opportunity, i'd advocate against any walls of text in sbxs. narrative out of quests - not other way around] )

i think id put serums and some (all mighty one-button?) apps somewhere in the middle of "credibility/immersion" pyramid.
surely i dont know what exactly do u have in mind regarding app premise ... if i were to put apps in 'somewhat credible' half it would be based on some existing capabilities as well as common fears and misconceptions
for example you get an access to fem phone first and then app affects her via her phone (and other or all devices around. "smart house") on several fronts to increase lust, reduce self-awareness, raise suggestibility etc. it adjusts and alters search results (books, movies, health news etc), shows certain popup adds, unlocks porn channels on tv, generates unnoticable waves, noise frequences & viusal frames (is "25th frame" still a popular belief?) during her looking at the screen or taking a call (or whenever) to affect certain parts of a brain. (and maybe there there will be a need to keep it turned on on rare occasions to avoid making a naughty soup from her overcoocked brain)

another issue is when to use it. i think the company approach should do. meaning u can use/activate it only during certain progression points (ofc doesnot matter if sbx is straightforward or not. i hope that one will be the former. as routes in sbxs should be legally prohibited) the opposite to that would be somewhat "datesim approach" - u use it whenever u want (and as much as possible. =grind) to raise some device xp levels (and fem npc stats) which then allows to unlock more and more actions... which inevitably results in me cheaing and thus endgaming. surely that approach can be utilised but as something secondary...
i. for some minor lewd scenes variations. she got affected. now u can spank her [primary action] with pingpong racket instead of bare hands, bj [primary action]- now she swallows and not spits.
ii. for some questchain semi-grind situations like you need to visit/spy on X npc Y times. iam not a fan of that but if the amount is limited to, say, 3-5 times and if you get some multimedia variety it can be fine. lets say some npc shows more and more skin when home alone)
 
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Shelscott50

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Glad you enjoyed it.
It will. Sluttown will be a corruption game centered around mind control. Kinda like the company but using the app instead of the serum you use in that game.
I am Curious,.. Is Your Math Wrong, or did I miss something??
"How To Train a T-Girl" was Your FIRST Story/Game, and
"Oh Hyp-no!" was Your Third and last game of 3,...
What happened to your 2nd Game??

Or Is it, 1) "How To Train a T-Girl"; 2) "Oh Hyp-no!"; 3) Sluttown ??
 
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gaga123321

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What are the other two? Asking for a friend.
Well mind control new, and i repeat new: my town my show, Consent(but its a lot more extreme), hunters harem, unexpect expectations,Dubious Practice, hentai university those are the more updated html ones i remenber at the moment. if you want one you might not have played yet there are dreams of desire, warlock of lust, a spell for all, take over, mind society, long live princess, corruption, snow daze, superpowered, the gift, ring of lust, supercreep, bound by lust, deviant discovery (not html though but good none the less)
 

amd_dman

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Not really a game, just a kinetic novel of sorts with a TON of pointless fluff in between that does nothing for the continuity of the story.

The writing is decent enough but the days with literally nothing happening/repeated events makes it drag on way longer than it should.
 

AmusingOddity

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My brain still hurts from the ease at which you pass off powering the phone (energy) with data/bandwidth/computing ability (data/number crunching) as one in the same.
I know, I'm not thrilled with it myself. I just need a reason that the phone cant charge the app by itself. It doesn't come up here but it's important for the next game in the series.

cannot but support any prospect rp sandboxes

is it necessary? i understand that it grants some freedoms when generating lewd and xxx scenarios . but more likely at the expense of immersion
It might seem odd to you but i actually come out on the other side of this. For whatever reason i find games that use Hypno or spells or whatever more realistic in a sense. It makes so much more since to me when MC uses something external to corrupt girls. I know it's odd but games where you can just charm 30 different girls into doing whatever you want are less realistic to me.

As for how the Hypno is going to be used in Slut town. You will need to spend time with girls to get the app "attuned" to them, then you can pop it to advance the story. I don't like games that are too system heave. So I'm keeping it pretty straight forward.

I am Curious,.. Is Your Math Wrong, or did I miss something??
"How To Train a T-Girl" was Your FIRST Story/Game, and
"Oh Hyp-no!" was Your Third and last game of 3,...
What happened to your 2nd Game??

Or Is it, 1) "How To Train a T-Girl"; 2) "Oh Hyp-no!"; 3) Sluttown ??
Sorry, the other game isn't really in the direct story for the MC so I didn't add it. Here's a link if you are interested in checking it out. https://f95zone.to/threads/home-is-where-the-whores-is-v1-0-amusingoddity.84154/#post-5877666
 

konabwo

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It makes so much more [sense] to me when MC uses something external to corrupt girls. I know it's odd but games where you can just charm 30 different girls into doing whatever you want are less realistic to me.
i get what you saying but i cannot apply that reasoning. i mean if we deal with xxx-games ...such are not about hardcore nuns. so nothing feels odd about mc running into dtf gials who are not against of being seduced, corrupted and of exploring kinks/fetishes. (and gameplay dictates that mc meets the horniest and-or the easiest to corrupt gials in som implied pool of opportunities... caz it would not make much sense to surround him with some frigid malehating fems) and nothing feels unreal if a girl is involved in some not-that-uncommon for fems activities (camshows, porn, prostitution, escorting).

now lets talk about hard cases, for example popular here incest . i assume it is something non-existant IRL (even as kink/fantasy). (not that it is the way of immersion measurement per se. but in a way it is, just without 100% correlation) so i cannot put such game occurances into 'definitely credible' category ...still it well might be 'somewhat credible' (=almost no effect on immersion) were there a somewhat credible build-up... nymphomania or whatever hypersexuality with lust knowing no borders, disorders and traumas contributing to dysfunctional relationships, overwhelming love going unexpected directions, corrupted mind dissipating the societal restrictions.

so technically the mix of seemingly possible/existent things can allow us to accept a certain narrative. surely some amount of mental gymnastics is needed. but not that much, i think we could even assume that in 1 out of 1-2billion families all that really happened caz stars were alligned perfectly and penis went to some tabooed vagina.

so yeah basically it is another way of me saying that adding impossible and non-existent things requires much more gymnastics to overcome a breach in players' immersion "wall". or maybe gymnastics will not be of help and a game will just belong to other categories 'not that credible (middle case)' ...'somewhat incredible & incredible'.

i went in-depth with all that, though i cannot say that my perception varies greatly because of the premise and its elements. id say 'definitely credible' and 'somewhat credible' more likely to give me some immersion bonus (and even force me to be more attentive to the written content, which, in turn, can also give some additional immersion bonus) with all other cases i ll just stick to task completion until reaching end of content
 

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i get what you saying but i cannot apply that reasoning. i mean if we deal with xxx-games ...such are not about hardcore nuns. so nothing feels odd about mc running into dtf gials who are not against of being seduced, corrupted and of exploring kinks/fetishes. (and gameplay dictates that mc meets the horniest and-or the easiest to corrupt gials in som implied pool of opportunities... caz it would not make much sense to surround him with some frigid malehating fems) and nothing feels unreal if a girl is involved in some not-that-uncommon for fems activities (camshows, porn, prostitution, escorting).
Yeah, I actually agree with your points. I think its just a matter of tastes. For me, there's something about games that have a macguffin the MC uses to get the girls. Like the serum in The Company, that signals my brain to go "OK this is all crazy just go with it."
 

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I'm going through this one right now, and the first thought I had when the prototype phone got put to a typical one is that this company had already figured out how to make billions. If only Samsung and the like would wake up and realize that people would rather have easily replaceable batteries and thicker phones with charge for years again. Add the wired headphone jacks and removable storage back in while you are at it. Jobs and Ives should have been shot for crimes against humanity for their fashion sense attack on the cell phone industry.
 
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AmusingOddity

I like your writing and selection of images. Looking forward to Slut Town and some sandbox (=game, for me).

A bit of feedback on your coding. I play on Linux and in that OS filenames (including folders) are case sensitive. So while on Windows 'COFFEE.jpg' and 'coffee.jpg' are regarded as the same file on Linux they are not. This leads to broken images when the image/video called does not match in capitlalisation with the path given in code. Places I found this to happen were:

To Train a T-Girl
.../Images/Scenes/Co2.webm was CO2.webm
.../Images/Scenes/Co1.webm was CO1.webm
.../Images/Scenes/EJerk1.webm was Ejerk1.webm

Oh Hyp-no!
.../Images/People/Vio/Coffee.jpg was Coffee.JPG
.../Images/Misc/Kiss1.jpg was Kiss1.JPG
.../Images/People/Val/ValEXn2.jpg was ValExN2.jpg
.../Images/People/Vio/VionVal.jpg was VioNVal.jpg
.../Images/People/Vio/PantiesOff.Gif was PantiesOff.gif
.../Images/People/Val/ValBJa.Gif was ValBJa.gif
.../Images/People/Vio/InSert.gif was Insert.gif

One way to deal with this going forward would be to keep all paths, folder names, and images in lower case exclusively (and maybe variables in twine/code, not sure about this). But other methods are possible.

Anyways looking forward to the next game. (y)
 
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