Pretty much what Ignatz said, plus the station was where he first saw Sarah again, and there is going to be more meet ups at the bus station
Don't get me wrong, i'am not complaining, but i'am hoped that we can deny Katie, or somethig... I get your though about her, but still, in my opinion she's really unattractive (her personality, face, strange tatoos, her behavior) so i can't understand MC motivation (just wet a dick? meh) and it makes me feel really uncomfortable, that's why i want to have an option to avoid her and have fun with other girls (even if it take more time). Anyway, you'r doing great work thanks for that.
) i still want her as my MC's main dame...you gave me a smaller boobed dame..i like smaller boobs..so do not take it away..HAHAAA!!!
That's fair, everyone has a preference for looks
Interesting that you find the writing good but don't like Katie, because she is the one I enjoy writing the most, that's why she is around so muchTo be honest this game has some of the best writing out there, the back and forth feels natural and the overall conversations feel real and so funny i have to skip liquids when playing but i also have to agree with some of the posts about katie. All the meetings and interactions with the people around the MC felt to an extent believable but then we need to spend all this time on a friend of a friend, it kind of broke the fun for me personally. While in the beginning i looked forward to the next scenes lines as much as the renders after the second gym scene i just skipped all dialog and scene the had katie in them.
I guess it's that she feels hollow, all the other characters seem to have a reason to be there but she is as i phrased it before just a friend of a friend and if she disappeared from the story or was left out from the beginning it feels as if nothing would really change except not having to play her scenes.
It's not even her renders but more her actual character in the story that feel off.
This is just my personal opinion, I hope you don't take this a bashing but as constructive criticism.
You posted that she will be staying and in alot more scenes, I have to say that your writing is so good I won't be able to stay away i'll just need a new spacebar from skipping her scenes
keep up the great writing A+
She'll be around for quite a while, but isn't the main girl, that's Miranda lolok..thanks Sir Dev(or Dame Dev..aint gonna assume
Ok, if it's never be avoidable, guess i'am powerless here, so i only can wish you a good luck with next updates, hope that they will be easier for you than this one, and they'll bring to us some quality time with hotties from work, or MirandaThat's fair, everyone has a preference for looks
But I'm not writing James as a blank slate, he has his own personality and tastes. Katie is a girl he finds fun and sexy, and she offered no strings sex. Why would he say no to that?
That's why he would go for someone like Katie, it wont be avoidable but it also isn't permanent. Katie herself already established that she has fun for a while and moves on, this isn't a harem game.
Not all relationships in the game will last to end of it.
. Also, news that Miranda is a main girl makes me happy, but if it was a sarcasm you should know - it was cruel.
Lol, don't worry, its not sarcasmOk, if it's never be avoidable, guess i'am powerless here, so i only can wish you a good luck with next updates, hope that they will be easier for you than this one, and they'll bring to us some quality time with hotties from work, or Miranda
That's a great news! I'am already get over-excited!Lol, don't worry, its not sarcasm
I said pretty early on in thread she was the main girl, that's why you meet her first, and why James mentioned he had a thing for her.
Its just her relationship is a slow burn compared to the others
doh! waited too long and here's that browless girl full of screen
oh come ooon what katie's doing here ??? where's miranda my chocolate mommy
Edit the script.rpy !!!!! Find there that line "scene seve_C " and replace the big C with small c !!!!
That is kinda the role she has when it comes to Sarah, she's just a wingwoman who you also fuck lol
People like what they like.
*Shrugs* Who knowsP.S. Can't wait for the eventually threesome with Katie and Miranda. Right?
P.P.S Yeah probably won't happen but a man can wish.
