Yeah, I'm interested, I'm gonna hang in there, I like the game. And if answering the question is spoilery, I get it, not demanding an answer. Also, I don't consider your game too wordy.
This brings up another question I had that you also may not be able to answer. The demon who gave our MC this glamour tells him in his dream that the glamour lets people see how really great he is. Granted, he can't remember a lot of what she tells him, so I understand why he may over-look this. But, it begs the question, there seems to be a several different perspectives on the ethical nature of this glamour and the MC seems to almost always rest on the side of "it's not ethical." I was curious if this demon's perspective was like... I don't know... and early draft of what you envisioned for the glamour and now that's been abandoned or if it something that's going to be brought up to the MC again?
Because if the nature of the glamour really *is* what the demon initially tells him it is... then it's not anywhere near as ethically challenging as he thinks it is, in my humble opinion.