I just started playing this, but reached a dead end when giving Robert BJs after he accidentally took the Viagra. I don't know if this is just the extent of what's written so far, or a bug, but the link to go to the next part when you hear the ambulance arrive while gobbling his cock doesn't work - it takes it to an external error page.
Anyway, besides that...
The story isn't the worst thing out here, though IMO the rating it gives in this thread is a major overstatement. I will say that you can see the author has actually put some effort into it (which is worth acknowledging), despite it being highly predictable and just downright silly at times - even at the times when it's not meaning to be. The translation, syntax and punctuation is flawed but not to the point of being a deal-breaker.
That being said, at this point the only thing I'm actually interested in doing is getting with the dad behind MC's dud of a husband's back. I wish I could be looking forward to more, but that's literally it.
I feel zero remorse over the idea of cheating on the husband, as this game is awful at building any kind of connection with said husband, and I really wish that weren't the case. Because for a game that talks big about the option of playing the 'good girl' or 'bad girl', it gives you very little actual incentive to want to be a good girl and stay faithful; the husband is honestly dull af and a game stuck with him would be utter torture.
There is no real attempt to make us as the reader feel an emotional connection to our in-game husband, nor anything in his character to pique our interest or warm our hearts - we're just told to feel a certain way because the MC feels that way, and then it does everything to make us feel disgusted or adverse to wanting to stay with our husband when his problems begin. And as if our husband being unwilling to share his issues isn't reason enough to feel estranged after we both had a traumatic experience that should mean we rely on and support each other, our MC decides he may be cheating, too. But we don't know, it just leaves that thought hanging in the air. Just great.
So why even bother offering a 'good girl' route if there's so little incentive to get us to connect and commit, while the story fights tooth and nail to force us down the 'bad girl' path?
