RPGM Completed One [LJUBOVSKY]

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Drafox

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I'm a boobs man, I love ass too but tits is my city. Anyways, what definitely caught my attention about this game is the fact that it's tags go something like this "Bla bla bla Tits bla bla Breasts bla Tits..".
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Well, that kind of stuff attracts me like the light does to mosquitoes.
 
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Cool game and story. I like the render quality and angles, very nice! Situations are also very erotic. The mini games are slightly annoying as well as the slow walk speed. Looking forward to Ch.3. Top 10 for sure. Also just became a Patronez. Pledge per update is the best imo to do at your own pace. GL!
 
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Everytime I play this I want feel the urge to listen to sabotage by beasty boys.
 

Ljubovsky

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btw add tag ntr @ a mod


*edit: thanks "Bloo"
There is only one scene that might be considered NTR (Allison flashback) and you can skip it by not giving Gordon the panties...but it's very important for the story so at some point you'll gonna have to see a different variation of it.(Just a heads up in case there are people that didn't like it)
the story summary make me thing this is a MtF game???
If by MtF you mean gender swap then the answer is no.
Jason(MC) gets influenced/corrupted by her but she's not takin' his place...
In the barn in chapter 2 how can you make those sheep move so you can give em water?
This bug occurs only if you imported a save from Chapter 1 so you'll need to start a new game in Chapter 2...as i said before, every Chapter is standalone and every choice that will carry to next chapters will be implemented with in game choices (You'll see an example of it in the first update of Chapter 3)
The reason i decided to do it like this is that i don't want people to have to replay 2 or 3 hours of content just because they missed something and also it makes it easier to step up the quality with each Chapter! (I know it's gonna be a pain for newcomers to gather and go through all the chapters so i'm probably gonna package them in a "all in one" torrent once i finish Chapter 3)
Cool game and story. I like the render quality and angles, very nice! Situations are also very erotic. The mini games are slightly annoying as well as the slow walk speed. Looking forward to Ch.3. Top 10 for sure. Also just became a Patronez. Pledge per update is the best imo to do at your own pace. GL!
Thank you so much for becoming my first patron!!! (It is essential that i reach at least a portion of my goal to be able to continue with my project)
As promised, expect to see your name on the credits on Chapter 3 (unless you PM me that you don't want to) and also stay tuned for the first weekly progress report at the end of the next week!
As for the a) slow walking and b) minigames
a) I might make dashing unavailable only in certain events
b) I'm thinking about implimenting some fightin' based on the rpg maker mechanics so depending on the feedback i'll see if i stick to it...

Thanks for the feedback and sorry for the long post :)
 
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verzauberung

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There is only one scene that might be considered NTR (Allison flashback) and you can skip it by not giving Gordon the panties...but it's very important for the story so at some point you'll gonna have to see a different variation of it.(Just a heads up in case there are people that didn't like it)

i hope that you as a game dev understand that some fetishes can be a HUGE turn off for some People. even if it's "only 1 Scene"... ntr is one of those fetishes that should always be tagged imo. similar to rape, gore, vore, scat and so on.

i would have loved to know that this game has ntr before i played it, would have saved me 1h of wasted time.


*edit and also, it was such an extrem example of ntr. it's not just some .... "ups the gf got a bit drunk and gave some rdm nerd a hj..." come on now

**edit and srsly GTFO with "it was optional". maybe you changed it with the newest Version. but how would anyone fuckign now if "by not giving Gordon the panties" would give you some rdm ass Flashback later on with an ntr Scene.

that what makes me so hot sometimes. EVERY OTHER FETISH, be it beastiality or scat or whatever, they are always clearly tagged. and the game dev and the Players for the most part understand that other Players could not like that Scene with that fetish. but so often when it Comes to ntr, the dev and some Players will argue how it's "normal" and how they don't understand other Players who didn't like the Scene and so on. it's always so fuckign annyoing.
 
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Ljubovsky

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i hope that you as a game dev understand that some fetishes can be a HUGE turn off for some People. even if it's "only 1 Scene"... ntr is one of those fetishes that should always be tagged imo. similar to rape, gore, vore, scat and so on.

i would have loved to know that this game has ntr before i played it, would have saved me 1h of wasted time.


*edit and also, it was such an extrem example of ntr. it's not just some .... "ups the gf got a bit drunk and gave some rdm nerd a hj..." come on now

**edit and srsly GTFO with "it was optional". maybe you changed it with the newest Version. but how would anyone fuckign now if "by not giving Gordon the panties" would give you some rdm ass Flashback later on with an ntr Scene.

that what makes me so hot sometimes. EVERY OTHER FETISH, be it beastiality or scat or whatever, they are always clearly tagged. and the game dev and the Players for the most part understand that other Players could not like that Scene with that fetish. but so often when it Comes to ntr, the dev and some Players will argue how it's "normal" and how they don't understand other Players who didn't like the Scene and so on. it's always so fuckign annyoing.
First of all i don't wish to argue with you (although you're makin' it too hard for me not to) so chill and hear me out:
A) I didn't create the thread so i'm not responsible for the tags.
If you have such a huge problem with the way some fetishes are treated i suggest contacting
a moderator about it...
B) I said it was one scene because IT IS one scene.
NTR - Japanese acronym for Netorare, used to define a genre of Eroge (Hentai Game), meaning "Cuckold". In short, the main PROTAGONIST'S loved one(s) are taken or seduced away from him and the heroine might be willing or unwilling. This is to cause an emotion of deep jealousy on the reader.
I highlighted the protagonist part because if you leave it out then possibly 80% of adult games should be marked as NTR.(adultery, cheatin' etc...)
C) The reason i insist callin' my creation an interactive story and not a game, it's because the "expirience" depends a lot to the plot!
By the way you described the scene between Donna and Gordon (drunk girlfriend) you showed that you paid zero attention to the dialogues...how on earth is this scene NTR, when Donna is Gordon's aunt who you just met??
If anyone it's the MC who cucks everyone around him!
D) Where did i say that people were supposed to know about how to avoid the scene with Allison?
The reason i replied to your comment was to let people know that there is a way to avoid it in case they want to.
E) In your review you already stated that my story, characters, images are a waste of time and also implied that i'm copying from someone else's work...obviously i disagree with almost everything but it's the internet...so express yourself...
If you don't mind i'd like to offer you some critique of my own regarding your reviews:
1) A review can be equally benefitial for a comsumer and a developer!
You started pretty good but the last few seem kinda "lazy"...a negative review can attract attention for the reviewer (AVGN and AngryJoe made a career out of it) but only if it has some creativity or humour...at this point you seem to just trash other people creations and you just come out as just flat out angry....which is cool if that's what you want to do, just know that just like good and bad developers there are also good and bad reviewers...
2) Consistency is a really underrated attribute and in my opinion you should focus more on it since you seem to change what matters to you with every review...what i mean to say is that if i want a critique of an experimental film i won't listen to Mike but i'll focus more on Jay's opinion (RedLetterMedia), if i want to know if the new CRPG from Obsidian is worth it, i won't go to IGN...i think you get the idea...reviewer's tendencies and preferences matter!

...anyway...thanks for the feedback and i hope i'll be able to change your mind about my work in the future!

P.S. You might need to take a few more classes because that PHD looks a bit shady to me :)
So... will there be a CG of it though?
Yes...there will be one more scene in Chapter 3!
I might create a poll about makin' it skippable or not on my Patreon!
I like that you ask the important questions ;)
 

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First of all i don't wish to argue with you (although you're makin' it too hard for me not to) so chill and hear me out:
A) I didn't create the thread so i'm not responsible for the tags.
If you have such a huge problem with the way some fetishes are treated i suggest contacting
a moderator about it...
B) I said it was one scene because IT IS one scene.
NTR - Japanese acronym for Netorare, used to define a genre of Eroge (Hentai Game), meaning "Cuckold". In short, the main PROTAGONIST'S loved one(s) are taken or seduced away from him and the heroine might be willing or unwilling. This is to cause an emotion of deep jealousy on the reader.
I highlighted the protagonist part because if you leave it out then possibly 80% of adult games should be marked as NTR.(adultery, cheatin' etc...)
C) The reason i insist callin' my creation an interactive story and not a game, it's because the "expirience" depends a lot to the plot!
By the way you described the scene between Donna and Gordon (drunk girlfriend) you showed that you paid zero attention to the dialogues...how on earth is this scene NTR, when Donna is Gordon's aunt who you just met??
If anyone it's the MC who cucks everyone around him!
D) Where did i say that people were supposed to know about how to avoid the scene with Allison?
The reason i replied to your comment was to let people know that there is a way to avoid it in case they want to.
E) In your review you already stated that my story, characters, images are a waste of time and also implied that i'm copying from someone else's work...obviously i disagree with almost everything but it's the internet...so express yourself...
If you don't mind i'd like to offer you some critique of my own regarding your reviews:
1) A review can be equally benefitial for a comsumer and a developer!
You started pretty good but the last few seem kinda "lazy"...a negative review can attract attention for the reviewer (AVGN and AngryJoe made a career out of it) but only if it has some creativity or humour...at this point you seem to just trash other people creations and you just come out as just flat out angry....which is cool if that's what you want to do, just know that just like good and bad developers there are also good and bad reviewers...
2) Consistency is a really underrated attribute and in my opinion you should focus more on it since you seem to change what matters to you with every review...what i mean to say is that if i want a critique of an experimental film i won't listen to Mike but i'll focus more on Jay's opinion (RedLetterMedia), if i want to know if the new CRPG from Obsidian is worth it, i won't go to IGN...i think you get the idea...reviewer's tendencies and preferences matter!

...anyway...thanks for the feedback and i hope i'll be able to change your mind about my work in the future!

P.S. You might need to take a few more classes because that PHD looks a bit shady to me :)

Yes...there will be one more scene in Chapter 3!
I might create a poll about makin' it skippable or not on my Patreon!
I like that you ask the important questions ;)

so there is no real reason for us to argue here, since i clearly didn't like this game, and you clearly didn't make this game for a Player like me.
but to quickly wrap things up: i never talked about the "Donna and Gordon" Scene. what i meant with my "drunk gf" example is that the Scene with Allison was a very extrem form of ntr, and that IF that Allison Scene was like a "drunk gf hj" i would have understand if there was no ntr tag and i would understand why a dev would chain that with such a random Event like "by not giving Gordon the panties".
i didn't say you copied that other game, i just compared your game with a pretty well known game on this site. and about my Reviews coming off as if i am angry... damn right, very often i am angry. i get pissed off, and almost feel insulted when i download a porngame, Play it and finish with a flaccid dick in my Hand. it just feels like a massive waste of time. that Feeling was literally the reason why i started to write short Reviews on here, so that other Players don't have to go through the same experience.

but shit bro, you showed more character and Charisma in that Reply than in your game... so much so that i will maybe even check out your next game.

thanks for the Feedback on my Reviews
 

Ero - Sennin

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Thank you for the complete chapter 2 that was really hot , especially the lake scene with Ms J (If Gordon is not drugged) It was the best scene of M J and also Alina scenes ofcourse although I dislike the idea of your partner, It may have been a good idea if you fucked Alina as Jason's (MC) apperance infront of Harold instead of using the appearance of Lucious then kill Harold after or steal away Alina then make her your wife :) . I really really like this game, youre the one performing the NTR instead of the one being cuckolded
 

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I like the story and how it's developed. There are no great maps to cover and not much grind. The renders are also very good. After the two chapters was eager to continue playing.
The only thing that down me is how the MC treats women. I know that gradually he's being corrupted, but that doesn't mean he becomes an asshole. And it's not a thing that only see in this game. It seems that to have good sex, we must treat all women whore, slut or similar, doesn't matter if a second before we were a good guy, kind and considerate.
Except for that detail, it's a good game. Waiting for chapter 3.
 
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Thank you for the complete chapter 2 that was really hot , especially the lake scene with Ms J (If Gordon is not drugged) It was the best scene of M J and also Alina scenes ofcourse although I dislike the idea of your partner, It may have been a good idea if you fucked Alina as Jason's (MC) apperance infront of Harold instead of using the appearance of Lucious then kill Harold after or steal away Alina then make her your wife :) . I really really like this game, youre the one performing the NTR instead of the one being cuckolded
I agree with your sentiment, I wished we didn't fuck Alina in Lucious form.
 

Ljubovsky

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Thank you for the complete chapter 2 that was really hot , especially the lake scene with Ms J (If Gordon is not drugged) It was the best scene of M J and also Alina scenes ofcourse although I dislike the idea of your partner, It may have been a good idea if you fucked Alina as Jason's (MC) apperance infront of Harold instead of using the appearance of Lucious then kill Harold after or steal away Alina then make her your wife :) . I really really like this game, youre the one performing the NTR instead of the one being cuckolded
I thought that it will help spice things up a bit by not havin' always the same male model in every scene...obviously many people doesn't like it, so i thought of some ways to make this type of events a little bit more "open" in Chapter 3...
I like the story and how it's developed. There are no great maps to cover and not much grind. The renders are also very good. After the two chapters was eager to continue playing.
The only thing that down me is how the MC treats women. I know that gradually he's being corrupted, but that doesn't mean he becomes an asshole. And it's not a thing that only see in this game. It seems that to have good sex, we must treat all women whore, slut or similar, doesn't matter if a second before we were a good guy, kind and considerate.
Except for that detail, it's a good game. Waiting for chapter 3.
You're right...i overdid it with the "bitch slut whore" thing in Chapter 2...
I'll try and mix it up a little in the future!

Thank you both for your kind words and the feedback!
 
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