VN Ren'Py Onhold Open Wounds [v1.0a] [BLACK VOID]

[darkvelevt]

Two hotfixes, but the error is still there. If you choose "Win" then error.

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Hello everyone!

I have fixed some issues with the code. I have fixed a code in Laura's date and Chloe's scene.

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*Unzip the file inside the folder named "game" and overwrite when asked.

Enjoy!

 

[PenguinFuhrer]

Just thought I'd jump in on the discussion of the intro being Batman;
I just started it up and it's basically The Flash from CW without the superpowers, not Batman(with the exception of the parents' deaths).
"Foster dad" taking the MC in is even a cop literally called Joe with a daughter that MC is in love with/has a crush on. Even has the fellow cop nicknamed "Officer pretty boy" that I assume is gonna "steal" Iri-, I mean Zoe, from the MC until later in the story.

 

[darkvelevt]

Just thought I'd jump in on the discussion of the intro being Batman;
I just started it up and it's basically The Flash from CW without the superpowers, not Batman(with the exception of the parents' deaths).
"Foster dad" taking the MC in is even a cop literally called Joe with a daughter that MC is in love with/has a crush on. Even has the fellow cop nicknamed "Officer pretty boy" that I assume is gonna "steal" Iri-, I mean Zoe, from the MC until later in the story.

So what? All of these AVNs are fictional and there are hardly any original story out there. Most stories have been taken either by movies, TV Series or books. The game doesn't have to have original story to be good

 

[PenguinFuhrer]

So what? All of these AVNs are fictional and there are hardly any original story out there. Most stories have been taken either by movies, TV Series or books. The game doesn't have to have original story to be good

Of course not. I'm all for taking inspiration here and there, but this was just a bit much for me with it almost being an exact copy of the story/background even down to some names.
Some of the best work out there, be it books, games, movies, etc, are inspired by others' to the point of some parts being "copied", but usually not to this level :3

 

[iDontPayForPorn]

Seems interesting enough, I'll give it a go once it's finished.

 

[dacris69]

This has to be one of the ugliest MCs ive seen; i mean the vanilla face of this preset is already ugly, but the dev went a level up.

 

[DevinHesi]

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Hello everyone!

Clearly Chloe won the poll , so here we are.

Chloe's special set is out. The full set contains 7 full HD renders.

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Hope you all like it.

Enjoy!

 

[tmu500]

While the story is not original, the render looks OK. It just that it is a bit dull (story telling) and hard to get engage and root for the characters.

 

[Tuatha Dé]

I'm just checking the game, I don't want the dev to take it wrong but seeing the first image I think there are some bad proportions, the girl's head seems small (a little) and the hand too big or maybe it's the effect of the arm? (I don't know if it has already been mentioned)

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[BagelzAndStuff]

I'm just checking the game, I don't want the dev to take it wrong but seeing the first image I think there are some bad proportions, the girl's head seems small (a little) and the hand too big or maybe it's the effect of the arm? (I don't know if it has already been mentioned)

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Yeah.. not gonna lie, I have to agree there.

Again, I dunno if it's just my own perception either, but the size of her head does look a tad bit disproportionate in comparison to her body(?) especially if you take into consideration the size of her hands too. It's not OVERLY wonky though!.. It's mostly kinda just like a "if you pay attention to it" situation. No hate

BUT, as I said, it might only be my own perception of her. Not actuality, mkay? I'm not bashing the model(s) or the work the dev put into the game, at all. I can still look past it, ya know? It's just my own opinion.

Plz don't come for me lolol.....

Ooh ooh ooh!! I think it might just be that slide?? I mean, if you look at the second preview picture on the main page (the one with her in the tennis outfit) she looks good. I kinda forgot about that one lolol

 

[Tuatha Dé]

Yeah.. not gonna lie, I have to agree there.

Again, I dunno if it's just my own perception either, but the size of her head does look a tad bit disproportionate in comparison to her body(?) especially if you take into consideration the size of her hands too. It's not OVERLY wonky though!.. It's mostly kinda just like a "if you pay attention to it" situation. No hate

BUT, as I said, it might only be my own perception of her. Not actuality, mkay? I'm not bashing the model(s) or the work the dev put into the game, at all. I can still look past it, ya know? It's just my own opinion.

Plz don't come for me lolol.....

Ooh ooh ooh!! I think it might just be that slide?? I mean, if you look at the second preview picture on the main page (the one with her in the tennis outfit) she looks good. I kinda forgot about that one lolol

yes that one looks good but in that specific image I think the dev should take into account those possible slips with the proportions for the future.

 

[D4rkK1ng]

In my opinion, its a quite good start..
The visuals are very good the lis are great too and the batman opening had me chuckling
but for me it would be much better if zoe didnt have that boyfriend.....srsly it was a huge let down for me (is it too much to ask the childhood friend li to be a virgin these days is almost impossible to find one)
nonetheless its very promising VN so im gonna keep an eye for future updates.

 

[MiltonPowers]

In my opinion, its a quite good start..
The visuals are very good the lis are great too and the batman opening had me chuckling
but for me it would be much better if zoe didnt have that boyfriend.....srsly it was a huge let down for me (is it too much to ask the childhood friend li to be a virgin these days is almost not possible to find one)
nonetheless its very promising VN so im gonna keep an eye for future updates.

I didn't mind so much she had a boyfriend, but she lied to MC about it. There supposed to be besties and she straight out lied to his face. Not too mention he's a corrupt douche.

But then I met Laura, and I don't really care what Zoe does anymore.

 

[Ghostrider23]

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[alive89]

This can only mean one thing, the game's abandoned

 

[WolverineCTX]

This can only mean one thing, the game's abandoned

Indeed it is!