VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.5.0] [JDOR]

[Call of Booty]

Leave the boy alone. He is celebrity now. And with his powers and dick size,how he gonna say no? Golden Boy game has less negative comment on MC than this one. Weird.

 

[Family Fun]

I haven't played this yet but are we sure it wouldn't be improved with an incest patch?

 

[Call of Booty]

I haven't played this yet but are we sure it wouldn't be improved with an incest patch?

Read the dev comments on first page

 

[Balduko]

I make characters do things for reasons that might not be revealed until 15 chapters in. Nearly everything I do is intentional. I don't make certain characters super horny because "porn game", I do it for a reason. If you don't like a particular character because of a certain thing they have done or a way they act, maybe something will happen in the future that will make you thing "oh... I probably shouldn't have been mad about that". Maybe sometimes things are not always as they seem.
Please just bear with me and don't write it off because of one particular character's behaviour, because you might be wrong about it. Just saying.

I didn't know Kojima started making porn games.

 

[Timesucker]

The game is made well and is a porn version of X-men. Don't delve into the behind-the-scenes stuff. It's just entertainment.
Jacquesdor has put a lot of effort into his game; just enjoy the experience.

I see the game got swarmed by the angry-at-woman for their own shortcoming horde.
Self-improvement is a real thing, guys. Having good hygiene is a good first step.

 

[ufsmt]

I'm being suspicious of Parker...

Her 20 questions when you get back sure sounded like she was fishing for info, more than just being curious.

 

[BagelzAndStuff]

Bruhhh.. I fuckin love the random ass humor thrown in here.. Talking about something kinda serious and then just fuckin BAM sex joke right outta left field

Not gonna lie, my absolute favorite line in the entire game so far would be "Jesus Christ Mom! I'm getting flashbacks to my birth!" Like, I'm sorry, but that had me fuckin wheezing!!

 

[motseer]

Her 20 questions when you get back sure sounded like she was fishing for info, more than just being curious.

I picked up on that also... she's hiding something...

 

[micojive]

She's not his mother.

Dev has already said he doesn't want to make an incest game so he made it very clear she wasn't related to him.

I mean, the dev also said he wanted her to very much so be a motherly figure, someone he looked up to and treated with respect in the same way a mother would, and that patreon is the reason for the change. Whether someone wants to argue that blood relations are the only incest is whatever, but she was clearly a "motherly" figure when writing and clearly part of the taboo.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Eh, I liked it. It was fun, for me at least.

Spoiler: some inconsistencies and other tidbits

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But overall, yeah, I enjoyed it. Seems like an interesting story so far. It's quite a pickle the MC is in. Finally manifesting his power, only to find out he can't tell anyone about it. So, he has to keep acting like a normie (the bottom of the barrel) to keep his secret. It's going to be a rough road, but it could be interesting at least to see how it goes.

Only thing that really bugged me, was how it forces you to be interested in someone, whether you, as the player, are not. Just really pushes Parker on you constantly and other girls as well. Just feels uncomfortable when the player themselves might not be interested in someone, but the game just keeps shoving them in your face and telling you that you have to be interested in them.

Either way, best of luck with your game and thanks.

 

[Rohse]

Eh, I liked it. It was fun, for me at least.

Spoiler: some inconsistencies and other tidbits

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It's a fault in the code. It's looking for a value = yes, which doesn't exist. Later on it searches for the correct value = true and shows the correct dialogue.

If you can use the 0x52 universal ren'py modder then you can see it when the split happens and force the correct dialogue in the first place. But I'm assuming that the dev will fix it at some point

 

[Avaron1974]

Wild theory time but I don't think Parker is a love interest.

I've just gone over a part of a conversation she has with the MC when he gets back home and it's all very suspicious.

So 3 things. Either it was a shapeshifter pretending to be her, she was under someones control or she's actually the antagonist.

Why?

I hear no one ask.

Well you lovely people. The person she claims to love like a son and the offspring to 2 of her closest friends survives an attack and manifests his power ..... yet her questions all revolve around the Sisterhood HQ. Where it is, what goes on there, who lives there etc.. Oddly specific questions that seem to be probing for a weakness.

That on top of a really weird look she has on her face when she says all funding is going to her cure. Seems set to target the Sisterhood and remove their powers.

I could very well be reading too much into that as I tend to do but she just seems very sus to me.

 

[Daddy-S]

Wild theory time but I don't think Parker is a love interest.

Didnt dev already say she will be avoidable, cant remember if it was said specifically she was a LI but she has to be if she is avoidable?

 

[marvelfreak3000]

I think I will wait a few more updates before I determine if I want to download this or not.

 

[JJJ84]

Just finished the update and Jacquesdor congrats on another great update.


The level of detail put into the characterization and the banter & chemistry between the characters continues to impress me, and I'm finding the game to be soooooo enjoyable - this one's currently one of my favorites.

Following are my thoughts/questions/ramble (warning, long-ass text ):

Spoiler

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[MrBenny]

So you are one of those people who for example, if your momma on your birthday will shamelessly flirt in front of you with random waiter and then ditch you alone to get fucked by him in the toilet and you will count it as her being a classy woman instead of whore?) Got you dude, have a nice day

Hmm...the image below shows the daughter is even calling her Mom out that she is acting like a ho.

Spoiler: The Daughter's take on how her mom is talking about other men...

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But what also concerns me is Evelyn's ability, that she just has to just touch a person and can then partake in a dream that will allow her to experience sexual pleasure from. (I wonder why MC hasn't picked up that ability yet in the story...considering he did with all the other powers right away?)

For me, that ability kind of degrades her character, and even more after her reply to Riley about liking her style...of being with more than one guy. I know that isn't what she meant, but it is what Evelyn meant. (An odd power for sure....kind of sounds close to the NTR'ish line, a love interest that can enter into any person's subconscious dream state. Then can choose to participate and feel all their sexual pleasures they have, just like it was happening to her. So I guess Evelyn has been having lots of mind sex with many other dudes and girls, before MC did? I wonder if she will be doing the dream sex regularly while being with the MC? I hope we are not forced to see it if it happens.)

And I noticed that two main love interests mentioned or shown some interest in being with more than one guy at a time...the gang bang porno which Moon knows the name of it right away, and Evelyn who liked Riley's comment about many guys, which doesn't seem too classy to me...if your not into sharing or sluts.

Spoiler: Riley conversation

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Anyways, just some observations while playing the lite mode version choice. I'm enjoying the story, though I hope we see the MC become more of a dominate man with the girls, and less of a sub.

Regards.

 

[malridoo]

The relationship between Parker and MC is like.... that HOT pornstars that you want to fuck but the only way to enjoy her is just to watch her fuck others . Sorry, couldn't find another way to describe it ).

 

[Avaron1974]

If flight is a rare ability

In one clip if you watch news on MC's tv in his bedroom it shows certain countries that have been purposed for certain powers.

France is the country full of people with flying powers. While it isn't common, it isn't rare either.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Wi-fi NTR bois, you heard it here first!
This is like those jokes where the wife gets mad at her husband because she dreamed that he cheated on her.

You won’t believe it if I tell you how angry my wife has been for a week because she saw in a dream how I fucked all her girlfriends...
I’m trying to forget this incident, but it reminded me again because of this showdown

 

[JJJ84]

In one clip if you watch news on MC's tv in his bedroom it shows certain countries that have been purposed for certain powers.

France is the country full of people with flying powers. While it isn't common, it isn't rare either.

I did watch all the scenes in MC's tv before but I must have totally forgotten about that.

Though it does make me wonder, assuming France is the country filled with Supes with flying powers, what stops them from being the Superior nation out of them all?
Do other nations have flight countermeasures if they ever go to war due to conflict?
Perhaps Jacquesdor could answer this one also.

Perhaps it's the MTF whom have such measures and supplies each nation a countermeasure for each Supes power which are far too OP. I dunno (me just throwing theories out there ).