VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.5.0] [JDOR]

[Elduriel]

It's a weird one.

She has love interest chemistry with the MC and an awesome sense of humour yet we'll never know what she looks like.

hmm I wouldn't be so sure of that. Latest chapter made a mention of her situation, maybe they can sort out something down the line. Would be a waste of a character otherwise. There is not a lot of interaction with her yet, but she seems like a cool girl.

 

[sunqian3000]

0.3 is much more interesting than the previous two versions , good work.

 

[Avaron1974]

The only downside for me is some of the stuff with Emerald.

I'm okay with dom stuff during sex but outside of sex is a bit much.

I also found a bug. After having sex with Emerald the MC tells Moonsong he wasn't feeling it and just masturbated into her hand.

 

[OnlyFriend]

should be the secret to unlocking his hidden powers is sex with his sister!

agree !!

 

[Jacquesdor]

I also found a bug. After having sex with Emerald the MC tells Moonsong he wasn't feeling it and just masturbated into her hand.

Yep thank you. Between 0.2.0 and 0.3.0 I changed the emeraldisli flag from a True/False to a "Yes"/"No"... with some code at the start of CH3 to change anyone who was a True to a "Yes" and vice versa. But I stupidly missed some lines where that variable is still set to a True or False or where it's still looking for a True or False.

I'll fix for next update.

 

[MrBenny]

It's a weird one.

She has love interest chemistry with the MC and an awesome sense of humour yet we'll never know what she looks like.

Well she could be Japanese, because of what was said about her parents...I believe.

 

[Jacquesdor]

Well she could be Japanese, because of what was said about her parents...I believe.

I mean, she could be. But no... Japan (Osaka specially) is where invizzies get shipped off to when they hit 22.

 

[MrBenny]

How much anal content will be involved in the sex scenes? Will it be a vag then ass choice, or will that kink dominate some girl scenes, where ass sex will be only offered with them?

I'm not an anal fan, so I was wondering IF that choice is enabled...how will that content will be handled? Will there be choices to pick ass or pussy sex (one or the other...or both), and can MC decline it as it's offered (situational choice)?

Regards.

Spoiler: The ass unlock choice...

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[Avaron1974]

Yeah i'm sure the vanilla players Will wait the story to redeem a whore who banged some random loser on his son birthday lmao. Dev are You for real?

She's not his mother.

Dev has already said he doesn't want to make an incest game so he made it very clear she wasn't related to him.

 

[MrBenny]

I mean, she could be. But no... Japan (Osaka specially) is where invizzies get shipped off to when they hit 22.

Oh, sorry....I was skimming through a replay, because of the story changes. I was trying to avoid potential issues that could happen to my previous saves. Thanks for the quick reply, though.

Regards.

 

[metamorphMP]

I don't care how hot the otehr girls are, Amber will always be best girl .... even though we can't see her.

She amuses me.

I think I might have developed a new fetish... I've got a thing for an invisible girl

But, yeah, I am hyped about any new content with Amber. My absolute fav in this game.

I remember there was a poll on patreon about the best LI, and Amber was a 3rd one, or even a 2nd one.
Considering that we didn't even get to see her so far - I would say it's quite a success.
I find her a very interesting character too.

More Amber focus coming Chapter 4

Sounds awesome

 

[Jacquesdor]

How much anal content will be involved in the sex scenes? Will it be a vag then ass choice, or will that kink dominate some girl scenes, where ass sex will be only offered with them?

I'm not an anal fan, so I was wondering IF that choice is enabled...how will that content will be handled? Will there be choices to pick ass or pussy sex (one or the other...or both), and can MC decline it as it's offered (situational choice)?

Regards.

Spoiler: The ass unlock choice...

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I've yet to write any anal-only scenes, and currently don't have plans to either. Not saying its not an option in the future, just haven't thought of it. So at present, every scene where ass is an option, pussy is too.

 

[Call of Booty]

Hmm,my game end after chapter 2 when Ghostraven wake them up. Should't be a chapter 3 out?
EDIT: Now is 0.3 version on PIXELDRAIN. Earlier was 0.2

 

[Sennistrasz]

I had a quick skim through in case I missed something but I couldn't find this. You should only be talking about Evelyn being upset if you didn't turn Moonsong down. Feel free to shoot me the exact part though so I can triple check.

For some reason I had declinemoonsong = 0 when I loaded up for the update. I've restarted just in case.

 

[MrBenny]

Hmm,my game end after chapter 2 when Ghostraven wake them up. Should't be a chapter 3 out?

Check your game version...I noticed Pixeldrain still had v0.2 instead of the v.0.3.

 

[markblazes]

I don't comment on this site much, but I just have to.

Good GOD, This came outta nowhere, I was not expecting much since the first release was in December or something. This was REALLY AWESOME. You got me HOOKED, this is on PAR with Chasing Sunsets for me when I first tried that game out.

And EVELYN, gah damn! She is already one of my favorite VN character! Really great job here!

 

[Jericho85]

 

[Damien112]

Might be just me but this felt shorter than the previous 2 updates, content wise I liked it tho. Nothing more to say than the dev should keep up the good work, ill be back in 3 or so months to check out the next release.

 

[Uller the Hunter]

People in this thread have really gotta chill with throwing around words like "whore." It's fine if you dislike a character's behavior, but you sound like the worst kind of incel loser when you talk like that.

 

[Jericho85]

Sometimes it makes me wonder, maybe it's just 1 person, or a few at maximum, who keeps spamming under different accounts.

Always the same, almost identical narrative (cuckolding, cuckolding jada jada), and after every update it goes again... and again... like under some scripts or whatever.... I might be wrong of course.

I think it's good that Dev cut all connections to incest in a game, this way if some furious fan will report his patreon account - he will be safe.

I don't know man. I once saw one of those types literally lose his shit in another VN thread when he found out that an LI didn't save her virginity for the MC after he ghosted her for 5 years. Shit was hilarious and we all laughed at him. Good times.